[TNG] Lynch's Spoiler Review: "Aquiel"
Timothy W. Lynch
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Bleh. What a waste of time *that* was.
While I've been unsatisfied by TNG episodes on occasion, I don't usually
feel that my time was simply wasted. This is a rare exception. I'll rant
later, but first (of course), it's synopsis time:
The Enterprise investigates a relay station which has gone silent, but find
only a stray dog and "cellular residue" which appears to be the remains of
one of the station's two officers. Nearby blood traces are those of the
junior officer, Lt. Aquiel Uhnari, so it is assumed that the residue is hers.
A search begins for the second officer, one Lt. Keith Rocha, and for the
station's missing shuttlecraft, which Rocha presumably took. Meanwhile,
Geordi searches the station logs for any trace of evidence, but due to
station damage can get no more than Uhnari's personal correspondence with her
sister. After seeing dozens of these logs, Geordi comes to feel as though he
knows "Aquiel", and also has at least a suspicion or two about her murder.
The station is near Klingon space, and a Klingon commander, Morag, is cited
in Aquiel's logs as repeatedly harassing the station -- a situation which
added tension to an already chilly relationship between Aquiel and Rocha.
Picard, seeking to cover the Klingon angle, speaks to the local Klingon
governor, Torak, and through veiled threats about bringing Gowron in to
examine Torak's work, manages to convince Torak to help with the
investigation. However, when Torak's ship arrives, the investigation is
thrown into an uproar -- for on board is Lt. Aquiel Uhnari, very much alive.
Aquiel claims that Rocha suddenly attacked her for no reason, and that she
remembers nothing after the attack. Meanwhile, as new evidence showing a
Klingon presence on the station comes to light, Picard demands to be allowed
to speak to Morag about his involvement in the matter; Torak grudgingly
agrees. As work continues on analyzing the cellular residue, now expected to
be Rocha's remains, Geordi and Aquiel start forming a close friendship,
despite (or perhaps because of) Geordi admitting to advance knowledge of her
through her logs.
A search of Rocha's record turns up a spotless and bright career, and a
similar search of Aquiel's file shows an argumentative, difficult officer.
In addition, a search of Aquiel's shuttle reveals the missing phaser from the
station's weapons locker, set to a level high enough to kill. Riker and Worf
confront Aquiel with this information, but desist when she protests innocence
and Geordi defends her. All agree to wait for Morag's imminent arrival, but
Riker strongly suggests, off the record, that Geordi distance himself
somewhat from Aquiel until the situation is understood.
Morag arrives, and admits to boarding the station when hails went unanswered.
Under further pressure, he admits to covertly obtaining some coded messages,
but claims to have killed no one. Picard orders that he remain aboard.
Meanwhile, however, Geordi finally gains access to Rocha's logs, only to find
several missing. He discovers that Aquiel erased those logs because they
contained a harsh letter to Starfleet about her attitude, and points out that
she's digging herself in deeper by destroying evidence. He convinces her not
to run, and they become romantically involved. She invites him to join her
in a rite that increases intimacy for her species, and he joyfully accepts.
Dr. Crusher's analysis of the cellular residue reveals something startling:
it is not from Lt. Rocha at all. Rather, it is a peculiarly structured DNA
typical of that of a "coalescent organism", an organism that consumes, then
becomes, new bodies periodically to survive. The conclusion she and everyone
else reaches is that "Rocha" was in fact a coalescent by the time he arrived
on the station, and that he attacked Aquiel to get a new body. They conclude
that either Morag or Aquiel is currently the same coalescent, and put both
under close examination, ruining Aquiel's rite with Geordi just in time.
Geordi, bitter over what he sees as unfair treatment of Aquiel, rests in his
quarters -- but quickly finds that the coalescent is in fact Aquiel's "dog",
Mora. It attacks him and attempts to absorb him, but he destroys it just in
time. Her name cleared, Aquiel heads to starbase 212 for reassignment,
thinking that she might put her name on the long waiting list for a position
on the Enterprise.
There we are. Now, on to the discussion:
This review will be rather short, for two reasons. First, I'm somewhat
pressed for time this weekend. Second, however, there isn't really that much
I have to *say* about the show this time. There are a few comments that come
to mind, but for the most part two viewings of the episode have raised
extremely little commentary.
First, a note on the characters. If I was somehow supposed to feel some sort
of strong emotion, pro or con, about Aquiel, then something went wrong. The
strongest emotion about her I felt was "Geez, couldn't they have found a more
interesting character or a better actress?" Her letters home to her sister
had some plot advancement in them much of the time, but nothing whatsoever
that made me sit up and want to know more about the character. (Her dreams
about her mother's house may be an exception to that, but even there it's
pushing things.) I'm not sure exactly what Jeri Taylor had in mind when she
came up with the story here, but whatever it was didn't make it as far as my
living room. (It's rare that the *intent* is so masked. "The Outcast", for
instance, was also written by Ms. Taylor, and was also an episode I didn't
care for that much -- but there I could tell very easily what she was
*trying* to do with it. Here, I honestly have no idea.)
Perhaps worse, I also didn't find myself caring about Geordi's involvement in
all this one way or the other. There was at least one bright spot involved,
when Geordi showed in Ten-Forward that he may have learned a thing or two
about confessing advance knowledge from Leah Brahms, but for the most part I
felt as if this was a Geordi I knew little or nothing about and didn't have
the interest to get to know further.
I'd love to be able to say, then, that the plot had enough interest in it to
keep my attention focused. I can't, however, because it didn't. In fact,
there were some situations in "Aquiel" which simply stood up in front
of me and simply felt *wrong*. For instance:
-- Why is it that "Aquiel" felt like the Klingon/Federation truce was 20
*months* old rather than 20 *years* old? Even Vagh in "The Mind's Eye" was a
lot less aggressive than Morag and Torak here, and Vagh had a lot more cause.
Picard's concern about preventing any sort of diplomatic incident seems
grossly misplaced, given that the alliance survived such things as the
conviction of J'Ddan in "The Drumhead" for selling Federation secrets to
Romulans. Why was this such a big deal? This just didn't feel right.
-- Then, of course, we have lines that were scripted in just precisely the
wrong way, leading to some unintended humor. I couldn't help chuckling, for
instance, when Worf found it clearly sinister that "there are traces of
Klingon DNA aboard the station...but only from *one* Klingon." Um, well --
gee, Worf, but wouldn't that mean Morag couldn't have come on board? Look in
a *mirror*, friend...
-- The dog. Folks, I'm sorry, but I rather suspect most people had the pooch
pegged as the problem well before hints of it showed up on screen. Again,
that sort of advance knowledge isn't always a problem -- but it sure is when
the plot's a mystery.
I'll try not to talk too much about the Mangled Science [TM] here, because by
this time it's par for the course, at least biologically. ("Motile" DNA?
Come on...)
I'm trying hard to think of something positive to say about the show, but
it's very much uphill work. "Aquiel" strikes me as a show that failed to
reach me on any level at all, and that's exceedingly rare for TNG. That
said, I think it's best if I simply end here and hope this doesn't happen
again for a long time, if ever.
So, the numbers:
Plot: 3. A potentially intriguing mystery made totally obvious and trite.
Plot Handling: 3. Based on the number of times I looked at my watch, this
might be *generous*...
Characterization: 1. What characterization?
TOTAL: 2. Ouch. Please, guys, you can do so much better than this...
NEXT WEEK:
Troi gets a particularly Romulan facelift to help out a defector.
Tim Lynch (Harvard-Westlake School, Science Dept.)
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Jason John Seaver
>WARNING: This post contains spoiler information regarding "Aquiel", TNG's
>most recent episode. Those wishing to see the show uncontaminated by
>excessive spoilage should remain clear.
>Bleh. What a waste of time *that* was.
>First, a note on the characters. If I was somehow supposed to feel some sort
>of strong emotion, pro or con, about Aquiel, then something went wrong. The
>strongest emotion about her I felt was "Geez, couldn't they have found a more
>interesting character or a better actress?" Her letters home to her sister
>had some plot advancement in them much of the time, but nothing whatsoever
>that made me sit up and want to know more about the character. (Her dreams
>about her mother's house may be an exception to that, but even there it's
>pushing things.) I'm not sure exactly what Jeri Taylor had in mind when she
>came up with the story here, but whatever it was didn't make it as far as my
>living room.
I think the whole purpose of the story was to introduce a new recurring
character. Usually TNG doesn't "waste time" with as much unimportant-to-the-
story background on a guest.
>I'd love to be able to say, then, that the plot had enough interest in it to
>keep my attention focused. I can't, however, because it didn't. In fact,
>there were some situations in "Aquiel" which simply stood up in front
>of me and simply felt *wrong*. For instance:
I can't figure out why I couldn't either. I mean, I *LIKE* murder
mysteries. A lot. And Geordi's one of my favorite characters. And the
delicate diplomatic situation with the Klingon Empire could be really
interesting if done right. But nothing happened.
>-- Why is it that "Aquiel" felt like the Klingon/Federation truce was 20
>*months* old rather than 20 *years* old?
Well, it's seemed ever since Redemption that Klingon/Federation
relations have been somewhat strained. For example, in Unification Gowron
(through his adjutant (?)) seemed pretty reluctant to talk with Picard. And
then there's the little matter of the warships sold to the Ferengi pirates :-).
Also, the Klingons may be kind of broke after their little civil war, but the
Feds might also be hurtin' after the Borg incident and may have cut back on the
foreign aid. And just recently the Federation allowed Lhursa and B'Etor to
show up on a starbase managed by Starfleet without capturing and extradicting
them! Things seem to have gotten worse with the Klingons lately, rather than
better.
>I couldn't help chuckling when Worf found it clearly sinister that "there are
>traces of Klingon DNA aboard the station...but only from *one* Klingon." Um,
>well -- gee, Worf, but wouldn't that mean Morag couldn't have come on board?
>Look in a *mirror*, friend...
That was pretty funny. The writers REALLY dropped the ball and allowed
it to roll into that tricky corner in right field on that one...
>-- The dog. Folks, I'm sorry, but I rather suspect most people had the pooch
>pegged as the problem well before hints of it showed up on screen. Again,
>that sort of advance knowledge isn't always a problem -- but it sure is when
>the plot's a mystery.
It also stunk that WNAC in Providence asked as a "trivia question" for
some idiot promotion "What does Aquiel's dog turn into?" halfway through the
episode. They've just lost my viewership for TNG (still the only way to get
DS9, though).
It's a shame. This show could have been good, and it's hard for me to
place the blame. LeVar Burton wasn't bad, and the story was good at its core.
I almost want to ask whether Patrick Stewart directed this one, or whether it
was another inept director.
Iain Odlin
>it's very much uphill work. "Aquiel" strikes me as a show that failed to
>reach me on any level at all, and that's exceedingly rare for TNG. That
>said, I think it's best if I simply end here and hope this doesn't happen
>again for a long time, if ever.
>
I agree totally with the assessment, but I can think of one good thing to
say about the episode: The sets and special effects (with the possible
exception of the coalescent entit(y/ies)) were very good. I liked the
new computer readouts, too [ie: when Geordi tells the computer to display
the roster for the next three days in the end]. IMHO, the relay station
was the first time a space station or lab in TNG has *looked* like what it
was supposed to be. (That and those big readouts must be chock full of
in-jokes and I wish I could read them)
Next week, though, as always (?), looks pretty darn good. Shall we lay bets
on how many ways *it* will be absolutely awful?
Ah! I just thought of another point for the episode: It had NO ALEXANDER!
-Me
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*months* old rather than 20 *years* old? Even Vagh in "The Mind's Eye" was
a
lot less aggressive than Morag and Torak here, and Vagh had a lot more cause
grossly misplaced, given that the alliance survived such things as the
conviction of J'Ddan in "The Drumhead" for selling Federation secrets to
Romulans. Why was this such a big deal? This just didn't feel right.
Wasn't there was also some statement by Picard that there had been
no Klingon raids in that area for (I swear I heard it as) _seven_
years?! Other than that, it seemed to be a setup for Stewart's
little star turn with Picard showing a grasp of diplomatic blackmail-
Cooperate or I'll tell Gowron!! Cute - I laughed through it.
Tim Lynch (Harvard-Westlake School, Science Dept.)
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Kent Campbell
> I think the whole purpose of the story was to introduce a new recurring
> character. Usually TNG doesn't "waste time" with as much unimportant-to-the-
> story background on a guest.
I got that feeling too. I do think Aquiel Uhnari will be showing up again
sometime soon. Remember another episode named after a Starfleet officer?
"Ensign Ro"? I guess that's why this episode felt so flat, because there was
too much time spent introducing a character rather than progressing the plot.
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Ensign Ro, she appeared in a couple of episodes, but has sort of disappeared
from view now.
Anthony G. Francis
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>The station is near Klingon space, and a Klingon commander, Morag, is cited
Weren't the people of Mara in _The Belgariad_ called the Marag?
> ... speaks to the local Klingon governor, Torak
Wasn't the evil god in _The Belgariad_ called Torak?
Has TNG run out of anime references and decided to move to fantasy series?
Some of the other names in the episode seemed familiar, but I couldn't
place them of the top of my head.
-Anthony Francis
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I must agree...blech...
I kept wishing for more from this episode while it unfolded, but it wound
up being a "Creature From Space Attacks The Crew!" episode.
At first, I thought that it was going to be a statement about sexual
harrasment. Here we have an officer who isn't a model officer and knows it.
She's prone to confrontations and can't remember what happened. We know
very little about the other person on board the station, except according
to her, he was an ogre.
By adding in the Klingon that could have had another level of depth. Did he
plot with her and was something going on between them? Either way, if it
still wound up to be an alien, and it played out the way it did, the intermediate
confusion as to the motive would have been a LOT more interesting. Instead all we
got was an alien that attacked and killed a dog.
Also, they KILLED the alien. Was anyone else taken aback by this? What happened
to the old TNG where all "evil" aliens aren't inherently good or evil, and that
they're only acting out of instinct and the will to survive? I was pretty shocked
by the whole thing.
And...why didn't Geordi call for help when he was being attacked? He had his comm
badge on.
Steve
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Joshua A. Laff
:)Spoilers follow...
:)I must agree...blech...
:)At first, I thought that it was going to be a statement about sexual
:)harrasment. Here we have an officer who isn't a model officer and knows it.
:)She's prone to confrontations and can't remember what happened. We know
:)very little about the other person on board the station, except according
:)to her, he was an ogre.
Actually, I was thinking the same thing at first, and I think it might have
been a much better plot if it was the storyline.
:)Also, they KILLED the alien. Was anyone else taken aback by this? What happene
:)to the old TNG where all "evil" aliens aren't inherently good or evil, and tha
:)they're only acting out of instinct and the will to survive? I was pretty shoc
:)by the whole thing.
All "evil" aliens aren't inherently good or evil unless they're about half a
second from having you for lunch. :)
:)And...why didn't Geordi call for help when he was being attacked? He had his c
:)badge on.
This could have been an interesting conversation...
"LaForge to Enterprise! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!"
Honestly, he didn't really have the time.
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