The Unicorn Pool

[Tiddy Ogg]

I'd welcome comments and suggestions etc to my first game, which you
can get from here...
http://www.tiddyogg.co.uk/unipool.z5

[S. John Ross]

There are a lot of distracting spelling and punctuation errors, and a
lot of oddities with spacing and indentation, which make it difficult to
get into.

But it seems very charming and friendly so far! Just snag some testers
and have them send you some marked-up transcripts, and it'll do wonders
for the game.

[Poster]

In article <T6WVn.89934$Cy1....@news.usenetserver.com>,

I second John's words. In fact, I volunteer to be a beta-tester. There's
also the awesome site: http://if.game-testing.org/

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Poster

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[Tiddy Ogg]

On Mon, 28 Jun 2010 22:08:20 -0400, Poster <pos...@nospam.com> wrote:

>In article <T6WVn.89934$Cy1....@news.usenetserver.com>,
> "S. John Ross" <sj...@io.com> wrote:
>
>> Tiddy Ogg wrote:
>> > I'd welcome comments and suggestions etc to my first game, which you
>> > can get from here...
>> > http://www.tiddyogg.co.uk/unipool.z5
>>
>> There are a lot of distracting spelling and punctuation errors, and a
>> lot of oddities with spacing and indentation, which make it difficult to
>> get into.
>>
>> But it seems very charming and friendly so far! Just snag some testers
>> and have them send you some marked-up transcripts, and it'll do wonders
>> for the game.
>
>I second John's words. In fact, I volunteer to be a beta-tester. There's
>also the awesome site: http://if.game-testing.org/

Thanks folks. Poster, I'll take you up on that offer. Thanks.