When we got home, Iwas sent to my room. "I'll have to
think a little while before I decide your punishment young man,"said
Mom. "But you're not a young man. Are you?"
We had liver and onions with mashed potatos and
Brussle sprouts for dinner that night and I was sent back to my room
after gagging down all that was on my plate. "If you don't finish it
will just add to your punishment" I didn't have the courage to ask
what my punishment would be but I never imagined it would be so bad.
At 9:00 I was sent to take a shower. After a mimute or
so the curtain was opened and Mom shut the water off! I tried to cover
myself with my hands but mom made me hold my hands out, palms up. She
poured a thick pink liquid into my hands and told me to rub it on my
legs and arms. A second handfull went to my underarms chest and
genitles. The goo smelled really cheap perfume with a touch of
rotten egg. The longer I wore it the stronger the rotten egg got.
Finally I was allowed to rinse the vile goo off and with it went all of
my body hair! "You certainly don't look like a young man now, do you
Bobby?" She was right, I looked like a little boy!
Friday morning at 7:00 Mom woke me. "Brush your teeth
and meet me in Allie's room"she said. Allie was my youngest sister,
10years old at the time but she took after Dad's side of the family.
She was a good two inches taller than Sarah the 12year old. She was a
bit on the chunky side(good german stock Dad would say). that was baby
fat because by 15 she was a stunner.
As soon as I got to alice's room, Mom ordered me tto
strip then dress in a pair of Allies panties. They were pink with
yellow teddy bears and very tight on me. Next came one of her party
dresses, yellow with frills and puffy sleaves. A dress I knew to be
"too babyish" for Allie to wear. The dress buttoned up the back and
Mom sewed the top button shut to prevent its removal.
Tears of humiliation run down by cheeks as I stared
at myself in the mirror. The dress did not reach my thighs and 2
inches of baby panty were exposed at all times. The dress had a
ruffled skirt and flounced when I moved.
"Please, Mom, don't punish me like this" Iwhimpered.
"From now on you will call me Mommy. You silly,
this isn't your punishment. this is just to insure that you stay
grounded while I'm at work. We will decide your punishment tomorrow
night, after you sisters get back from camp. Oh, you'll have to spend
tday downstairs because I'm going to lock all the bedrooms." She
left for work and I wanted to die.
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con't
- Don't "con't"! Your story is crap.
Denis
Best,
Haron
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I blog at http://spankingwriters.com/blog
bareboy wrote:
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Why do I suspect that your protagonist's younger sisters are going
to be highly amused if he's still attired that way when they arrive
home?
I'm not crazy about *forced feminization,* but if there's a lot of
hard panties-down paddling that goes with it (hopefully from both Mom
and the girls) I don't mind it at all.
Certainly Mom will be dishing out a spanking or two before the girls
get home, right? Maybe their brother should be standing red-bottomed in
the living room, panties around his ankles and frilly dress held up at
waist level in the back, when the young ladies come into the house.
Ah, just a suggestion--it's your story, please continue it...
H.I.A.W.B.,
--C.K.