"Shell Game" timeline continues

[Josh R.]

I did chapters 16-18 tonight. Here's what I learned:

8/4/03: Sarah and Michael have "unprotected" sex for the first time
(Sarah is on the pill).

8/13/03: Sarah observes Michael's fanfic course for the first time,
and her jealousy earns her a punishment in the classroom.

10/18/03: Michael decrees that Sarah shall have no punishments for 13 days.

10/16/08: Sarah begins noticing certain behaviors in Jaime that
concern her (Sarah).

10/31/08: Zach and Allison come to visit. Allison hits on Sarah and
is punished very severely by Zach for doing so. It makes Sarah
uncomfortable (being hit on by her friend, and Allison is her friend).

11/1/08: Sarah, Michael, Allison, and Zach go to a BDSM club.
Allison plays with Zach and with some of the other people present.

11/2/08: Zach and Allison depart.

Getting to the dramatic tension now. And it's getting more and more
difficult to switch from present to past, given the sheer size of the
spreadsheet. Maybe I should've done each page as a separate year, but
I probably would've gotten confused.

And yes, I do plan to share this once I finish it.

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J (theli...@gmail.com)

"Tell the truth. But live a life so improbable
that it is not to be believed." -Aleister Crowley