Re: Over You / Will Dockery

[Will Dockery]

Hieronymous 707 <hirunnymouse...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Over You
>
> > Well, it's over, then.
> > At least the months of
> > insecurity are over for me.
> > It's over.
>
> > I tried to love you,
> > didn't work.
> > I don't think you want love,
> > that's your choice as you say.
> > You can do whatever you want as you say.
>
> > You've hurt me many times,
> > so we are at least even.
> > As you said in that downtown visit we made
> > "I don't owe you nothing."
>
> > You're right,
> > and neither do I owe you.
> > It was over for me in downtown,
> > when I was treated about
> > the worst anyone ever treated me.
>
> > So you're gonna bang fifteen guys you said,
> > I don't think so.
> > Maybe just you'll find your
> > brown eyed Springtime Boy.
>
> > Soulfull deep Eastern eyes,
> > Chakra and karma and beauty,
> > with a fully loaded wallet to boot.
> > I offered you my heart,
> > you stepped on that.
>
> > Well I cried for you
> > and for that I thank you,
> > because I thought I'd lost that,
> > way on down the line.
>
> > This is enough,
> > all that's left of me with you
> > is my coffee cup,
> > and I'll come by and pick that up,
> > sometime when I feel better.
>
> > -Will Dockery
>
> This is cool, like a journal entry. Is this about getting over some
> chick, or about getting over yourself? It can be read both ways, which
> is kind of what makes it interesting. Thanks for posting it. I hadn't
> seen this one before.

Thanks for having a read and commenting, Corey.

I've adapted "Over You" into a song with Brian Mallard & Jack Snipe,
comments & critique are welcome, as always:

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_13207558

[Hieronymous 707]

Okay. no comment.

[Will Dockery]

This was truly a memorable moment... a comment from Hi that actually is about the poem. We don't see that much, if at all, from him these days.

:)