post campaign

[Emily]

I've rewritten the learning component tonight, it's about a page and a
half. Tomorrow I'll work on the other section, since that should be
more the bulk of the paper and have a good amount of stats and
information for the client in it.

[杨杉]

Thank you Emily.
I will finish my part late tonight.
Perhaps you can go over the whole paper tomorrow and check if there is
any apparent problem.
PS. I still haven't hear any feedback from Chris.

Shan

2011/4/7 Emily <broz...@msu.edu>:

[Chris Harper]

All I am here, sorry. Will attempt to do some work on this tomorrow or
over the weekend. /ch

[杨杉]

Hi. Chris. Nice to see your reply.
The paper is due on Friday so can you try to help to build up the rest
part of the report as I mentioned in the previous mail?
Thanks a lot.

Shan

[Chris Harper]

Wow, okay, sooner than I thought. Apologies. Will take a look tomorrow
mid-day. Thanks for bringing this to my attention.

[qia...@msu.edu]

Hi all,
I 've added the "Executive Summary" part and a few graphics and charts to our report. Feel free to revise it or discuss with me. I think we are supposed to submit lots of data we have about our campaign, according to the student guide.

So there are only conclusion and recommendation part in "Industrial Component" section to be finished. I think our team had better all contribute to them and give collective ideas to recommend. Mine thoughts are already in the Executive Summary--conclusion and recommendation.

Let's finish the report together! Thanks~

QQ

[Chris Harper]

Driving to grand rapids now will spend some time with this when I arrive. Thanks to all!

Sent from my iPhone

[Chris Harper]

All, just a heads up I am in the document, working and editing on it now.
Let me know if you want me to take a specific look at anything while I'm
doing this. Will try and add my $0.02 where it's needed. Hope everyone is
having a great day. /ch

[Emily Brozovic]

Editing/writing the Industrial Component needs to be done, as well as what Qi mentioned. 

[Chris Harper]

All, I've added the industry component section as well as edited all the text that occurred before that section.

I have to run to another engagement but let me know if there's something else I need to take a look at. Thanks… /ch

[qia...@msu.edu]

Hi Emily and Shan,
I've moved some part of Chris's into your guy's industrial component body, such as conclusions and recommendations. Feel free to edit and format. I think our report may be a little bit over 8 pages.

I'll be back late tonight.

Qi

Quoting Chris Harper <ch...@charperimage.com>:

> All, I've added the industry component section as well as edited all
> the text that occurred before that section.
>
> I have to run to another engagement but let me know if there's
> something else I need to take a look at. Thanks… /ch
>

> From: Emily Brozovic <broz...@msu.edu<mailto:broz...@msu.edu>>
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> Date: Fri, 8 Apr 2011 16:34:42 -0400
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> Subject: Re: post campaign
>
> Editing/writing the Industrial Component needs to be done, as well as
> what Qi mentioned.
>
>
>
> On Apr 8, 2011, at 4:30 PM, Chris Harper wrote:
>
> All, just a heads up I am in the document, working and editing on it now.
> Let me know if you want me to take a specific look at anything while I'm
> doing this. Will try and add my $0.02 where it's needed. Hope everyone is
> having a great day. /ch
>
>
> On 4/8/11 2:23 PM, "Chris Harper"

> <ch...@charperimage.com<mailto:ch...@charperimage.com>> wrote:
>
> Driving to grand rapids now will spend some time with this when I arrive.
> Thanks to all!
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>

> On Apr 8, 2011, at 2:15 PM, "qia...@msu.edu<mailto:qia...@msu.edu>"

> <qia...@msu.edu<mailto:qia...@msu.edu>> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
> I 've added the "Executive Summary" part and a few graphics and charts
> to our report. Feel free to revise it or discuss with me. I think we are
> supposed to submit lots of data we have about our campaign, according to
> the student guide.
>
> So there are only conclusion and recommendation part in "Industrial
> Component" section to be finished. I think our team had better all
> contribute to them and give collective ideas to recommend. Mine thoughts
> are already in the Executive Summary--conclusion and recommendation.
>
> Let's finish the report together! Thanks~
>
> QQ
>
>

> Quoting Chris Harper <ch...@charperimage.com<mailto:ch...@charperimage.com>>:
>
> Wow, okay, sooner than I thought. Apologies. Will take a look tomorrow
> mid-day. Thanks for bringing this to my attention.
>
>
> On 4/7/11 10:18 PM, "杨杉"

> <suiss...@gmail.com<mailto:suiss...@gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Hi. Chris. Nice to see your reply.
> The paper is due on Friday so can you try to help to build up the
> rest
> part of the report as I mentioned in the previous mail?
> Thanks a lot.
>
> Shan
>
> 在 2011年4月7日 下午10:16，Chris Harper

> <ch...@charperimage.com<mailto:ch...@charperimage.com>> 写道：

> All I am here, sorry. Will attempt to do some work on this tomorrow
> or
> over the weekend. /ch
>
>
>
> On 4/7/11 10:15 PM, "杨杉"

> <suiss...@gmail.com<mailto:suiss...@gmail.com>> wrote:
>
> Thank you Emily.
> I will finish my part late tonight.
> Perhaps you can go over the whole paper tomorrow and check if
> there is
> any apparent problem.
> PS. I still haven't hear any feedback from Chris.
>
> Shan
>

> 2011/4/7 Emily <broz...@msu.edu<mailto:broz...@msu.edu>>:

[杨杉]

HI. Well done everyone.
Thanks for all your works.
I will try to add some to the final part tonight.
Wish you all have a nice weekend.

Shan

2011/4/8 <qia...@msu.edu>:

[Emily Brozovic]

Hey Chris, your write up under the Industry Component is good but I'm confused if that is supposed to be its own piece or more integrated with the other parts? The campaign overview starts right after and I wonder if it's too repetitive? We do have 9 pages right now so we need to do some editing. Let me know what you guys thinks.

Emily

[Chris Harper]

The online PDF from google said the industry component should speak to what was outlined at a high level in the overview but in a little more depth. If you think it is too repetitive you are welcome to integrate it into other sections or trim it up. What do you think?

Sent from my iPad

[Emily Brozovic]

It looks like maybe Qi took parts of the beginning and inserted it later in the report? Maybe that's why it seemed repetitive to me. Would you mind reading through it, Chris? I need another set of eyes to look at it at this point.

Thanks,

Emily

[qia...@msu.edu]

Hi all,
I did take part of Chris's and integrate them into Shan's writing. Sorry for not mentioning clearly.

Since"Industrial component"  includs the campaign overview, evolution of strategy, key results and conclusions, and it is not a seperate section. SO I think we can intergrate them. I've done a few paragraphs and would like to know what you guys think?

I did not delete what Chris have added because I would like to know your guys' idea. If you think industrial needs to be developed more, we can use Chris's as further explainations. If you're fine with what it is now, I think we can submit the report.

Thank you all for your contribution!

Qi

[杨杉]

I think we better integrate the parts together.
Since Chris illustrated better in the component part. I think it's OK
to take away the repetitive paragraph in strategy part that I wrote.
What do you think?

Shan

2011/4/8 <qia...@msu.edu>:

>>>>>>> something else I need to take a look at. Thanks... /ch

[qia...@msu.edu]

Great! Can you integrate Chris's into your strategy part?
One more thing, I've changed the format into 1.5 line spacing.
So everyone please try to condense your part and keep the most essential things in our report!

Thanks all!

Qi

[杨杉]

ok.

2011/4/8 <qia...@msu.edu>: