Logo feedback

[Edward L Platt]

Hey All,

What do you think of this logo I drafted?

-Ed

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[Joshua Pritt]

Pretty cool! Like seltzer water right?
Any way to fit the name on there too or the logo would normally be next to the name?

[Edward L Platt]

Here's the second rev. Thoughts?

On Thu, Apr 30, 2015 at 7:50 PM, Joshua Pritt <ramg...@gmail.com> wrote:

Pretty cool!  Like seltzer water right?
Any way to fit the name on there too or the logo would normally be next to the name?

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[Joshua Pritt]

Try putting a 1 or 2 pixel wide stroke around the outside of all the little connected circles and their connecting lines to make it pop out a bit.

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[Edward L Platt]

One more rev:

[Madalyn Winans]

Adorable.

[Joshua Pritt]

yeah! that makes the circles look more like 3D spheres like bubbles in Seltzer water.

[Matt Oehrlein]

fwiw i like matt arnold's design better that he posted on fb, using negative space in the water. his first design, not his second one with the hexagon. Less colors and more simple = better imo.

however, i like your rounded bottom of the glass better.

[Edward L Platt]

Here's a slightly modified version. This one could be done in a single color (for stamps and such) but I like having the default have two colors. What do people think, is this the best one so far, or is one of the others?

[Joshua Pritt]

Try the exact same one but with the thicker line for the outside hexagon like the other ones.

[James Nylen]

Yes.  Same line width at (1) and (2):


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[Edward L Platt]

Done! How's it look?

[Joshua Pritt]

Great!!!!