OK. I think these are both a part of the fiction. What I would do in
both cases is use <hr/> to offset the "tears" and put the note inline in
italics. Putting it as an endnote doesn't give us a good opportunity to
indicate a physical tear, and also risks it sounding like the comment
from a real editor when it's actually part of the fiction.
On 8/20/25 8:06 PM, 'bak' via Standard Ebooks wrote:
> I mean, I also think it certainly is meant as an "authorial note" but in
> a cod authentic kind of way.
>
> Here's the other bit of typographical tomfoolery that stood out to me
> from ch. 38. in that case I have just rendered it as a blockquote with
> <em> tags.
>
> Screenshot 2025-08-20 at 19.02.32.png
>
>> On Aug 20, 2025, at 18:49, Emma Sweeney <
sween...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> The footnote also uses smaller type. That's why I thought it could be
>> a note.
>>
>> Emma
>> On Wednesday, August 20, 2025 at 8:42:08 PM UTC-4 picklefactory wrote:
>>
>> It is definitely meant humorously; there are other comments about
>> the state of the manuscript, but only this one uses smaller type
>> as far as I have seen.
>>
>>> On Aug 20, 2025, at 18:39, Alex Cabal <
al...@standardebooks.org>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>> But is it part of the fiction? If so then if I'd leave it inline,
>>> otherwise it risks sounding like a real editorial comment
>>>
>>>
>>> On August 20, 2025 7:34:01 PM CDT, Emma Sweeney
>>> <
sween...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> 6. This looks like a note. I recommend making this an endnote.
>>>
>>> Emma
>>> On Wednesday, August 20, 2025 at 8:03:10 PM UTC-4
>>> picklefactory wrote:
>>>
>>> OK, got it.
>>>
>>> Here's the page in question from (6).
>>>
>>>
>>> Screenshot 2025-08-20 at 18.01.49.png
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks!
>>>
>>>
>>>> On Aug 20, 2025, at 17:53, Emma Sweeney
>>>> <
sween...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> 1. You can modernize these. Make sure they are separate
>>>> [Editorial] commits.
>>>> 2. You can modernize that.
>>>> 3. Correct, leave these as-is.
>>>> 4. The currency shouldn't be possessive, so the quote
>>>> needs to be removed. In MW, louis d'or <https://
>>>>
www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/louis%20d'or> is
>>>> lower cased. According to Wiktionary, the plural for
>>>> louis <
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/louis> is louis or
>>>>>> ij1.png
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 1. I only risque a castle thereby.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> ij2.png
>>>>>> ij3.png
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 2. If a person is not sufficiently acquainted
>>>>>> with the qualities, the combination of which
>>>>>> characterizes this or that species; or if he
>>>>>> passes a hasty judgment, that this combination
>>>>>> does or does not belong to this or that
>>>>>> individual; he runs the risque of mistaking
>>>>>> copper for gold, a paste for a brilliant, a
>>>>>> calculator for a geometrician, a retailer of
>>>>>> phrases for a wit, Crito for an honest man,
>>>>>> and Pedima for a pretty woman, added the Sultana.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Screenshot 2025-05-18 at 20.03.21.png
>>>>>>
>>>>>> [The scan is not so great here.]
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 3. One runs no risque in doing good offices to
>>>>>> persons of my country, replied the
>>>>>> Monomatapan, pray behold.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> - Change dæmon to daemon <https://
>>>>>>>
www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/daemon>
>>>>>>> instead.
>>>>>>> - Change chimæra to chimaera <https://
>>>>>>>
www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/chimaera>
>>>>>>>>>>> masquerade <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>
standardebooks.org/artworks/
>>>>>>>>>>> james-ensor/masquerade>)
>>>>>>>>>>> seems like it could be a fit
>>>>>>>>>>> for a cover image.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mar 11, 2025, at 19:15,
>>>>>>>>>>>> Emma Sweeney
>>>>>>>>>>>> <
sween...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Words now in M-W:
>>>>>>>>>>>> All words listed except for
>>>>>>>>>>>> Agrémens can have italics
>>>>>>>>>>>> removed. Agrémens only
>>>>>>>>>>>> appears in the MW Unabridged
>>>>>>>>>>>> version.
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Words now in M-W, but scans
>>>>>>>>>>>> and dictionary do not match:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Sure.
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Words now in M-W that will
>>>>>>>>>>>> be caught by se modernize-
>>>>>>>>>>>> spelling:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Correct.
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Not in M-W:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Correct.
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Chapter 13:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Use two-em dashes for
>>>>>>>>>>>> partially obscured-words
>>>>>>>>>>>> (SEMoS 8.7.7.9.4 <https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>
standardebooks.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>> manual/1.8.1/single-
>>>>>>>>>>>> page#8.7.7.9.4>)
>>>>>>>>>>>> Screenshot 2025-03-03 at
>>>>>>>>>>>> 21.38.33.png
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> The transcript seems to
>>>>>>>>>>>> scatter em-dashes, but I
>>>>>>>>>>>> don't think that really
>>>>>>>>>>>> matches what is being
>>>>>>>>>>>> shown here.
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> From chapter 38 / volume
>>>>>>>>>>>> 2 chapter 8:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Screenshot 2025-03-04 at
>>>>>>>>>>>> 17.14.51.png
>>>>>>>>>>>> No idea here. This is in
>>>>>>>>>>>> the middle of a lot of
>>>>>>>>>>>> quoted dialogue. Perhaps
>>>>>>>>>>>> <hr> separators or
>>>>>>>>>>>> something?
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> And finally, from
>>>>>>>>>>>> chapter 25:
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <
al...@standardebooks.org <
http://standardebooks.org/>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, that is
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> common for the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> era. If one big
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> paragraph
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> contains multiple
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> speakers/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> dialogue, you can
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> break them apart.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Emma will manage
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this with Lukas
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reviewing.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 1/9/25 4:15
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> PM, 'bak' via
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Standard Ebooks
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> OK! I found
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> scans of the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> second volume
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> here:https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
archive.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> details/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> lesbijouxindisc00didegoog <
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc00didegoog><
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc00didegoog <
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc00didegoog>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> freeman><
https://github.com/picklefactory/denis-diderot_the-indiscreet-jewels_r-freeman <
https://github.com/picklefactory/denis-diderot_the-indiscreet-jewels_r-freeman>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 8, 2025,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> at 21:50, Alex
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Cabal
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Gutenberg:
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/54672 <
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/54672><
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/54672 <
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/54672>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Scans
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
atarchive.org
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
archive.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >:https://
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
archive.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> details/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> lesbijouxindisc01didegoog <
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc01didegoog><
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc01didegoog <
https://archive.org/details/lesbijouxindisc01didegoog>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Wikipedia:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Indiscreet_Jewels <
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Indiscreet_Jewels><
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Indiscreet_Jewels <
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