Greetings Comrades, I need your opinions...

[Will Erokan]

Ahoy out there...
I'm curious what you all think of this animated short...
Please take a moment and write a short (a paragraph or so) critique.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5jcSCDr2BM

Afterwords I'll share my own...

-willl

[jrmh jns]

Will et al

Re: the animation you sent:

Anthony Simon is dating this girl who he really likes, she works in some kind of daycare or babysitting place for Manhattan kids.  At the daycare there is a toy computer with abc letters on it, not like a real computer but like, A B C, It says "A for Alligator" etc, kids usually press the button for the sound for Alligator, whatever.  But this one kid, he started tapping the buttons, not all the way down, but lightly; imitating his parents rhythm, tap tap tap, as if he knew his home row as he knocked out a series of emails or status updates.  He did this for like ten minutes, playing away at using the toy the way he thought that it was supposed to be used. 

What are we doing?  What are we trying to do?  

If we practice criticism are we practicing the revolution?

....

Will:

Ann and I are coming to your neighborhood.  We will be there for some short hours, we should talk on the phone. See you soon!

Maybe you can come camping with us!

~Jeremiah

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