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Armagedon to ripen to yeast itself up [insert comma after ripen]
and was silent, severe, imposing [full stop after silent, capital letter for Silent]
who was by three feet in height [but, not 'by']
West riding [capitalise Riding]
bowls of night. /Sleeps [comma not fullstop after 'night']
I will do more than indicate [insert 'no' between 'do' and 'more']