Hi, John,
I think this looks great, thanks again for leading the charge on this. I really like the last two paragraphs with a list of events and activities that we plan to pursue.
I like Goal B, to organize a Drupal Clinic in 2010. I think A doesn't correspond to a goal so much as a methodology that we support. Perhaps we can move A to the paragraph starting "Meeting attendees will receive," and instead add something to address our goal to broaden the community that benefits from Drupal? This can mean people who will get to use a powerful, flexible open-source content management and web publishing system like Drupal, and web geeks who will learn how to operate on Drupal for fun and profit.
What do you think?
Cheers!
Sameer.