Thanks, these should be fixed now!
On 6/13/24 10:58 AM, Darryl Sloan wrote:
> Update to the above:
>
> *and _head_ the whinny of a horse* - heard
> **
> *was conscious that his laboring _breast_ made speech difficult* -
> *
> *
> *You have gold, _Y_ou will be free; you will make her happy.* - capital
> *
> *
> *enthralling emotions here the living* - punctuation missing after the
> *saying, “_’an_ if you don’t* - an’ - apostrophe strangely placed before
> *mechanical incapable of free thought* - conmma needed after mechanical.
> Confirmed here:
>
https://archive.org/details/ridersofpurplesa00zane/page/288/mode/2up?view=theater
>
> *But, Jane I hadn't forgotten* - comma needed after Jane.
> Confirmed here:
>
https://archive.org/details/ridersofpurplesa00zane/page/338/mode/2up?view=theater
>
> *with scorn doubt, suspicion* - comma needed after scorn
>
https://standardebooks.org/ebooks/zane-grey/riders-of-the-purple-sage <
https://standardebooks.org/ebooks/zane-grey/riders-of-the-purple-sage>
>
>
> *and _head_ the whinny of a horse* - heard
>
>
> *was conscious that his labouring _breast_ made speech difficult* -
> possibly should be breath.
>
>
> *enthralling emotions here the living* - punctuation missing after
> the word emotions, probably a semi-colon.
>
>
> *You have gold, _Y_ou will be free; you will make her happy.* -
> capital "Y" after comma incorrect. Also, possibly semicolon, not comma.
>
>
> *saying, “_’an_ if you don’t* - an’ - apostrophe strangely placed
> before word.
>
>
> Regards
>
> Darryl Sloan
>
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