Script Changes

[Jonathan Chan]

Hey Phil,

I think some things might need to change in scene 2 of the script. I've suggested the changes below so that they match the recent changes we've made to the prototype. It's also a little more descriptive than it was before. 

(Show email)

Reflect reminds you of events from a community's past, sending an email time capsule on the anniversary of a moment. 

(Show moment view, browse through photos only)

A moment is ______. 

(Show timeline view)

With Reflect, every community is given its own private space, where they can explore and recreate moments they've had together. You can find connections within moments in your past.

(Show Moment view, Open a tag)

With each photo, you can tag memory aids onto areas of the picture, such as details, stories, or sounds.

Let me know if you have questions,

-Jon

[Philip Legros]

What is the blank?

Philip Legros
Carnegie Mellon University
MHCI Class of 2013

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[Jonathan Chan]

I left that up to you, however you want to word it. 

[Philip Legros]

So you want me to define a moment?

Philip Legros
Carnegie Mellon University
MHCI Class of 2013

[Jonathan Chan]

Yes

[Philip Legros]

"You can find connections within moments in your past." This line doesn't really make a lot of sense. Would it be a problem if we didn't include it?

Philip Legros
Carnegie Mellon University
MHCI Class of 2013

[Jonathan Chan]

You can reword it, but we need to describe filtering on the timeline page. 

[Jonathan Chan]

I'm in the project room if you want to talk about it some more.