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[janMamaus]

[Intro: H.E.R.]

Ayy, I'd do it for you all day

a, ali tenpo suno la mi pali e ona tawa sina.

[Verse 1: Ed Sheeran]

I been away on the road for a little while

Today, I'm headin' home to make my baby smile

She hates it when I am over a thousand miles

Away, and I'm not there to pick up when she dials, yeah

She's always lookin back, and sayin' "There was a time

When you would be around every single night

Now, I'm not sayin' that I want another guy

But I need you here for the good times and the bad times"

Yeah, the pullin' out my hair, gettin' mad times

Not just the when I'm in your bed on my back times

'Cause baby, every time I call, it's a bad time

Just want you here on your own

tenpo pini lili la, mi weka lon nasin

tenpo suni ni, mi kama tawa tomo mi mute tan ni: mi pana pilin pona e jan olin

ona pilin ike tan ni: mi weka mute mute

mi lon ala la, mi ken toki ala e ona

tenpo ali lukin monsi en toki e ni: 

tenpo pini la, sina lon tenpo pimeja ali 

mi toki ala e ni: mi wile e ante mije

taso, 

a mi weka e linja me la, mi pilin utala la 

mi unpa ala e sina la, mi wile ni: sina lon lon tenpo pona en tenpo jaki tan ni:

mi wile toki e sina tenpo ali. tenpo ali li jaki tawa sina.

mi wile ni taso: sina lon poka mi poka jan ante ala

[janMamaus]

***a, tenpo suno ali la mi pali e ona tawa sina.