http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-5acLIUkAkY
Then I looked up its lyrics just to look in awe at its wonderful
poetry - and was disappointed by the shoddy transliteration work of
Rawat. But I am not surprised by the errors in the lyrics posted by
him - obviously he did not like the song. But that's another issue.
Here are my *corrections* and **additions**.
Asif
%
\startsong
\stitle{huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N ai dil}%
\film{Aar Paar}%
\year{1954}%
\starring{Guru Dutt, Shyama, Shakeela, Jagdish Sethi, Jagdeep, Kumkum,
Johny Walker}%
*Guru Dutt, Shakeela}%*
\singer{Geeta}%
\music{O P Nayyar}%
\lyrics{Majrooh}%
%
% Contributor: BOL ANAMOL #10015 [V S Rawat]
% Transliterator:
% Comments: First film of Kumkum
%
\printtitle
#indian
%
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N ai dil
**huu.N abhii ma.in javaa.N**
behosh huu.N bin pi_e kal kaa bhii Gam kisali_e
*( * * )
\- 2*
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N \threedots
*huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abii mai.n javaa.N*
ye naGamaa aur ye fizaa ek sadaa aur ek adaa
*( * *ye saaz aur ye sadaa ) \- 2*
jo hai ganiimat hai aaj kal kaun jaane ho kyaa
*( jo hai Ganiimat* * ) \- 2*
so na ho ye samaa.N ai dil
*ho*
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N \threedots
*huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abii mai.n javaa.N*
duniyaa kaa kyaa etabaar khonaa na apanaa qaraar
*( *
* ) \- 2*
chun le muraado.n ke phuul biite na yuu.N hii bahaar
*( *
* ) \- 2*
taak me.n hai Kizaa.N ai dil
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N \threedots
*huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abhii mai.n
huu.N abii mai.n javaa.N*
dekho hai ye zindagii yuu.N nahii.n bekhudii
*( dekhii* * ) \- 2*
mujhako bahak jaane de baate.n na kar hosh kii
hosh kaisaa yahaa.N ai dil
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N \threedots
*huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N ai dil
huu.N abhii mai.n javaa.N*
%
#endindian
\endsong
I don't think Rawat let his likes and dislikes affect the quality of
his transliteration: you will find similar problems in almost any
song
that he has submitted (and he has submitted a god-awful lot!).
Just one more *correction* and one more **addition**:
> dekho hai ye zindagii yuu.N nahii.n bekhudii
> *( dekhii* * ) \- 2*
dekhii hai ye zindagii yuu.N **hii** nahii.n *beKudii*
Warm regards,
Abhay
Side note: This is based on the Rita Hayworth classic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rVI0A4DTVgg
"Put The Blame On Mame"
op nayyar must have been really low on confidence - copying quizas
quizas, zing zing zing a zong (bing crosby) and put the blame on mame
in one album. and there might be others too!