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[ENT] Jammer's Review: "Demons"

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Jamahl Epsicokhan

Jun 12, 2005, 12:53:19 AM6/12/05
Note: This review contains significant spoilers.

In brief: A good Trekkian allegory, although the storytelling is awfully

Plot description: After returning to Earth for a conference that may
establish a new alliance between Earth and several alien societies,
Starfleet becomes aware of a human isolationist movement that plans to
derail the proceedings.

Star Trek: Enterprise - "Demons"

Airdate: 5/6/2005 (USA)
Written by Manny Coto
Directed by LeVar Burton

Review by Jamahl Epsicokhan
Rating out of 4: ***

"You're behind this." -- Detective Charles Tucker III

"Demons" tells a pretty good story in an exceptionally average way. The
ideas are here, but the juice is lacking. As I look over my notes, I see
that they outline a pretty decent -- but not great -- story. "Demons" at
least has the temerity to have a point, unlike "Bound" or "In a Mirror,

I guess the real problem is that, as Enterprise winds to a close and Star
Trek is about to go away, I don't have many strong feelings about this
episode at all. Maybe it's just my typical end-of-season malaise. It
happens. If Star Trek is out of gas, then so am I.

Which is maybe sort of unfair to "Demons." After all, here's a story that's
about Earth and its internal problems, which is a relevant thing to consider
before Earth can become a part of an interplanetary alliance. There's a
conference being held on Earth in which the Vulcans, Andorians, and
Tellarites have all arrived to work on a historic alliance. The Enterprise
crew looks on and applauds, but Trip grumbles over the fact that Minister
Groener (Nathan Samuels) has all but taken full credit for the conference
and has left Enterprise out of the story. "I'm sure history will reflect our
contribution," Archer says. "Not if he's the one who's writing it," Trip
responds. Perhaps the exchange is a reference to the fact that Enterprise,
as a prequel series, was not known by any of its sequels.

But away from the negotiation table, trouble is brewing. A radical
isolationist movement called Terra Prime is plotting ... something. It
involves their custody of a six-month-old Vulcan/human child and a hotbed of
radical plotting at the Orpheus Mining Facility on the moon, which is owned
by John Frederick Paxton (Peter Weller), leader of the Terra Prime movement.
The plot thickens when a Terra Prime member abandons the movement, is shot
dead by her own people, but not before revealing the existence of the child
to Archer -- and the fact that it's the offspring of Trip and T'Pol.

Archer immediately opens an investigation. Meanwhile, Trip and T'Pol are
baffled: T'Pol has never been pregnant, so how can this be their child? The
mystery of the child and Terra Prime prompts Archer to send Reed back to
Agent Harris (Eric Pierpoint) to get Section 31's leads. Is this a good
idea? After all, it's Archer who forced Reed to choose one side or the other
in "Divergence." Now Archer sends him back to Harris, who seems likely to
strong-arm Reed back into the agency. This might've been an interesting
setup to a thread if the show were coming back for a fifth season.

Archer has his own shrewd methods for getting information; he subtly
blackmails Minister Samuels with exposure (Samuels had briefly and
misguidedly joined Terra Prime at age 18) if he doesn't open up more
investigative avenues. Subsequently, Archer sends Trip and T'Pol to the moon
to investigate leads at the mining colony.

The episode's wild card is a reporter named Gannett (Johanna Watts), who is
an old girlfriend of Travis. She wants an inside scoop about the Enterprise,
and she also wants to get with Travis again. Travis is less enthusiastic;
their relationship obviously didn't end on the best note. I've bemoaned for
years the lack of characterization for Travis, and this episode seems to at
least make an effort to give him something to do.

But let it also be said that the episode is very obvious in following the
rule that no guest character can be inconsequential to the main plot. Is
Gannett just a reporter looking for a story? Please. Eventually, Travis and
Gannett are making out in a shuttlepod. Subsequently, Travis gets laid and
pumped for information. These scenes might've worked better if the actors
weren't so wooden about them, but the actors seemingly exist only in a plot
and not in the moment. I didn't buy any emotional history between these two.
What I did buy is that they are a function of a bigger puzzle. It comes as
no surprise that by the end of the episode Gannett is in the brig, charged
with being a Terra Prime spy.

The best aspect of the show is the idea of isolationists and the allegorical
themes. The enemy in the story is Earth's own xenophobia (particularly since
the Xindi attack). Even before the attack, Terra Prime believed Earth to be
humanity's domain, and humanity's alone. Like many radical groups, Terra
Prime simply believes what they are doing is right. Paxton has a moment
where he reflects upon the "misunderstood" Colonel Green, made famous in the
aftermath of World War III because Green "euthanized" millions who suffered
from radiation poisoning. Paxton views it as an act of mercy that spared
generations from genetic defects. Green is generally remembered as a
butcher, and Paxton wonders if he will have a similar legacy.

Paxton sees interbreeding between humans and aliens as an unhealthy
corruption of DNA. He and Terra Prime are essentially the 22nd-century
equivalent of white supremacists or racial purists. (There are black actors
portraying prominent lieutenants in Terra Prime, and I wonder if that irony
was a deliberate casting choice.) Terra Prime also uses the sort of
anti-government rhetoric that's similar to that of current-day extremists.

Paxton's lunar mining facility doubles as a spaceship, which he pilots to
Mars and uses to take control of its verteron array, normally used to
deflect asteroids and comets throughout the solar system. From this station
he can fire on any ship or facility in the system. He makes an ultimatum:
Either all non-humans in the system leave, or Paxton will use the verteron
array as a weapon. (Shouldn't this thing have been under much heavier

What I like about "Demons" is that the villain is ourselves -- at least, a
subset of ourselves via a particular way of thinking. What I find lacking is
the somewhat mechanical advancement of the plot. It's too routine to be
exciting, and too pat to be believable. Paxton is a villain of ideology,
yes, but not a particularly interesting one. He doesn't rise above adequacy.
Peter Weller's voice suggests plentiful arrogance, but more as a stylized
presence than as a real demagogue. This is an episode that always feels
scripted, even though the script itself is pretty good.

Next week: Two finales for the price of two.

Copyright 2005, Jamahl Epsicokhan. All rights reserved.
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