whale r u final presentation in drop box

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Monique Park

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May 17, 2012, 6:53:04 PM5/17/12
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it's in MTP folder..
hope this works for everyone.

momo
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Monique Park
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Carnegie Mellon University



Monchu Chen

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May 17, 2012, 8:17:08 PM5/17/12
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couple of comments

1. typography needs improvement (maybe it's on my machine
2. s-35, left and right arms
3. s-38, the experience is ended
4. s-43, smaller trash and larger trash switched (?)
5. sound design (?)

Monique Park

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May 17, 2012, 8:25:21 PM5/17/12
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Thanks monchu for the prompt reply.

few hours ago, sergi stopped by our project room and gave us really good feedback as well.

typography must be shown default on your mac because i'm using fonts i downloaded from the web, and i believe you saw them in the afternoon, so don't worry.

I fixed all the small errors you pointed out, good calls.

I also added a slide for a sound design in the end.

Has ashlyn seen this? I want to make sure she does, because a lot has changed in the game design slides.
Monchu, if you can please show these to her so that she can rehearse.

Any other comments, just let me know.

And let there be a miracle...

momo
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