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otakuman

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May 1, 2013, 11:26:44 AM5/1/13
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I reposted this from a.s.s.d, as it didn't get any responses there.
I've had good luck with people here in the SOL group helping me to
find a story, so here's hoping. It's even possible that the first
story doesn't get younger than 14, so it might even be available at
SOL.

The first involves a high school (or junior high) male student who was
taught how to pleasure women from an adult woman (mother, older
sister, other relative, nanny, or even a teacher.) He would do things
to girls at school, and they all quietly told the other girls about it
so that he had a constant stream of girls wanting to be pleasured.
The first? girl he fingered at school was assigned to him as a lab
partner, and they sat in the back of the classroom while he fingered
her.

The second story involves a man saving a girl from an abusive
stepfather (or something.) I don't know if the girl was molested, or
just physically abused. He may have even passed her around to
friends. It culminated in a shootout in a trailer, between the hero,
the stepfather, and some of the stepfather's cronies. I think there
were drug dealers involved, and the stepfather and/or cronies may have
been Latino. The hero of the story could have lived in a trailer park
when he first met the young girl, or I could be confusing that with a
different story.

I thought at first the second story was part of the Sam Knight Case
Files from Uncle Sky, as I was trying to find that one as well. I
read that story again after I found it, and the situation between
Cheryl and her stepfather was somewhat similar, yet completely
different than to what I described above.

Deadly Ernest

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May 1, 2013, 1:58:05 PM5/1/13
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Dang, I think I saw this on SOL some time back, if it's the one I think it was, he was a new tenant at the trailer park - and may have had trailer park in title.

Ernest

Deadly Ernest

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May 1, 2013, 2:00:20 PM5/1/13
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In the meantime, you may enjoy reading this one by Wizard

http://storiesonline.net/s/46167:37408


On Thursday, May 2, 2013 1:26:44 AM UTC+10, otakuman wrote:

Tim Merrigan

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May 1, 2013, 4:52:28 PM5/1/13
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On 2013-05-01 08:26, otakuman wrote:
I reposted this from a.s.s.d, as it didn't get any responses there.
I've had good luck with people here in the SOL group helping me to
find a story, so here's hoping.  It's even possible that the first
story doesn't get younger than 14, so it might even be available at
SOL.

When the age limit was imposed existing stories were grandfathered in.  So, if one or both of the stories were posted here before that they would still be available, they just couldn't be posted here after that.


 
The first involves a high school (or junior high) male student who was taught how to pleasure women from an adult woman (mother, older sister, other relative, nanny, or even a teacher.) He would do things to girls at school, and they all quietly told the other girls about it so that he had a constant stream of girls wanting to be pleasured. The first? girl he fingered at school was assigned to him as a lab partner, and they sat in the back of the classroom while he fingered her.

    
The second story involves a man saving a girl from an abusive stepfather (or something.) I don't know if the girl was molested, or just physically abused. He may have even passed her around to friends. It culminated in a shootout in a trailer, between the hero, the stepfather, and some of the stepfather's cronies. I think there were drug dealers involved, and the stepfather and/or cronies may have been Latino. The hero of the story could have lived in a trailer park when he first met the young girl, or I could be confusing that with a different story.

      
I thought at first the second story was part of the Sam Knight Case Files from Uncle Sky, as I was trying to find that one as well. I read that story again after I found it, and the situation between Cheryl and her stepfather was somewhat similar, yet completely different than to what I described above.


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otakuman

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May 1, 2013, 8:12:35 PM5/1/13
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Thank you for that, it wasn't the story I was thinking of, but it was
fun to read, and somewhat close to the story I recall.

Deadly Ernest

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May 1, 2013, 11:35:46 PM5/1/13
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ayep, and there's a few more in the series to, so it should keep you busy for another ten minutes or so to read them all

Anonym Fegis

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May 2, 2013, 8:13:12 AM5/2/13
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On Wednesday, May 1, 2013 5:26:44 PM UTC+2, otakuman wrote:
The second story involves a man saving a girl from an abusive
stepfather (or something.)  I don't know if the girl was molested, or
just physically abused.  He may have even passed her around to
friends.  It culminated in a shootout in a trailer, between the hero,
the stepfather, and some of the stepfather's cronies.  I think there
were drug dealers involved, and the stepfather and/or cronies may have
been Latino.  The hero of the story could have lived in a trailer park
when he first met the young girl, or I could be confusing that with a
different story.


You might confuse it with "Becka the Beast" by Sacwriter. You can find it at Gina Marie's site http://www.beyondthefarhorizon.net/phpBB2/show_author.php?a=121
Lesbian girl, abused and molested by drug dealing step father, passed around latino cronies, maybe trailer park, no shootout but a fight, although shots are fired at one point.

otakuman

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May 2, 2013, 10:33:30 AM5/2/13
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I'm taking a look at that right now, but I'm pretty sure that isn't it
from the lesbian angle. Also, 99% of my reading has been at ASSTR
(with a bit of SOL thrown in.) I read the newsgroups 7-15 years ago,
and some stories at Mr. Double, but I read these two stories within
the past 3-4 years (most likely at ASSTR.) I do wonder if this
lesbian girl story might have been adapted from the original that I
read, or vice versa. I have seen stories like that where one writer
has modified his own work or that of others, turning a Mbb story into
a Mgg, for example. One in particular involved a children's writer
and some twins who were fans of his writing. I only have read the Mgg
version, but I recall that the author mentioned it was adapted from a
Mbb work (whether his own or another author's work, I can't say.)

On May 2, 7:13 am, Anonym Fegis <anonym.fe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wednesday, May 1, 2013 5:26:44 PM UTC+2, otakuman wrote:
>
> > The second story involves a man saving a girl from an abusive
> > stepfather (or something.)  I don't know if the girl was molested, or
> > just physically abused.  He may have even passed her around to
> > friends.  It culminated in a shootout in a trailer, between the hero,
> > the stepfather, and some of the stepfather's cronies.  I think there
> > were drug dealers involved, and the stepfather and/or cronies may have
> > been Latino.  The hero of the story could have lived in a trailer park
> > when he first met the young girl, or I could be confusing that with a
> > different story.
>
> You might confuse it with "Becka the Beast" by Sacwriter. You can find it
> at Gina Marie's sitehttp://www.beyondthefarhorizon.net/phpBB2/show_author.php?a=121

Deadly Ernest

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May 2, 2013, 11:47:09 AM5/2/13
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You may want to check out Eight is Not Enough by Dorsai - he posted it at ASSM in Feb 2009 and it's the closest I can see of a teen school from then to June 2012 posted there. All his stories are at his web page in a more readable format - you may want to check out his other stuff too:

http://www.asstr.org/~Dorsai/

Deadly Ernest

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May 2, 2013, 12:06:26 PM5/2/13
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It would help if you could remember a bit more about the stories, like were they short or long or saga or some names. Anyway, I have an archived list of ALL posts made to ASSM from about 2003 through to 2012 and just checked the several thousand that were made from late 2007 through to mid 2012 - after discarding those with obvious codes and titles that were not what you were looking for (eg the humil and dom types etc) I checked the summaries or starts of the rest and found nothing that comes close to either - that does NOT rule out some of the other ASS groups, just ASSM.

Ernest


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otakuman

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May 2, 2013, 7:34:56 PM5/2/13
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Well, it wasn't Becka the Beast, The part where they go in the house
with the gang of people was in chapter 27. Note: For whatever
reason, I only got a blank page from the 'Beyond the Far Horizon'
link, maybe you have to be a member or something. I did find the
story at the Nifty archive, and I've been reading it and the sequel
all morning and afternoon.

Sam

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May 2, 2013, 7:42:37 PM5/2/13
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Yes, you do have to register (for free) at Beyond the Far Horizon; otherwise the story pages are blank.

otakuman

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May 2, 2013, 8:06:14 PM5/2/13
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I don't think it's Eight is Enough, but I'm reading through it.

I have read some stories from the ASSM group, but more often I would
browse ASSTR by author, or search it for various keywords. It's
possible the stories could have been first posted years before I read
them. When browsing, I may have only looked at author profiles with
websites, and probably looked to see if the author mentioned underage
in his profile. When searching for keywords, I'd read the story
however it was served (ASSM archives, FTP section, or web.)

in the first story, the boy may have been somewhat geeky at first, but
once news of his oral and fingering prowess spread, the girls were
lining up for him. I seem to recall that he may have been late to
science class or something, and he was assigned a girl as a lab
partner. They may have already liked each other a bit, and he used
his new skills on her, bringing her to orgasm at the back of the
class. I think the boy ended up living with or even marrying the
older woman who had introduced him into the art of pleasing women.

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In the second story, I may be conflating three different stories, but
it's possible the man encountered the girl when she was shoplifting at
WalMart, or it's possible he saw her getting hit through the windows
at the trailer park where he lived -- I know for a fact that those are
two different stories, but whether one ended in a shootout with the
abusive person and his gang of drug-dealing cronies, I don't know.. I
would think this has a 'viol' tag, as I am pretty sure that the abuser
and/or some of the cronies got shot. The 'hero' of the story was
likely a professional, as in a private detective, ex-SEAL, or so on.
I don't know if he went in alone, or if he called on a few friends to
help handle the gang of cronies. I am sure that he took one or more
guns with him. The scenario was VERY similar to that in the Sam
Knight Case Files, but still different. It almost seems like the girl
was free from the abuser for a time, and then kidnapped again,
possibly with the hero's niece or another young girl as well.

I have a really LOUSY memory, names are impossible to recall from
stories like this.

Sam

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May 2, 2013, 9:30:41 PM5/2/13
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On Thursday, May 2, 2013 8:06:14 PM UTC-4, otakuman wrote:
in the first story, the boy may have been somewhat geeky at first, but
once news of his oral and fingering prowess spread, the girls were
lining up for him.  I seem to recall that he may have been late to
science class or something, and he was assigned a girl as a lab
partner.  They may have already liked each other a bit, and he used
his new skills on her, bringing her to orgasm at the back of the
class.  I think the boy ended up living with or even marrying the
older woman who had introduced him into the art of pleasing women.
Some elements of this sounds a bit like James by MikeC (http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/MikeC/JAMES/), but not entirely.

jshere

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May 3, 2013, 2:40:55 PM5/3/13
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Try http://storiesonline.net/library/universe.php?id=198 by JimWar
http://storiesonline.net/a/JimWar this kinda sounds like his
Panhandle Trailer Park universe. One story has young girl being
attacked in trailer park, other has teen girl shoplifting in a walmart
and security chief gets custody of her and her younger sister away
from abusive parents.

otakuman

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May 4, 2013, 12:32:58 AM5/4/13
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Nope, it's not either one of those. I think the Walmart bit was a red
herring. The girl in that one was 9-10, and shoplifting clothes or
food because she was dirt poor. The mother was drunk all the time, or
maybe she worked most of the day and night, and didn't do anything but
sleep when she got home to their trailer. The man who saw the girl
shoplifting wasn't an employee, and he ended up buying the girl some
things.

The girl was in the other trailer park bit may have been around 10-12,
but it wasn't a gang of kids, it was an abusive parent/step-parent.
He saw through the windows into the adjoining trailer (if that was
even part of the story I'm recalling.) It was serious physical and/or
sexual abuse, similar to what the girls suffered in the Sam Knight
case, and Becka the Beast.

On May 3, 1:40 pm, jshere <jshe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Try  http://storiesonline.net/library/universe.php?id=198by JimWarhttp://storiesonline.net/a/JimWar  this kinda sounds like his

otakuman

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May 4, 2013, 12:46:55 AM5/4/13
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I may have spoken too soon, I'm taking a look at Cindy, by JimWar. I
don't think this is the one with the shootout between the hero and the
Latino stepfather (and cronies,) but it MAY be the bit I remembered
about the girl being attacked. I'm on chapter two right now.

On May 3, 11:32 pm, otakuman <otakuman.stor...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Nope, it's not either one of those.  I think the Walmart bit was a red
> herring.  The girl in that one was 9-10, and shoplifting clothes or
> food because she was dirt poor.  The mother was drunk all the time, or
> maybe she worked most of the day and night, and didn't do anything but
> sleep when she got home to their trailer.  The man who saw the girl
> shoplifting wasn't an employee, and he ended up buying the girl some
> things.
>
> The girl was in the other trailer park bit may have been around 10-12,
> but it wasn't a gang of kids, it was an abusive parent/step-parent.
> He saw through the windows into the adjoining trailer (if that was
> even part of the story I'm recalling.)  It was serious physical and/or
> sexual abuse, similar to what the girls suffered in the Sam Knight
> case, and Becka the Beast.
>
> On May 3, 1:40 pm, jshere <jshe...@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > Try  http://storiesonline.net/library/universe.php?id=198byJimWarhttp://storiesonline.net/a/JimWar this kinda sounds like his

Mazeppa

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May 5, 2013, 3:01:59 PM5/5/13
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Hi Otakuman. 'englishperv' from loliwood here!  Nothing to add to your inquiry I'm afraid, but just saying hi. Also to DE and Tim - have been away from this group for some time, having been busy elsewhere (a place with different 'rules'!) and good to be back. SOL is 'the' site for stories, beautifully presented, but so damned infuriating with the restrictions! asst is bullshit, aside from the liberal rules, That's life.

Deadly Ernest

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May 5, 2013, 5:13:04 PM5/5/13
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If you've been away and not able to read SOL for a while, then you got some real reading to do to catch up on it all, so get bbusy. Oh, and welcome back.

Ernest

Razer Shadowjammer

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May 6, 2013, 5:24:44 AM5/6/13
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Second one sounds like it could possibly be Cindy by oyster50. It's available on SOL but I can't access it from here. The girl isn't abused but her mother is a slut, they do live in a trailer park, new tenant does 'rescue' her, there is a a couple of shoot-outs. It ties in with a couple other stories in the Smart Girls universe. Hope this helps. I think the girl is like 12 or 13.


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otakuman

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May 6, 2013, 10:47:17 AM5/6/13
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I took a look at the first 2-3 chapters, and that wasn't it. Also,
the one I'm trying to recall isn't anywhere near as long as that.

On May 6, 4:24 am, Razer Shadowjammer <shadowjam...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Second one sounds like it could possibly be Cindy by oyster50. It's
> available on SOL but I can't access it from here. The girl isn't abused but
> her mother is a slut, they do live in a trailer park, new tenant does
> 'rescue' her, there is a a couple of shoot-outs. It ties in with a couple
> other stories in the Smart Girls universe. Hope this helps. I think the
> girl is like 12 or 13.
>
> On Sun, May 5, 2013 at 4:13 PM, Deadly Ernest <ernest.bywa...@gmail.com>wrote:
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> > If you've been away and not able to read SOL for a while, then you got
> > some real reading to do to catch up on it all, so get bbusy. Oh, and
> > welcome back.
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> > Ernest
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> > On Monday, May 6, 2013 5:01:59 AM UTC+10, Mazeppa wrote:
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> >> Hi Otakuman. 'englishperv' from loliwood here!  Nothing to add to your
> >> inquiry I'm afraid, but just saying hi. Also to DE and Tim - have been away
> >> from this group for some time, having been busy elsewhere (a place with
> >> different 'rules'!) and good to be back. SOL is 'the' site for stories,
> >> beautifully presented, but so damned infuriating with the restrictions!
> >> asst is bullshit, aside from the liberal rules, That's life.
>
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