I'm looking at the ToC here. The story "On a Pincushion" has
sub-stories. Are these sub-stories related by plot? If so, then they
should be <section> instead of <article>.
On 2/7/26 6:40 AM, Lukas Bystricky wrote:
> Alex, this is ready for you.
>
> On Saturday, February 7, 2026 at 8:40:19 AM UTC+1 Lukas Bystricky wrote:
>
> Nice work Hendrik. A few issues in to look at. I think your
> suggestion on the structure above makes sense from a navigation
> point of view, so let's at least try that and see how it looks. I
> didn't read any of the stories myself so I can't say much, but your
> long description looks pretty good to me. As you said it would be
> hard to write much more without giving away plot points.
>
> On Friday, February 6, 2026 at 6:52:33 AM UTC+1 Lukas Bystricky wrote:
>
> Sounds good. I'll have a look by the end of the weekend.
>
> On Thu, Feb 5, 2026, 23:54 Hendrik Kaiber
> <
hendrik....@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> I think this is ready for a review, Lukas. The long
> description is a bit short because I didn't want to simply
> tell the plot of the stories, and I appreciate any feedback
> in how to improve it.
>
> —Hendrik
> On Thursday, February 5, 2026 at 8:32:28 AM UTC-3 robin wrote:
>
> No, this is OK. It’s slightly archaic of course; a more
> modern writing of the same sentence might be “heavy
> misfortune would fall on them *as soon as* they forgot
> to behave well”. But not something we’d change.
>
> -Robin
>
>> On 4 Feb 2026, at 11:09, Hendrik Kaiber
>> <
hendrik....@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> This is almost ready for a review, just one more question:
>>
>> At page 75 <
https://archive.org/details/
>> onapincushionan00morggoog/page/n87/mode/2up?
>> q=%22directly+they%22> there is a passage that says
>> "[...] directly they forgot to behave [...]." This
>> seems strange, do you think there should be an "if"
>> before "they"? Editorial of course.
>>
>> —Hendrik
>> On Monday, February 2, 2026 at 4:42:22 PM UTC-3
>> Hendrik Kaiber wrote:
>>
>> On a Pincushion isn't actually a heading in the
>> first story (it doesn't have one), but I called it
>> like this in ToC because the third story ("The
>> Story of the Opal") ends with "End of On a
>> Pincushion," so I considered that to be the title
>> of the first "story." Since neither you nor I have
>> strong opinions, I'll leave this as-is for now,
>> and maybe if Alex thinks differently I can change it.
>>
>> —Hendrik
>>
>> On Monday, February 2, 2026 at 4:31:50 PM UTC-3
>> robin wrote:
>>
>> I think that given that we’ve called the whole
>> thing/On a Pincushion/ it wouldn’t make much
>> sense to have a subdivision also called “On a
>> Pincushion”. If we were going to do that, I’d
>> lean towards renaming the entire production.
>> Personally, I think I’d leave them as
>> originally planned.
>>
>> But I could easily be swayed if you disagree.
>>
>> -Robin
>>
>>> On 2 Feb 2026, at 19:58, Hendrik Kaiber
>>> <
hendrik....@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> I started proofreading, and should be done
>>> quite soon, this being a short work.
>>>
>>> I would like to know your opinion on
>>> something: this book has a total of seven
>>> stories plus a small "introduction," which
>>> serves to establish a meta narrative, of some
>>> pins telling stories. The first three stories
>>> are actually part of this narrative, with the
>>> remaining four stories being stand-alone.
>>> Should I simply treat them as separate
>>> stories or group the first four?
>>>
>>> Grouping them would lead to the book looking
>>> like this:
>>>
>>> Titlepage
>>> On a Pincushion (/"introduction"/)
>>> /First three stories/
>>> Remaining four stories
>>> Colophon
>>>
>>> I understand that this is somewhat unusual
>>> situation, and would appreciate any ideas.
>>>
>>> —Hendrik
>>>
>>> On Sunday, February 1, 2026 at 5:49:05 PM
>>> UTC-3 robin wrote:
>>>
>>> Uploaded the artwork and assigned it to
>>> this production at https://
>>>
standardebooks.org/artworks/arthur-
>>> hughes/amy <
https://standardebooks.org/
>>> artworks/arthur-hughes/amy>.
>>>> Here's <
https://github.com/HendrikBK/
>>>> mary-de-morgan_on-a-pincushion> the repo.
>>>> <
https://dams.birminghammuseums.org.uk/>
>>>> > assetbank-birminghammuseums/
>>>> action/viewAsset?
>>>> >
>>>> id=8172&index=15&total=31&view=viewSearchItem> painting, which I think
>>>> > looks good to illustrate the first
>>>> story, which involves a vain girl.
>>>> > What do you think?
>>>> >
>>>> > Transcription <https://
>>>>
en.wikisource.org/wiki/ <https://
>>>>
en.wikisource.org/wiki/>
>>>> >
>>>> On_a_Pincushion,_and_Other_Fairy_Tales> (made by me)
>>>> > Scans <
https://archive.org/
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