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vello

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Nov 18, 2009, 9:57:23 AM11/18/09
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Hello all,

can you help me with translation to English:

Kuidas näevad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
Leiud väljakaevamistelt.

Какими увидят нас археологи далёкого будущего?
Находки археологических раскопок.

I'm preparing some funny things to City Museum of Tallinn, one of them
is stand with "archaelogical findings" from our time: scientists of
future had find some artefacts from our time but they are in trouble
with interpreting them. my ordinary "Englishman" is abroad so I ask
for your help here :-)

J. Anderson

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Nov 18, 2009, 10:41:55 AM11/18/09
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"vello" <vell...@hot.ee> wrote in message
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> Hello all,
>
> can you help me with translation to English:
>
> Kuidas n�evad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
> Leiud v�ljakaevamistelt.

How will we be seen by the archeologists of a distant future?
Finds from the excavation.

> ?????? ?????? ??? ????????? ???????? ?????????
> ??????? ??????????????? ????????.

Now I know that Nakhodka really means something! For me it was only the end
of the line (through Siberia).

vello

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Nov 18, 2009, 12:27:02 PM11/18/09
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On Nov 18, 5:41 pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message

>
> news:c8fc421f-ff7d-4bf8...@j24g2000yqa.googlegroups.com...
>
> > Hello all,
>
> > can you help me with translation to English:
>
> > Kuidas näevad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
> > Leiud väljakaevamistelt.

>
> How will we be seen by the archeologists of a distant future?
> Finds from the excavation.
>
> > ?????? ?????? ??? ????????? ???????? ?????????
> > ??????? ??????????????? ????????.
>
> Now I know that Nakhodka really means something! For me it was only the end
> of the line (through Siberia).
>
something they find there in Nahodka :-) Your translation is OK, but
maybe there will be (shorter) alternatives? It will be a title for a
stand.

We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future?
finds or findings? from the excavation or of the excavation?

J. Anderson

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Nov 18, 2009, 12:43:42 PM11/18/09
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"vello" <vell...@hot.ee> wrote in message
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> Your translation is OK, but aybe there will


> be (shorter) alternatives? It will be a title
> for a stand.

> We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future?

Sounds fine.

> finds or findings? from the excavation or of the excavation?

Or simply: Excavation findings.


vello

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Nov 18, 2009, 2:20:15 PM11/18/09
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On Nov 18, 7:43 pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message

Last one is better for sure. Thanks!!

vello

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Nov 18, 2009, 2:25:18 PM11/18/09
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On Nov 18, 7:43 pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message

Background: Swedish fortification tunnels from 1500-1600 were opened
and cleaned recently near Kiek-in-de-Kök cannon tower. ost of tunnels
will show exposition about Tallinn's military past, but one 100m
tunnel is mine - relaxing programme "Future of Tallinn". Well, as I
don't know for sure what future will bring for us, it's mostly a bit
sarcastic fun.

They plan to open at Dec 15. Come to see, if in Tallinn after that
time! And I still owe a beer or two to you for your book.

J. Anderson

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Nov 18, 2009, 5:40:36 PM11/18/09
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vello wrote:
> On Nov 18, 7:43 pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
>> "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message
>>
>> news:c46bd2b0-3f3d-4ce4...@f16g2000yqm.googlegroups.com...
>>
>>> Your translation is OK, but aybe there will
>>> be (shorter) alternatives? It will be a title
>>> for a stand.
>>> We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future?
>> Sounds fine.
>>
>>> finds or findings? from the excavation or of the excavation?
>> Or simply: Excavation findings.
>
> Background: Swedish fortification tunnels from 1500-1600 were opened
> and cleaned recently near Kiek-in-de-K�k cannon tower. ost of tunnels

> will show exposition about Tallinn's military past, but one 100m
> tunnel is mine - relaxing programme "Future of Tallinn". Well, as I
> don't know for sure what future will bring for us, it's mostly a bit
> sarcastic fun.
>
> They plan to open at Dec 15. Come to see, if in Tallinn after that
> time! And I still owe a beer or two to you for your book.

Hey, sounds interesting! I will go and see it and we'll have those
beers. I already feel thirsty!

vello

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Nov 18, 2009, 6:00:08 PM11/18/09
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On Nov 19, 12:40 am, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> vello wrote:
> > On Nov 18, 7:43 pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> >> "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message
>
> >>news:c46bd2b0-3f3d-4ce4...@f16g2000yqm.googlegroups.com...
>
> >>> Your translation is OK, but aybe there will
> >>> be (shorter) alternatives? It will be a title
> >>> for a stand.
> >>> We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future?
> >> Sounds fine.
>
> >>> finds or findings? from the excavation or of the excavation?
> >> Or simply: Excavation findings.
>
> >  Background: Swedish fortification tunnels from 1500-1600 were opened
> > and cleaned recently near Kiek-in-de-Kök cannon tower. ost of tunnels

> > will show exposition about Tallinn's military past, but one 100m
> > tunnel is mine - relaxing programme "Future of Tallinn". Well, as I
> > don't know for sure what future will bring for us, it's mostly a bit
> > sarcastic fun.
>
> > They plan to open at Dec 15. Come to see, if in Tallinn after that
> > time! And I still owe a beer or two to you for your book.
>
> Hey, sounds interesting! I will go and see it and we'll have those
> beers. I already feel thirsty!- Hide quoted text -

Just let's wait till Dec 15 to see if they will be really ready :-)
There will be an undergroung train in "my" tunnel and train builders
are a bit in problems. But I keep you informed about things here.

Vladimir Makarenko

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Nov 18, 2009, 8:46:36 PM11/18/09
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vello wrote:
> Hello all,
>
> can you help me with translation to English:
>
> Kuidas näevad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
> Leiud väljakaevamistelt.
>
> Какими увидят нас археологи далёкого будущего?

Through what lens archaeologists of the distant future will be looking
at us.

Credit not mine - I just put it in understandable English and ask
aborigines to give me a digestible version.

> Находки археологических раскопок.

Findings of archaeological excavations.


>
> I'm preparing some funny things to City Museum of Tallinn, one of them
> is stand with "archaelogical findings" from our time: scientists of
> future had find some artefacts from our time but they are in trouble
> with interpreting them. my ordinary "Englishman" is abroad so I ask
> for your help here :-)

Hah, that's a very sci-fi idea. Perfect.

VM.

Eugene Holman

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Nov 19, 2009, 10:51:47 AM11/19/09
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In article
<c46bd2b0-3f3d-4ce4...@f16g2000yqm.googlegroups.com>, vello
<vell...@hot.ee> wrote:

> On Nov 18, 5:41=A0pm, "J. Anderson" <anderso...@inbox.lv> wrote:
> > "vello" <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote in message
> >
> > news:c8fc421f-ff7d-4bf8...@j24g2000yqa.googlegroups.com...
> >
> > > Hello all,
> >
> > > can you help me with translation to English:
> >

> > > Kuidas n=E4evad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
> > > Leiud v=E4ljakaevamistelt.


> >
> > How will we be seen by the archeologists of a distant future?
> > Finds from the excavation.

It would be clearer if the translation, like the Estonian original,
avoided the passive:

How will the archeologists of the distant future see us?
(Note: American spelling 'archeologists', British spelling: archaeologists)

Finds from an excavation.
(If you are emphasizing that everything on display is from one particular
excavation site.)

Finds from the excavanation.
(If you have established a wider context and are now displaying finds as
opposed to providing something else such as the historical background of
the site or the process of recovering the finds, cf. the Vasa Mudeum in
Stockholm.)

Regards,
Eugene Holman

vello

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Nov 19, 2009, 2:57:46 PM11/19/09
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On Nov 19, 5:51 pm, hol...@mappi.helsinki.fi (Eugene Holman) wrote:
> In article
> <c46bd2b0-3f3d-4ce4-97e6-0ec04a70f...@f16g2000yqm.googlegroups.com>, vello


thank you, egene!
But what about:
"We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future" ?

for me, it seems to be the best?

Eugene Holman

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Nov 19, 2009, 9:59:57 PM11/19/09
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In article
<290acdf9-870c-4408...@n35g2000yqm.googlegroups.com>, vello
<vell...@hot.ee> wrote:

<deletions>

> thank you, egene!
> But what about:
> "We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future" ?
>
> for me, it seems to be the best?

The Estonian is:

(S) Kuidas n�evad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?
how see us (distant future)-of architects

If you want a close translation that is also idiomatic English, then the
best solutions are:

(T1) How will the archeologists of the distant future see us?

or John's original proposal, but with the indefinite article before
'future' changed to a definite one because in English we normally speak of
'the' distant furure, not 'a' distant future, since 'a' implies seceral
different alternative futures rather than the one linearly progressing one
that actually emerges:

(T2) How will we be seen by the archeologists of the distant future?

Your proposal (T3) is quite good, but it has a slight problem:

(T3) We in the eyes of the archeologists of the distant future.

(T3) males a strong statement, as though this is how we know that the
archeologists of the future are going to see us, while the Estonian
original was somewhat more tentative, implying that the exhibit will
contribute to the picture that the archeologists of the future will have
of us.

Note that (T3) would better correspond to an Estonian source text:

(S') Meie kauge tuleviku arheoloogide silmades.

Compared to the original (S), (T3) and its back translation (S') emphasize
'we/meie' too much, while neglecting the original's idea that we are
dealing with a possible alternative (kuidas?/how?) rather than with a
statement of fact, the difference between 'This is how they are going to
see us' and 'How will they see us?'.

Regards,
Eugene Holman

vello

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Nov 20, 2009, 4:45:54 AM11/20/09
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On Nov 20, 4:59 am, hol...@mappi.helsinki.fi (Eugene Holman) wrote:
> In article
> <290acdf9-870c-4408-b22d-394633f9a...@n35g2000yqm.googlegroups.com>, vello

>
> <vellok...@hot.ee> wrote:
>
> <deletions>
>
> > thank you, egene!
> > But what about:
> > "We in the eyes of the archeologists of a distant future" ?
>
> > for me, it seems to be the best?
>
> The Estonian is:
>
> (S)   Kuidas näevad meid kauge tuleviku arheoloogid?

About background: my "future tunnel" is basically relaxing fun after
long visit to "ordinary" museum, so key is about the same like "How
Marsians will see our Earth?" - no real sci here, just entertainment.
But let's take T1, it seems very nice. Thank you - and when in
Tallinn, take a visit!!!

Eugene Holman

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Nov 20, 2009, 5:23:39 AM11/20/09
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In article
<34556ba8-b9c2-4067...@e23g2000yqd.googlegroups.com>, vello
<vell...@hot.ee> wrote:

<deletions>
>

> About background: my "future tunnel" is basically relaxing fun after
> long visit to "ordinary" museum, so key is about the same like "How
> Marsians will see our Earth?" - no real sci here, just entertainment.
> But let's take T1, it seems very nice. Thank you - and when in
> Tallinn, take a visit!!!

Great :-) These are the kinds of issues that should be dscussed in
soc.culture.baltics.

Best regards,
Eugene Holman

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