This nice person on the Writing Forums also said this about Daddy Pickup:
Sounds like a sweet, low-key idea, but it’s pretty safe and predictable for a Bluey story. The show’s charm often comes from its clever humour and emotional depth, so maybe add a unique a bit of playful chaos to make it stand out. Otherwise, it’s fine, but it might feel a bit generic compared to the show’s usual creativity. Keep pushing for something more memorable!