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"The pavement rumbled, rough under my feet and up through to my heart, as I skated to school past the palm trees ..." It seems to me that is one of the main things that distinguishes published authors.. ability to get into a scene quickly and efficeintly, as seen and felt through the character instead of boring narrative. Amazing, there's so much in that sentence. Tactile sensation, motion, emotion, visulalization of place, and also plot as to where she is headed!
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It seems that YA is less of a "genre" these day as much as an excuse to write good books with actual stories, since *serious* grown up books are all post modern and about the fragmentation of perception or some shit like that.
Anyway, it sounds up my alley. I'll give it a look.
I see from her list of published novels that she's also done a werewolf story and a vampire story. We'll see.
On Wed, Feb 22, 2012 at 11:35 AM, Joe "Bondi" Beach <joe.bon...@gmail.com> wrote:
I see from her list of published novels that she's also done a werewolf story and a vampire story. We'll see.
Heh. There is no requirement that I read *everything* from a writer.
I have a current "no vampire" policy. It has saved me from much mischief, I suspect.
I'm wondering if she's writing for the parents of young teens as well as the teens themselves. There is no mention of what year this is, but it's clearly mid-70s from the clothes and movie and music references. I assume the places she goes to are all authentic for the time. Except, what would any of this mean to the young reader today? Ask the nearest 13-year-old what year "Season in the Sun" was popular, or when "Benji" came out. Pretty sure you'd get a blank stare. So, what's the point of the references if they don't mean anything to the target audience? Yes, they create time and place and mood, but not for young readers.
On Wed, Feb 22, 2012 at 12:25 PM, Joe "Bondi" Beach <joe.bon...@gmail.com> wrote:
I'm wondering if she's writing for the parents of young teens as well as the teens themselves. There is no mention of what year this is, but it's clearly mid-70s from the clothes and movie and music references. I assume the places she goes to are all authentic for the time. Except, what would any of this mean to the young reader today? Ask the nearest 13-year-old what year "Season in the Sun" was popular, or when "Benji" came out. Pretty sure you'd get a blank stare. So, what's the point of the references if they don't mean anything to the target audience? Yes, they create time and place and mood, but not for young readers.
Right. Clearly some "YA" is indeed YA at every level. But modern YA is just as much "thoughtful stories with plots."
Lots and lots and lots of middle aged ladies are reading Hunger Games now. For women, YA is about the only place to get cool female characters who aren't pining about their divorce or careers -- which are important topics, needless to say, but perhaps tiresome. Some of the best girl-queer lit is being written as "YA." (I'm ignoring for the moment rubbish like Twilight.)
Some thoughts on the subject by the best blogger on the Internet:
http://veronicadire.blogspot.com/2011/12/on-superiority-of-ya.html
Speaking of YA for adults, did you ever finish my soccer girl thing? I decided not to post the rest on SOL, so it's only on my ASSTR page.
bb, I wonder at the power of a pink-filtered cover wrapped around a slim prequel that draws full-grown men as well as the intended audience of old fans and a new generation of coming-of-mind teens. Another dark, angel novel -- *Dangerous Angels* in this case (1998) -- yet again set in Sin City we would say now,
though this is actually the prequel to *Weetzie Bat* first published in 1989 (the year of my birth), purportedly written to answer the fans' question, what made Weezie, Weezie. It's a simpler question than how did Weezie learn make those spoonfuls of magical reality that wrapped her in a pink, cotton candy cloud of lyrical, luminous prose -- instead of drugs -- to protect her mind from the harsh realities of life and the dangerous angel of love until it was strong enough to face and conquer her fears, and in the next book(s) enable rich descriptions and complicated characterizations.
I was fourteen when I first met Weezie. I distinctly remember the book made me hungry and for weeks after I finished it I couldn't get this music video out of my head: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3YxaaGgTQYM&ob=av2e
My stories are available in PDF format at Lulu.com and Amazon.com. Earlier versions of them will always be available on Storiesonline.net.
On Wed, Feb 22, 2012 at 12:25 PM, Joe "Bondi" Beach <joe.bon...@gmail.com> wrote:
I'm wondering if she's writing for the parents of young teens as well as the teens themselves. There is no mention of what year this is, but it's clearly mid-70s from the clothes and movie and music references. I assume the places she goes to are all authentic for the time. Except, what would any of this mean to the young reader today? Ask the nearest 13-year-old what year "Season in the Sun" was popular, or when "Benji" came out. Pretty sure you'd get a blank stare. So, what's the point of the references if they don't mean anything to the target audience? Yes, they create time and place and mood, but not for young readers.
Right. Clearly some "YA" is indeed YA at every level. But modern YA is just as much "thoughtful stories with plots."
Lots and lots and lots of middle aged ladies are reading Hunger Games now. For women, YA is about the only place to get cool female characters who aren't pining about their divorce or careers -- which are important topics, needless to say, but perhaps tiresome. Some of the best girl-queer lit is being written as "YA." (I'm ignoring for the moment rubbish like Twilight.)
Some thoughts on the subject by the best blogger on the Internet:
http://veronicadire.blogspot.com/2011/12/on-superiority-of-ya.html
It's a simpler question than how did Weezie learn make those spoonfuls of magical reality that wrapped her in a pink, cotton candy cloud of lyrical, luminous prose -- instead of drugs -- to protect her mind from the harsh realities of life and the dangerous angel of love until it was strong enough to face and conquer her fears, and in the next book(s) enable rich descriptions and complicated characterizations.
My stories are available in PDF format at Lulu.com and Amazon.com. Earlier versions of them will always be available on Storiesonline.net.
Just ran across this in Frank Bruni's NYT column today.
" In fact one of the happiest and most hopeful developments in publishing over the last decade is the expansion of the sub-market known as “young adult,” or YA, to which “The Fault in Our Stars” belongs. Bookstores are assigning YA titles more space. Serious novelists who would once have blanched at the thought of writing YA novels are giving them a try. And publishing houses are pumping out more and more of them, creating special YA imprints and lines where they didn’t exist."
http://bruni.blogs.nytimes.com/2012/02/22/kids-books-and-a-five-hankie-gem/?ref=opinion
Some thoughts on the subject by the best blogger on the Internet:
http://veronicadire.blogspot.com/2011/12/on-superiority-of-ya.html
Ahem. (Urp.)
It seems that YA is less of a "genre" these day as much as an excuse to write good books with actual stories, since *serious* grown up books are all post modern and about the fragmentation of perception or some shit like that.
Anyway, it sounds up my alley. I'll give it a look.
On Tue, Feb 21, 2012 at 11:49 PM, Joe "Bondi" Beach <joe.bon...@gmail.com> wrote:
I picked up "Pink Smog: Becoming Weetzie Bat" at the library today after reading a review in the NYT Book Review (link below). The review is mixed, but I'm struck by how good the first chapter is. Yes, it's a genre novel, i.e., one that conforms to a defined structure and---I think---a pretty predictable outcome. The principal character and narrator is a 13-year-old girl who is "becoming," the theme of the novel, i.e., finding out who she is. Pretty predictable and pretty standard, huh? So the question is, how well does the author pull it off?
My definition of "good" is pretty straightforward: Do I understand something important about the main character? Can I see the world through her eyes? Is it plausible? (Forget, for the moment, the so-called "magical elements" that the reviewer tells us are integral to the author's writing, and the reviewer's claim that suspension of disbelief fails not far into the story.) So far, the answer is yes. I was taken at the beginning by the cover blurb, which is an excerpt from the opening paragraphs: "The pavement rumbled, rough under my feet and up through to my heart, as I skated to school past the palm trees ..."
Anyone who has ever skated on a sidewalk knows exactly what she feels. (Leave aside the apparent oddity of a middle-school kid who skates to school in the mid-1970s. Maybe they did that in L.A.)
Oh, and the topic of our writing being what it is, I should add that she also obsesses about her flat chest and the well-developed mean girl who persecutes her.
bb
http://www.nytimes.com/2012/02/12/books/review/francesca-lia-blocks-pink-smog-a-weetzie-bat-prequel.html?_r=1&scp=1&sq=weetzie%20bat&st=cse
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On 2012-02-21 21:19, Veronica Dire wrote:It seems that YA is less of a "genre" these day as much as an excuse to write good books with actual stories, since *serious* grown up books are all post modern and about the fragmentation of perception or some shit like that.
Anyway, it sounds up my alley. I'll give it a look.
Off hand, from BB's description, I say that's a "coming of age" story, rather than YA.
bb, Oops, didn't mean to capitalize it. The first book is better. It was an anachronistic dreamland to me. "Wake me up! Wake me up inside, call my name and save me from the dark." Still, the book was relevant and resonated at the time. "How can you [the author] see into my eyes like open doors? Leading you down into my core where I�ve become so numb [to all the bad in the world]. Without a soul my spirit's sleeping somewhere cold until you find it there and lead it back home." The rest of the lyrics were relevant at the time outside of the book.
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2010 National Novel Writing Month winner (along with 37,000 others!)
2011 National Novel Writing Month---not so much