[Last one, I promise. And while compiling this, I just saw your posts, K. I agree (as you'll see here below) that his is a "beautiful beyond words" version. And thanks, yes, it was (of all people) Alex Ross who sequenced the NYC version from the bootleg. Thanks for including that.]
Wow, I like that NYC version SO much better than the released version. That great swirling/swelling organ on the choruses. His gentle voice.
Verse three is quite different. In the released version it's this:
"I ran into the fortune-teller, who said beware of lightning that might strike
I haven’t known peace and quiet for so long I can’t remember what it’s like
There’s a lone soldier on the cross, smoke pourin’ out of a boxcar door
You didn’t know it, you didn’t think it could be done, in the final end he won the wars
After losin’ every battle"
In the NYC version it was this:
"I threw the I-Ching yesterday, it said there might be some thunder at the well
Peace and quiet's been avoiding me for so long it seems like living hell
There's a lone soldier on the hill watching falling raindrops pour
You'd never know it, to look at him but at the final shot he'd won the war
After losing every battle."
Verse six is also quite different. In the released version it's this:
"I noticed at the ceremony, your corrupt ways had finally made you blind
I can’t remember your face anymore, your mouth has changed, your eyes
don’t look into mine
The priest wore black on the seventh day and sat stone-faced while the
building burned
I waited for you on the running boards, near the cypress trees, while the
springtime turned
Slowly into Autumn"
In the NYC version it was this:
"I noticed at the ceremony that you left all your bags behind
The driver came in after you left he gave 'em all to me and then he resigned
The priest wore black on the seventh day waltzed around while the building burned
You didn't trust me for a minute babe I've never known the Spring to turn so quickly
Into Autumn"
More big differences in the next verse. The released version:
"I can’t feel you anymore, I can’t even touch the books you’ve read
Every time I crawl past your door, I been wishin’ I was somebody else instead
Down the highway, down the tracks, down the road to ecstasy
I followed you beneath the stars, hounded by your memory
And all your ragin’ glory"
The NYC original:
"We pushed each other a little too far and one day it just jumped into a raging storm
A hound dog bayed behind your trees as I was packing up my u-ni-form
Figured I'd lost you anyway why go on what's the use
In order to get in a word with you I'd a-had to come up with some excuse
That just struck me as kinda funny"
Then, the released version goes:
"I been double-crossed now for the very last time and now I’m finally free
I kissed goodbye the howling beast on the borderline which separated you from me
You’ll never know the hurt I suffered nor the pain I rise above
And I’ll never know the same about you, your holiness or your kind of love
And it makes me feel so sorry"
While the NYC version had gone:
"I been double-crossed too much at times I think I've almost lost my mind
Lady killers load dice on me behind my back while imitators steal me blind
You close your eyes and part your lips and slip your fingers from your <???>
You can have the best there is but it's gonna cost you all your love
You won't get it for money"