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TNG Spoiler: Lynch's Spoiler Review: "Attached"

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Tim Lynch

Nov 22, 1993, 8:46:44 AM11/22/93
Lynch's Spoiler Review: "Attached"
Review by Tim Lynch <>

WARNING: This post contains spoiler information regarding "Attached", this
week's TNG episode. Unless you're attached to early spoilers, step lightly.

In brief: Contrived, but done with more grace than it had any right to be.
Not bad at all -- but oh, those last three minutes are annoying.

Even with those last three minutes, it was reasonably good, but that final
scene ticked me off. More (probably considerably more) after a synopsis:

The Enterprise is visiting Kesprytt Three to evaluate the Kes for possible
Federation membership. Unfortunately, Picard and Dr. Crusher's transporter
beam is diverted, sending them to a prison run by the more isolationist Prytt
race. The Prytt accuse them of conspiring to form a military alliance with
the Kes, and say they'll get all the information they need from the neural
implants in both Picard and Bev. Before long, however, the pair escape the
cell with the help of a nervous Kes spy.

On the Enterprise, meanwhile, the Kes ambassador, Mauric, apologizes deeply
for not preventing the abduction and begins planning a rescue mission. Riker
hedges, however, preferring to try a diplomatic solution first, despite
Mauric's insistence that the Prytt absolutely cannot be reasoned with.
Mauric asks to set up a "safe" base of operations on the Enterprise, and
reveals himself to be very security-conscious once he reaches his quarters.

As Picard and Bev continue their escape (narrowly avoiding plumes of flaming
gas), Riker manages to establish a link with the Prytt. However, the
connection is immediately broken, because the contact was not authorized.
Loren, representing the Prytt Security Ministry immediately calls back, livid,
and threatens the ship if they don't stop their hails. Mauric, hearing about
this from Riker, attempts to cheer him up by saying that his agents have
freed Picard and Bev. They adjourn to his quarters to discuss the details,
which involve quite a bit of cloak-and-dagger intrigue.

Picard and Bev, meanwhile, discover while traveling that the neural implants
are allowing them to read each others thoughts and emotions, at least on a
surface level. The experience is unsettling for both of them: stray,
uncontrolled thoughts lead to tension until they each realize that the other
cannot be held responsible for stray thoughts. What's more, when they
attempt to separate and weaken the psychic link, they find that they become
uncontrollably nauseous when too far apart. They continue their travels, and
the connection between them strengthens as they begin to find out more about
each other's hidden thoughts and fears. The situation changes, however, when
they spot a Prytt guard standing watch by the path they mean to take. They
decide to take an alternate route to the Kes border.

Riker and Worf go to talk to Mauric, who is very upset that Picard and Bev
have not shown up on schedule to the rendezvous. He accuses the Federation
of secretly allying itself with the Prytt, and insists on leaving the ship.

That night, Picard and Bev sit by a campfire, not far from the border. They
talk, slightly ill at ease by the other's proximity, but all is well. At
least, all is well until Beverly mentions Jack, at which point she picks up a
wave of emotion from Picard. She is taken aback -- while she'd always
realized there was an attraction between the two of them, she didn't realize
its extent. Picard, for his part, confesses that he never intended to let
anyone know of his one-time love for Beverly; after all, "you were married to
my best friend." He admits that these feelings were the reason he didn't
want her on the ship seven years before; he didn't know how he would react.
Now, though, they agree that all is well -- he doesn't have those feelings
any more. They try to settle down and get some sleep before the final run
for the border.

As the dawn breaks on the planet, Riker takes decisive action, beaming Lorin
up without permission and insisting that she, Riker and Mauric talk about the
missing officers. As Picard and Bev near the border, with Prytt guards in
pursuit, Riker blows his top, telling both in no uncertain terms that first,
the Kes are far too paranoid and suspicious to be granted Federation
membership, and second, that if Lorin doesn't help him *now*, the Federation
investigation into the missing people will widen to an extent that would
drive the Prytt government crazy. She agrees, and just as Bev is caught
after pushing Picard through a hole in the force-field, Lorin orders them
both returned to the Enterprise.

Some time later, after the implants have been removed, Picard asks Beverly
what they should do about their new understanding of each other. Now that
they've realized these feelings, he suggests, perhaps they should "not be
afraid" to explore them. Beverly leans in and gently kisses him, but then
responds, "Or perhaps we should be afraid. [...] I think I should be going
now." They part, and Jean-Luc broods over the wash of empty space.


That should cover that. Now, for the commentary.

"Attached" went in with one strike against it immediately. That strike is
something I alluded to when I saw the preview for the show. Namely, it seems
that in this, TNG's last season, the Trek universe somehow "knows" that TNG
is ending and is therefore rushing to create situations where everyone finds
out everything about everyone before we don't get to see it any more. That's
just silly. I said this to a friend and she responded, "It's Star Trek,
Tim." I'm aware of that much; so sue me if I hope against hope that
contrivances like this can be avoided. At any rate, the mere fact that this
"hidden feelings" show was being done now, so close to the end of the series,
suggested major contrivance that made me go in with a very skeptical

I was pleasantly surprised by most of it. The actual mechanics of the escape
were, of course, fairly silly and tacked-on -- but when the show is so
character-driven and when the character moments are *good*, I don't really
care if bits of the plot are silly. So, for the most part, I can forgive
things like the truly awful FX during the TNG version of the escape from the
Fire-Swamp, and the serious distance goof late in the show. (That goof was
this: Picard mentions when they turn off the road that the border is only 2
km away, yet later when they're by the fire, they apparently have "a lot of
ground to cover" the next day. For people in the kind of shape Picard and
Bev are, 2 km is probably twenty minutes away by a leisurely stroll.) The
characters are important.

And, for the first time in a while, the Picard/Bev friendship really shone
for me. Not so much the "moments" in the show (the number of times they
emphasized how compelling or how intimate some thought was became extremely
wearing, actually), but the little tidbits. The way Picard managed to
completely tune out what Bev had been talking about at breakfast, for
instance, is something that usually only happens with close friends. The
exchanges between them that went _unspoken_ were just as telling. I can't
put my finger on everything that said to me "yes, these are people that have
been good friends for a long time", but I got that feeling very strongly from
the episode nonetheless. I more or less expected that I would, but it was
nice to see that Stewart and McFadden did as good a job as I hoped they

I also expected the "unrevealed love" bit to be _extremely_ melodramatic and
fairly awful. There, fortunately, I was fairly pleasantly surprised. It did
not, as I feared, come about suddenly, as a "gasp! I can read your thoughts!
You've been in love with me for decades!" situation, which would have made my
skin crawl. Instead, we had several good aspects to it.

First, it took a specific trigger to bring the issue to the forefront. They
did a good job early on of establishing and mentioning all the clutter
churning around someone's thoughts, and as such they needed something to
actually provoke Picard to think about his feelings for Bev. Bev's reference
to a past event with Jack served that purpose well.

Second, what was revealed, mostly, was a _past_ love, not a current
situation. This wasn't a sudden "omigod, we're in love after all" revelation
-- rather, it was a vocalization of something that had been fairly well
suspected anyway: that there was, in the past, some strong emotion between
the two of them. That seems perfectly reasonable to me, and perfectly in
character for Picard to cover up. Picard, after all, is a character who
prides himself on poise and on reserve -- and his feelings of guilt over what
he *felt*, more than anything he *did*, make superb sense for the character
and were expressed extremely well. I like that, and I was also very relieved
to find that there wasn't any other hidden secret (like, say, Picard having
"let" Jack die and then agonized over it; that would be, well, pretty awful).

Had they ended merely with that revelation, I'd have been very impressed.
Unfortunately, the ending lost a lot of ground. While Picard having had
those feelings and felt uncomfortable about them is quite in character, I
think that having him suddenly decide to throw caution to the winds once the
feelings are revealed is *not* in character at all. It's something I might
possibly expect from Riker (or, getting away from Trek, from lots of
adolescents), but not from Picard. Even if he chose to do something about
it, I think it would be a bit more subtle than the "so, what do we do?"
approach. I simply didn't buy it. (The fact that the two did not, in fact,
join up as a couple gets them back some of what they lost, however. Maybe,
*maybe* in another half-dozen shows or so it can happen -- but not right

As an aside, I found it interesting that although Picard's feelings were
revealed, we never found out anything about whether Bev *shares* those
feelings. It's implied a bit that she does (with the "mutual attraction"
line and her agreeing in the ending about "those feelings"), but nobody ever
comes out and says that Bev feels for Picard what he does for her. (As Lisa
just said to me, Picard makes the stereotypically male assumption that anyone
he's attracted to _must_ be attracted to him...) I actually find that lack
of mutual revelation a bit refreshing; nice touch.

That pretty much takes care of the main plot of the show. As for the Kes and
the Prytt, I have to say that I enjoyed that plot a lot. It wasn't
particularly deep or meaningful, but it was fun. We decided midway through
the show that we had a planet full of clones of "MASH"'s Colonel Flagg and
had a hell of a time laughing all the while afterwards. :-)

That should do it. I only have one short comment, so I'll make it here:
_Why_ wasn't Bev's analogy to Australia an apt one? I thought it seemed very
apt, and I also wanted to hear the answer to the question. :-)

In sum, then, "Attached" is a heck of a lot better than I expected it to be.
It was contrived going in and can't escape that, and the last three minutes
keep it from being really strong, but it was a fairly good, introspective
show -- and I can live with that.

So, to wrap up:

Plot: Goofy, but solid. Only the occasional bits of idiocy like the
fire-jets really seemed out of place.
Plot Handling: Frakes does his usual excellent job directing. Nice work.
Characterization: Aside from some very forced dialogue and the entire
ending, excellent.

OVERALL: Call it a 7.5. Not top-notch, but one of the better shows this
season so far.


Warp engines are destroying the galaxy. I *hate* when that happens.

Tim Lynch (Harvard-Westlake School, Science Dept.)
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