New Usability Repost v2

Mohamed Gulaid

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Apr 18, 2013, 10:31:41 PM4/18/13

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the one I sent earlier was the wrong version.. pls double check, thanks

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Final Usability Report Team 5 v2.pdf

Chad Kijewski

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Apr 18, 2013, 10:51:56 PM4/18/13

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Table of Contents is incorrect; Discussion begins on page 11, not 10. Methodology begins on page 3, not 4. Appendices appear to begin on 13, not 12. You may want to move the word ‘Appendices’ to the next page.

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Chin-Jui Chen

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Apr 18, 2013, 10:59:27 PM4/18/13

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Hi, Mohamed,

Good job. Thanks for your effort on this. Here, just to point out some minor errors or concerns in my perspective of view:

1. Same table format(border) for the task difficulties summary.

2. In finding#1 evidence paragraph, two periods in the last sentence.

3. In finding#1 recommendation paragraph, the sentence: "Regardless if it is ignored be due to lack of color..." should be changed as: "Regardless if it is ignored due to lack of color...". And the second half part of the sentence is not making sense to me either....

4. Remain the original image ratio for the figure 4.

5. In finding#3, first line of evidence part, "Visual feedback in Qlovi’s system lack(S) of visibility or completely missing."

6. In finding#3, recommendation part, use "First", and "Second." Don't mix with "First", and "Secondly."

7. In finding#4, recommendation part. The sentence "Qlovi markets itself as alternative to reading platform, however, the interface emphasis on modules. Additionally Information architecture should correspond with the need of typical English teacher." should add some punctuation as: "Qlovi markets itself as alternative to reading platform; however, the interface emphasis on modules. Additionally, Information architecture should correspond with the need of typical English teacher."

8. In finding#5, evidence part, "The difficult is not finding the books but deciding which book to choose."

Best,

Morgan.

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