Write up on Healthcare summit

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Aldo Briano

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May 3, 2012, 2:01:21 PM5/3/12
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Hey, is anyone interested in doing the writeup for the summit with me?  

For each summit write-up, Andreas will give 1k for the submission of this paper, and will reduce 100 every late day.  We can split this in half or in three! 

In any case, I would love to collaborate with someone.

Best,

Aldo

Jerome Ku

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May 10, 2012, 7:05:56 PM5/10/12
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Aldo,

Attached is an edited version of the write-up -- I've attached both a redlined version as well as "final" version.  I've made significant changes both to wording (see redlined version) and some structural changes as well.  

I'm not finished editing the document yet, as there are definitely more editorial refinements to be made but wanted to get you a preliminary cut...

Best,
Jerome

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SDL_UHC_writeup_draft2 - JK edits - redlined.docx
SDL_UHC_writeup_draft2 - JK edits.docx

John Milinovich

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May 10, 2012, 7:15:03 PM5/10/12
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Jerome,

This looks great.  I just read through it and feel (wish!) I was able to participate with you all.  I love the structure that you used here and the way you distilled out key insights from each piece of the puzzle.  Well done.

Best,
john
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