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On 16 Tháng Giêng, 20:42, PHƯƠNG HOÀNG LAN
danhpt
1.Most important room? => Bed room
Home => where to live after work : need relax.
We sleep 8h a day => 1/3 the life
Good sleep => healthy, help new day
In my opinion, bed room is the most important room in my house. This
is because bed room is where we spend most of our time to relax, it
make us a good sleep and we’ll healthy after this.
The first, bed room is the best place to relax, after a hard work day,
we’r all tired . Then we need
somewhere comfortable our self -> it’s our bed room.
The second, we spend about 8h a day sleeping, it is 1/3 the time we
live. It mean, if we live our life 60 years, it’ll take us 20 year
just to sleep, a big time huh?. That’s why we should take care our bed
room to make a better life.
The third, a pretty bed room give us a good sleep, and in next morning
day : we’ll healthy and ready to new day work . Healthy make us
joyful, make smile and happy, and then success in life.
If you care about your life : just go home and make your bed room
better, decorate it more beautiful change it in your dream way.
danhpt
When ? 1983 (first TCP/IP protocol)
Change what?
-The way people get knowledge
-The way people communicate
-The way people make business
-The way people exchange information
-The way people work, relax, connect,…
if someone ask me : what’s the great change of the twenthieth century,
I’ll answer in bit of time : it’s Internet. Internet has changed the
life of human, it has changed the way people learn, the way people
communicate, exchange information, make business…. it has changed
everything.
The first, Internet is a great resource to get knowledge. It’s where
we find material, learn everything, where we can ask question, discuss
on our problem. If you have a question, just search it on google. ^^
The second, Internet has changed the way people communicate. Before
Internet, if you in US, and you want to send a letter to your girl
friend in VietNam, it’ll take about 2 weeks, even 2 months (may be at
that time, your girl hase already forgotten you ^^). But with
Internet, just send your girl a mail, and in a day, your girl can read
sweet words from you, and it’ll make her happy.
The third, Internet has also changed the way people work, make
business and exchange information. Example : our google group : it
where we can share our thought, where we discuss problem, where we
learn from each-other.
Hi, I still have many to talk about Internet, but I think it’s
enough.
Just say a work of a famous people (I forgot his name ^^) :
“with a computer connecting to Internet, you have the world”.
Nguyen Thanh Bach
1) The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion?
Development of science and technology makes our world great change in the twentieth century. New inventions such like atomic bomb, penicillin, television and especially are computer have a big influence on our life nowadays. Thanks to the birth of the computer, our life is now faster, more exciting, and more convenient than before.
Processing speed of the computer is extremely fast. Without computer, we can’t solve complex problems with billion and billion calculation. It only takes a little time that human’s brain is impossible with absolutely correct. The computer saves our time very good.
It is always exciting when we use the computer. For instance, if we surf web by computer that are connected with Internet, we can immediately find out whatever we want because it contains tremendous information about any aspect of knowledge. Moreover, we also can playing games, watching films, listening music with the multimedia function of the computer.
Nothing can beat the convenience of the computer. We can communicate with our friends, our family at wherever in the world by video chatting via the computer connect Internet. It is faster, high quality and especially are free if compare with other device like phone or post-mail.
Undoubtedly, the computer is great invention of human. It makes our lives become more comfortable than any other invention. It is symbol to mark a new period, that is high tech period.
2) What do you
consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more
important to you than any room? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your opinion?
The house usually has a lot of rooms such as kitchen, bedroom, bathroom, living room, store room. Each room has their own feature. For example, in kitchen family cooking and eating together, in bedroom people sleep at night, in living room people can watching TV, drinking tea and converse with others. If I myself can build a house, I think the most important room is reading room.
First of all, reading room is a room where I will spend a lot of time on day for activities like learning, reading books, listening music… I can put my favorite books in here and enjoy with them. I have a computer here, which helps me during my education process. So the room is place that I prepare for my future career.
Secondly, I enjoy this room because I will have my own personal time in here and it’s possible to work and study whenever I like, not disturbing other relatives. In additional, if I am stressful in working or learning, I can listen to music, surf web for relaxation.
In conclusion, the reading room always plays a important role in both my improvement knowledge and my entertainment. That’s why reading room is the most important for me.
Quyen Nguyen Le
Thuy Linh Ha
What room do you consider to be the most important in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any room?
After one day work, everybody wants to come back home. But which part of the house is the most attractive? In my opinion, that is kitchen, so I think it is the most important room in a house.
Firstly, that is a place to prepare meals for your family. Everyone knows the importance of diet. Meals provide nutrients for the body. Ì meals are not nutritious enough, no one can be healthy. Therefore, cooking a good dinner is one way I take care of my family everyday. I’m very happy to see my father, my mother and my brother have delicious dishes.
Secondly, kitchen makes us closer to people that we love. Nowaday, life gets busier, so we often go out for a meal. But what will happen if you never have dinner at home? You won’t feel that is your really family. Kitchen is not only a room but also where the family reunion. During the mealtime, we can talk about what happen on that day, our family will listen, share, and give you some advices. You can feel the attention, and your heart gets warm.
So I always make the kitchen comfortable and nice. I try to make it always clean, tidy, and impressive.
Because the kitchen can show my care of my family and make us closer together, I think it is the most important room is a house.
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The twentieth century saw great
change. In your opinion, what is
one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century?
There were many changes occurred in the twentieth century. In my opinion, the most memorable of which is detected nuclear reactions.
Firstly, nuclear reaction is used in the second world war. It creates a giant energy, thousands more than chemical reactions. Therefore, some people have used it to manufacture bombs. Two nuclear bombs were thrown down, that killed so many people. It was a terrible disaster in human history but that event changed the world by ended the war.
But today, nuclear reaction is used to peace purpose. People use its energy to build many nuclear electric factory. It affect the environment less than hydropower or thermoelectric.
Invention of nuclear reaction makes the world changes, but people must know how to use it to good purpose
Cat
this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Outline:
I. Introduction:
- Introduce the room I like best
+ The origin of the room
+ Describe and give the reason why to love this room in general.
II. Body:
- It gives a pleasant emotion.
- I have grown up and been mature from this room.
- It is full of knowledge and beauty
III. Conclusion:
- Confirm the emotion to the room
Essay:
My house was built when I was in the first form. I still remember, at
the beginning, it was just a small house with a bed room, a living
room and a kitchen. My parents and I shared the bedroom together, in
the evening; my mother often told me a lot of stories before I fell in
to sleep.
When I was in secondary school, my parents decided to build more
floors because my family has four members and we need more rooms. My
small bedroom now turns in to a reading room which is full of books,
comics, newspapers and magazines. Each member in my family has their
own shelf with the books they like. I love this room very much.
First of all, it is my world of childhood. This room was the place I
was closest to my parents. When I was small, I often lied in the bed,
looked at the ceiling and imagined about the stories with prince and
princess. It was really a pleasant emotion to me.
When the bedroom became reading room, it is still the room I like the
most. In the weekend, my family often read books together in reading
room and discuss about interesting topics in newspapers. My mother
likes cooking so she has a collection of cooking books. I love my
mother and father, they teach me a lot. I have grown up and been
mature from this room.
Although my family’s reading room is small, it has its own seduction
to everybody, because of not only the full of knowledge but also its
beauty. It is a clean and pure place with green walls and white window
screen. From this room’s window I can see the garden with full of
flowers and fruit. If anybody wants to eat they can reach their hand
out of the window, they can have one delicious red apple.
My reading room has connected closely not only to me but also my
family for a long time and it will exist forever in my heart.
The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one
change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use
specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
Outline:
I. Introduction:
- Introduce the change that should be remember about the twentieth
century
- The reason why choose this change in general
II. Body:
- Internet connects people
- Internet shares knowledge
- Internet is a fast and economical mean of communication
- Internet makes everything more easily
III. Conclusion:
- Confirm the benefits of internet
Essay:
There were many important changes in the 20th century. But that one
stood out of the rest was the development of Internet technology.
Internet technology has brought to the human being both economic and
social benefits. Therefore, Internet is the most important change for
me.
Internet is a technology that allows individuals computers to connect
with each other all over the world, information sharing and
communicating have become easier.
Internet is like a large library from which people can access and
exploit lots of information they need. This kind of electronic library
consists of many informative web sites in all fields such as society,
economy, culture and politics. Internet is a really useful tool for
the purpose of teaching and studying.
Internet is a fast and economical mean of communication. Just by
clicking on “Send”, one person can send e-mail to his/her friends who
live at a very long distance and his/her friends can instantly receive
this mail. Moreover, the development of Internet technology nowadays
allows us to organize video conference which means that we do not need
a physical meeting; participants may sit at various places in the
world while the meeting takes place.
One more important benefit that Internet has brought to the human is
the economic development. There is a new kind of business with the
support of Internet, called e-biz. People nowadays can stay at home
and go shopping from e-shops. To make payment, they use e-bank’s
accounts. Everything is convenient and economical.
I can’t think of any other change that bring us the convenience and
usefulness as much as Internet has done for us. We are thankful for
the advance of Internet technology.
On 17 Tháng Giêng, 22:36, Thuy Linh Ha <hathuylinh...@gmail.com>
wrote:
> *What room do you consider to be the most important in a house? Why is this
> room more important to you than any room?*
ThaiSon Luong
These are my essays. I think it’s very bad. J
Topic #139: What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion?
There are many rooms in my house, such as living room, dining room, bed room, etc. In my opinion, bed room is the most important room in my house. This point of view is based on the following reasons.
First of all, bed room is my private area, I can do everything I want in it. I can watch movie, listen to music, sing a song in my bed room, so I won’t disturb any other people in my family. Here is also the room that I work and study everyday, I can do it at any time I feel good.
Second, as you know, every people use one-third of their life to sleep, where people usually sleep. It is the bed room. I’m also not different from another people. If I have nice sleeps, I will have more energy to work, to study, to do everything. Therefore this is another reason why my bed room is the most important room in my house.
The last and the most important of my bed room, is that I can relax there. It is a place for me to cool down when I am angry or stress after a long day work.
In conclusion, if you want to be free, want to feel peace or want to be alone to think about somethings, you should go to your bed room, because in there you can do things above. In my mind, once again, my bed room is the best room in my house.
Topic #159: The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twenthieth century? Use specific reasons anh examples to support your opinion?
We had had many changes in the twentieth century, much more than any centuries before. The change that should be remembered about the twentieth century, from my own point of view, is the invention of the internet. I will explain the reasons in detail below.
First of all, the internet is a very large library, you can find anything you want on in. For example, when you don’t understand something that your teacher said, you can google it via internet and you can read the answer of many people from everywhere on the world, may be it will satisfy you or not, but at least you will know some more information about your problem. Information sharing and communicating also have become more easier. People can upload and download documents from the internet.
Second, the internet have created new forms of social interaction. People can communate with each other on networking social, add friends, friends of friends, and sometimes meet again your friends that you’ve lost contact for a long time. Now, people don’t have to go out for shopping or buying, we can stay at home and purchase everything by the support of the internet.
In conclusion, the twentieth century has brought many facilities to the current generation. People can learn, work and find everything more quickly and more efficienct. The internet also provide many new services for people’s. So with me, the internet is the first thing we should remember in the twentieth century.
danhpt
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