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Phoen...@gmail.com
Jul 8, 2007, 10:27:27 PM7/8/07
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Stormy
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Towering, gray anvils
Marching in from the east,
Water, wind and fire,
The sky versus the earth
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Towering, gray anvils
Marching in from the east,
Water, wind and fire,
The sky versus the earth
Blazing, pounding cannons.
Blazing, pounding cannons...
A few moments later
the earth claims victory,
nourished, refreshed and calm.
Blazing Sun has returned.
I See K
Jul 18, 2007, 8:14:50 PM7/18/07
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Hiding in Plain Sight
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Hiding in plain sight,
I did not intend to
Heads and bodies walking by,
some together, some not
some pretty + ugly
some miserable, some smiling
some busy + empty
some relaxed and filled
No one noticed my watching
Happily hiding in plain sight
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Hiding in plain sight,
I did not intend to
Heads and bodies walking by,
some together, some not
some pretty + ugly
some miserable, some smiling
some busy + empty
some relaxed and filled
No one noticed my watching
Happily hiding in plain sight
Dan Guarro
Jul 18, 2007, 8:34:03 PM7/18/07
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People-watching will always reveal the many various types of people around us. I often notice others' traits and can pick up their vibes, positive or negative, but I keep my positive, happy mindset just as your poem reads. This is a nice read. Thank you so much for sharing it, and welcome to the group. Many Blessings.
Danny
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