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Quantum Mechanic
Mar 20, 2026, 6:29:45 PMMar 20
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Cosca episode 4: chapter 3 is up on dropbox.
Mike Omelanuk
Mar 21, 2026, 11:28:12 AMMar 21
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I've made suggestions to your chapter 3. No canon issues and no conflicts with Chosen Frozen. There are some suggestions about sentence structure and a few typos.
Suggest that you upload your drafts here as Dropbox doesn't seem to be used by many of us yet.
Mike
On Fri, Mar 20, 2026 at 5:29 PM Quantum Mechanic <whipf...@gmail.com> wrote:
Cosca episode 4: chapter 3 is up on dropbox.
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Quantum Mechanic
Mar 29, 2026, 9:38:23 AM (10 days ago) Mar 29
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BTW - just for kicks I tried out the Dropbox link in the original post using another browser, and without logging into Dropbox. Turns out that you don't have to login to Dropbox to download the file! You can login using your gmail credentials, if they're currently in force, but you don't have to. Just click on the link and dismiss any popups!
fred daddio
Apr 4, 2026, 1:11:13 PM (4 days ago) Apr 4
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Here is my proofread of chapter 3. I found very little to mark up, mostly punctuation errors. I put my corrections in green.
Fred
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