I'm very pleased to see the wording of proposed changes. Thank you!
I think the proposed changes appear in two, different mail threads, one in one, and three in the other. And that's it. Please let me know if I've missed something.
Regarding the proposed rewrite to (D)B:
I'm very pleased to see the shortening and tightening up you've done here. In general outline, this is clearly a big improvement. Again, thank you!
I do have a few quibbles, though.
The terms "cover bell" and "effective stage" are relatively technical terms which have not been defined, and which sensible people might interpret differently than you intended. And similarly "uninterrupted" seems to be being used in some sort of technical sense which has not be defined, and which is not at all clear to me.
For example, if I ring on a twelve Stedman Doubles on the front six, with the six covering, and Cambridge Minor on the back six (suitably out of phase, probably with some unusual calls, to ensure truth as twelve bell rows) the six could very reasonably be argued to be a "cover bell". I personally have no problem with that, but wonder if that was really your intention?
"Effective stage" is a term rarely used in ringing outside of the decisions, and so I think really does deserve a definition somewhere. And consistent use. It is, I think, primarily of importance in clause 4:
I think your intentions in clause 4 appear to be excellent. This is a revoltingly difficult thing to get right, and I think, in outline, you may have done so; I'm going to think further on whether or not I can construct some nasty example that breaks it. However, the actual wording seems a bit short of what it needs to be. I think I really only follow it because I think (perhaps wrongly :-) that I know what you're trying to say. For example, shouldn't the sentence "a peal may include a single uninterrupted round block, at either the lower or higher stage for multi-stage peals, in which each of the possible rows at that stage appears at most one more time than every other possible row" refer to the effective stage? Or are you really saying that if I ring a peal of 5,140 doubles and minor, that includes a 100 of spliced doubles (maybe variable cover, maybe single cover) and minor I can't call it a peal?
And what does "uninterrupted" mean in this context. When I read "a peal may contain any number of uninterrupted extents or multi-extent blocks" the implication is that there may be interruptions between the blocks. So, my band can ring a 2,880 of minor, set their bells, go have their lunch, come back, ring a 2,160, and call the whole thing a peal. I'm sure that's not what was intended, but it's sure what "(un)interrupted" sounds like to me! :-)
"Round block" is also a technical term that is not defined. But I'm guessing you believe that best left to another day, the term having lived undefined in the decisions for a long time already, and, unlike "cover bell", being used outside (D)B. Fortunately I think "round block" is probably also less prone to mis-interpretation.
I think this is fairly tough sledding, and many voting on this at the Council meeting will not really have a good understanding of what the new (D)B means, particularly clause 4. It might be worth preparing a smorgasbord of examples of things formerly prohibited that are now allowed, and things still prohibited, together with a statement that you believe that nothing formerly allowed is now prohibited.
Clause 5 really doesn't belong here. (D)B is about what "is" a peal. What you have to report is a completely dfifferent animal, and should be collected elsewhere, I think. Perhaps in (D)E. That said, I understand it's Always Been Here, so perhaps now is not the time to fix that.
Anyway, I plan to reread this every day for a few days, and send further thoughts after I've digested it. It's not easy stuff.
Regarding the proposed deletion from (E)A.2:
This really does seem to get the job done! And has the further virute of not leaving you wondering "have they defined 'true round block'?"
I am puzzled at the genesis of this clause. Why go to all the trouble of defining "change" in (E)A.1, and then not use it in (E)A.2, instead talking about the places made between rows? Oh, well, not a problem for this year, though I trust your long term solution will not suffer from such an oddity.
In reading this section carefully I am, however, prompted to ask a question: why do we believe that methods with one lead courses are prohibited? All it says is that they have to be decomposable into parts that are all the same length; it doesn't say "into two or more parts", and one is pretty clearly "equal length". (Suggestion for the long term: in this context I think "partition" is a better word than "decompose".)
Regarding the new (D)A.6:
This seems to be an attempt to be overly clever, and slay two fowl with one vote: getting rid of "bells must be audible from outside" is a distinct proposition from "allow peals on simulators". I think combining them is asking for trouble: I can readily imagine some Council members being happy with one but unhappy with the other. They should be decoupled, even if that does make phrasing things to get the numbering right painfully awkward.
Unless you explicitly define it so (which I strongly suggest not doing) a "simulated peal" is a very different animal than a "peal rung on a simulator".
"The simulated bells shall all be rung full circle-style by human ringers" would encompass, say, one human saying into a microphone "8,7,6,5,6,5,5,6,6,5,6,5,5,6,6,5,6,5,4,3..." and then six other bluelines, and one further human saying the last line, and then software using text to speech and showing pictures on a monitor of bells ringing full circle through a performance of Middleton's Cambridge. While I personally would have no problem with calling that a peal, I'm pretty certain I am in a small minority.
Do simulated tower bells have to have ropes? Do simulated handbell peals have to involve hands, or can I just say "up" and "down" and I've met the law? Or, perhaps just look "up" and "down"?
I'm sorry, this all seems a bit of a mess to me.
Regarding the changes to (D)A.9 and (D)A.10:
These seem to be strongly dependent upon how you interpret "possible", with either result being essentially meaningless. The fastest an error can be corrected is essentially right as it happens, which is a tighter constraint than the currrent one. Or you might interpret "as possible" to mean "within the capabilities of the conductor and band" which might well be two hours and five extents later. This is really an attempt to legislate judgement and taste. It might or might not be possible to do, but I don't think this gets the job done.
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