'Suicide Prevention -2'

[yin ping Ng]

Dear all,

Have looked through the English translation and done some revision. Grammar checked by my other half who teaches English.

Tell me what you think.

Regards,
Yin Ping

[Kl Chueng]

Hi all,

As we are referring to someone who is suicidal: (singular)

would it be better to to use .... the person is not left alone. instead of they are not left alone.

The same goes for:

Symptoms of Depression

3. Complains that no one cares, that they are a burden to others

Treatment

3. .....to take care of themselves. replace with self care

My English Language is not that good . Just my two cents.

Thank you.

Kwan Leng

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[yin ping Ng]

Dear all,

Amended.
Totally agree with KL- was looking at indiv sentences. My bad.

Regards,
Yin ping

[Penang Association of Counselling & Psychology PACP]

Hi

Point 5 under warning signs
Persistent finds difficulty in sleeping; being unable to work

Persistent difficulty in sleeping,being unable to work
 ( leave out the word finds)

Regards

Rita

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[yin ping Ng]

Thanks Rita. Sorry typo- was supposed to be persistently finds difficulty in... But I guess persistent difficulty in.. would suffice. Rectifying on phone so difficult to see; that is also why I keep sending new emails instead of replying direct as I have to attach the amended attachment.

Regards,
YP

[Mitra Welfare Penang]

Dear all,  this will be the final copy if no other feedback by 5pm.

Thank you.

regards,

Tay

[yin ping Ng]

Dear all,

Some minor changes- has instead of have; feels instead of feel

Cheers

Yin Ping

[yin ping Ng]

Oops pls remove the extra comma after the ';'

Thanks

Yin Ping

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