draft event description

[Sarah Allen]

The event details are posted (and public), but before I broadcast it, I wanted to get feedback. Please read and let me know what you think: http://mightyrubytuesday.eventbrite.com/

Also, Fred -- do you have a short bio or description for Ellen Ferrato?

I'd like to send it out later tonight -- sorry for the last minute request!

Best,
Sarah

[Fred Zirdung]

Hi Sarah,

Looks great.

Here is a bio for Ellen. I pulled some text off her site and
refactored it a bit.

DJ Ellen Ferrato has been spinning in the San Francisco Bay Area since
1995 with her distinctive and cutting edge style that is best
described as deep, sexy, groovy, funky, driven house. Ellen
exemplifies the phrase "interactive DJ" and loves to play off of the
energy of the dance floor. She has played with many big names such as
Doc Martin, Mark Farina, Basement Jaxx, Marques Wyatt, Ian Pooley,
Deep Dish, John Aquavivo, DJ Dan, Boy George plus countless other
great acts. Ellen has been nominated and won the Best DJ award by the
SF Clubbys numerous times.

The last line in Melyss' bio has an extra line-break in it. The only
other comment I have is the bit about more DJs to be announced. I
think we want to get people excited about more acts, yes? Here is a
suggested rework:

We've lined up two amazing acts so far, the fabulous DJs: Melyss and
Ellen Ferrato. And we'll be announcing two more in the coming weeks,
so check your inbox for more announcements!

Or something like that.

Great job getting the venue and tickets squared away!

Fred