A request for reviewing the writing of my research paper.

[Amulya]

I hope you’re doing well. I’m reaching out to ask if you would be willing to review my research paper, titled Designing for Emotional Ecology: Reconnecting Human and Non-Human. While I’ve tried to structure and articulate my ideas carefully, I feel that some parts of the writing come across as rigid and lack a natural flow. I would be truly grateful for your insights and suggestions on how I could improve its clarity, tone, and overall coherence.

To briefly explain, my paper explores the anthropocentric limitations of human-centered design (HCD), arguing its focus on human needs often sidelines ecological and long-term systemic consequences. In response , we propose "emotional ecology," a posthumanist framework that re-conceptualizes emotion as a relational force connecting humans, non-humans, and environments. My goal is to refine the way I communicate these ideas and make the paper more engaging and fluid while maintaining academic precision.

I’d be genuinely grateful for any feedback or suggestions you might have, even small insights would help me a lot in improving the paper’s flow and clarity.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I truly appreciate your guidance and perspectives.