Couple of suggestions:
SKUA para:
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break last sentence into two? Eg
Although the system we build
will be specialized to astronomy, and proved by its
interaction with, and eventual embedding within, the
Virtual Observatory, the bulk of the semantic
knowledge is localized in the RDF store. This reflects
the core design goal that the semantic knowledge could
be replaced if desired by the analogous semantic knowledge
of a different domain.
myExperiment para:
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Change "And unlike Facebook or MySpace" to "Unlike Facebook or MySpace".
I'm still seeing "aaaaa" placeholder text towards the bottom of the
page, is that expected?
Cheers,
Kona
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Kona Andrews k...@roe.ac.uk
AstroGrid Project http://www.astrogrid.org
IfA, Royal Observatory, Blackford Hill, Edinburgh EH9 3HJ
Feedback from the peanut gallery...
You mention that it can be used in other domains but do not mention
anywhere about your willingness to engage with third parties in
understanding how this might happen.
This may be deliberate (i.e. not spreading your resources too thinly),
if it is not then I suggest an invitation to participate would be a good
idea.
Ross
Hi Tony,
Couple of suggestions:
SKUA para:
------------------
break last sentence into two? Eg
Although the system we build
will be specialized to astronomy, and proved by its
interaction with, and eventual embedding within, the
Virtual Observatory, the bulk of the semantic
knowledge is localized in the RDF store. This reflects
the core design goal that the semantic knowledge could
be replaced if desired by the analogous semantic knowledge
of a different domain.
myExperiment para:
------------------
Change "And unlike Facebook or MySpace" to "Unlike Facebook or MySpace".
I'm still seeing "aaaaa" placeholder text towards the bottom of the
page, is that expected?
Many thanks, Kona.
...
On 2008 Oct 24, at 10:21, Linde, A.E. wrote:
> Hope this looks ok. I've not got time to get it printed before ADASS
> so hope I can find somewhere in Quebec to get it printed on the
> Saturday (A1 size? A0 seems overkill for so little content :) ). So,
> you've got until next Weds or so to let me know of any changes
> needed - please!!
It looks good.
As of today, I have a version of VOExplorer which can read SKUA
claims, and very shortly I hope to have it able to write them, too. I
don't know if that's worth mentioning in your poster, but I'm going to
be talking about it in my talk.
[...rather to my surprise. It came as a decided shock to me when I
reread my abstract and discovered that I'd promised to demo that!]
See you,
Norman
--
Norman Gray : http://nxg.me.uk
Dept Physics and Astronomy, University of Leicester