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James Nicoll

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Nov 9, 2006, 3:36:15 PM11/9/06
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There is the ideal of the government, as it is envisioned
when people are putting it together [1] and then there is the actual
goverment in practice, which is sometimes a little different. Take,
for example, the Canadian Senate, which was supposed to be the house
of sober second thought and which has sometimes not even got as far
as the sober part before derailing.

I can think of two examples where theory got nutted when it
met practice: AN ENEMY OF THE STATE, where the motivating philosophy
of the revolutionary protagonist never caught on (and is widely
regarded as a bit peculiar by the time of HEALER, written first and
set later) and THE MOON IS A HARSH MISTRESS, where thanks to a timely
death and an apparent lobotomy, hands other than the original cabal
shaped what was to come.

Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?


1: In those cases where they did, rather than letting it evolve
naturally. In general, SF prefers nations with definite points of
origin, probably because they are tidier.
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Tim McDaniel

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Nov 9, 2006, 5:10:43 PM11/9/06
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In article <ej03fv$133$1...@reader2.panix.com>,

James Nicoll <jdni...@panix.com> wrote:
> Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?

Leave aside Rome-in-Space (the Flandry stories, The General series by
Stirling and/or Drake and/or ...), or other examples of fiction where
you can asily read the serial number under the perfunctory file marks.

You might consider Katherine Kurtz, _Camber the Heretic_. Cinhil set
up a regency council of five regents for his son Alroy. One of them
was his friend, a bishop (who happens to be [spoiler]), who is
supposed to be a calming and pro-Deryni voice. I think decisions had
to be unanimous. However, one of the regents had slipped in another
law into a stack of things for Cinhil to sign, and he had. It
provided that under such-and-so conditions (which happened to include
the regency council) one member of a council could be removed and
replaced by a vote of the rest of the council. Which happens fairly
soon, of course, they bounce the bishop and put in a crony, and
Gwynnedd is on its way to the Deryni Purges.

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Eric Walker

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Nov 9, 2006, 5:16:47 PM11/9/06
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James Nicoll wrote:

> . . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design


> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?

While it's only a chapter (Chapter 2, to be exact) rather than the
focus of the book in which it appears, the world of New Concept, as
mentioned in Jack Vance's _Book of Dreams_, seems an excellent
exemplar. The quotation that opens the chapter, nominally from
_Civilized Ideas and Civilized Worlds_, by Michael Yeaton, is
especially apposite.

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norrin

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Nov 9, 2006, 6:43:46 PM11/9/06
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James Nicoll wrote:
> There is the ideal of the government, as it is envisioned
> when people are putting it together [1] and then there is the actual
> goverment in practice, which is sometimes a little different. Take,
> for example, the Canadian Senate, which was supposed to be the house
> of sober second thought and which has sometimes not even got as far
> as the sober part before derailing.
>
> I can think of two examples where theory got nutted when it
> met practice: AN ENEMY OF THE STATE, where the motivating philosophy
> of the revolutionary protagonist never caught on (and is widely
> regarded as a bit peculiar by the time of HEALER, written first and
> set later) and THE MOON IS A HARSH MISTRESS, where thanks to a timely
> death and an apparent lobotomy, hands other than the original cabal
> shaped what was to come.

IIRC, two out of four members of the cabal survived. That's
half of the brains and sixty percent of the hands. They
didn't become the new warden, but they were important
members of the community.

> Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?

The results of the revolution in DUNE are a surprise to the
reader, if not the protagonist. There are other books by
Frank Herbert where the protagonists encounter unexpected
consequences of their actions and choices.

Robert Shaw

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Nov 10, 2006, 3:26:20 AM11/10/06
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Tim McDaniel wrote:
> James Nicoll <jdni...@panix.com> wrote:
>> Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
>
> Leave aside Rome-in-Space (the Flandry stories, The General series by
> Stirling and/or Drake and/or ...), or other examples of fiction where
> you can asily read the serial number under the perfunctory file marks.
>
> You might consider Katherine Kurtz, _Camber the Heretic_. Cinhil set
> up a regency council of five regents for his son Alroy. One of them
> was his friend, a bishop (who happens to be [spoiler]), who is
> supposed to be a calming and pro-Deryni voice. I think decisions had
> to be unanimous. However, one of the regents had slipped in another
> law into a stack of things for Cinhil to sign, and he had. It
> provided that under such-and-so conditions (which happened to include
> the regency council) one member of a council could be removed and
> replaced by a vote of the rest of the council. Which happens fairly
> soon, of course

Later, one of the regents who cooked up this scheme is themselves
removed by it, and I think executed - standard irony.


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Robert Shaw

Hallvard B Furuseth

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Nov 10, 2006, 3:24:28 PM11/10/06
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James Nicoll writes:
> There is the ideal of the government, as it is envisioned
> when people are putting it together [1] and then there is the actual
> goverment in practice, which is sometimes a little different.
> (...)

> Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?

I can't imagine the Barrayaran government works like anyone
intended, though it's beginning to resemble someone's idea of a
government now.

More generally, there ought to be plenty of examples to find among
Our Heroes' enemies, whoever Our Heroes are.

Maybe not what you are looking for but:

Spoilers for some others follow...


In _For the Duration_ by Poul Anderson, the successful rebels'
government find they have to just keep on acting like the ruthless
dictator they replaced. ("But it's only for the duration of the
emergency...")

Similarly, there is the government of the People's Republic of Haven,
desperately replaying the French Revolution to stay alive. From
<http://www.webscription.net/chapters/0671319809/0671319809___7.htm>:
[Rob Pierre] laughed bitterly, without mirth. Smash the system.
Oh, that was a good one! He'd done just that, wiped away the
Legislaturalists (...) He'd achieved all that in less than a
single T-year, at the cost of more thousands of lives than he
dared remember . . . and "the system" sneered at his efforts.

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Nancy Lebovitz

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Nov 10, 2006, 3:59:21 PM11/10/06
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In article <ej03fv$133$1...@reader2.panix.com>,
James Nicoll <jdni...@panix.com> wrote:
> There is the ideal of the government, as it is envisioned
>when people are putting it together [1] and then there is the actual
>goverment in practice, which is sometimes a little different. Take,
>for example, the Canadian Senate, which was supposed to be the house
>of sober second thought and which has sometimes not even got as far
>as the sober part before derailing.

I suspect the worlds in Barnes' _A Million Open Doors_ series were
intended to work out a little better.
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Stanislaus. B

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Nov 11, 2006, 4:26:51 PM11/11/06
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On 9 Nov 2006 14:16:47 -0800, "Eric Walker" <em...@owlcroft.com>
wrote:

>James Nicoll wrote:
>
>> . . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
>
>While it's only a chapter (Chapter 2, to be exact) rather than the
>focus of the book in which it appears, the world of New Concept, as
>mentioned in Jack Vance's _Book of Dreams_, seems an excellent
>exemplar. The quotation that opens the chapter, nominally from
>_Civilized Ideas and Civilized Worlds_, by Michael Yeaton, is
>especially apposite.

I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of
unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be quite
unreligious, or that communist city on Alastor, or the society in
Emphyrio.

Danny Sichel

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Nov 11, 2006, 8:23:02 PM11/11/06
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Stanislaus. B wrote:

>>>. . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>>>of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?

> I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of


> unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
> founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be quite unreligious

I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist apocalyptic
Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship, since they knew it
was the End Times).

The first Schism was within a year of landing; by the time the story
starts 200 years later, every village on the planet has declared all the
others to be vile heretics.

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Dan Goodman

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Nov 11, 2006, 10:47:09 PM11/11/06
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Danny Sichel wrote:

> Stanislaus. B wrote:
>
> > > > . . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the
> > > > design of the government turned out to produce unexpected
> > > > results?
>
> > I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of
> > unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
> > founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be
> > quite unreligious
>
> I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
> which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist
> apocalyptic Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship,
> since they knew it was the End Times).
>
> The first Schism was within a year of landing; by the time the story
> starts 200 years later, every village on the planet has declared all
> the others to be vile heretics.

Unless they all travelled in coldsleep, I don't see how they could
avoid splits till landing. And even then, if the crew was awake....

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Walter Bushell

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Nov 11, 2006, 10:28:13 PM11/11/06
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In article <45566669$0$21141$8826...@free.teranews.com>,
Danny Sichel <dsi...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Stanislaus. B wrote:
>
> >>>. . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
> >>>of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
>
> > I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of
> > unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
> > founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be quite
> > unreligious
>
> I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
> which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist apocalyptic
> Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship, since they knew it
> was the End Times).
>
> The first Schism was within a year of landing; by the time the story
> starts 200 years later, every village on the planet has declared all the
> others to be vile heretics.
>

About what one would expect. Without major changes they are going to
have genetic problems from inbreeding.

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David Johnston

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Nov 11, 2006, 11:09:41 PM11/11/06
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On Sat, 11 Nov 2006 22:28:13 -0500, Walter Bushell <pr...@panix.com>
wrote:


>> The first Schism was within a year of landing; by the time the story
>> starts 200 years later, every village on the planet has declared all the
>> others to be vile heretics.
>>
>
>About what one would expect. Without major changes they are going to
>have genetic problems from inbreeding.

I wouldn't be surprised to hear that they steal women from each other.
That's how that problem is generally solved without doing something
drastic like trying to get along.

Lawrence Watt-Evans

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Nov 12, 2006, 12:10:57 AM11/12/06
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On Sat, 11 Nov 2006 20:23:02 -0500, Danny Sichel <dsi...@gmail.com>
wrote:

>Stanislaus. B wrote:
>
>>>>. . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>>>>of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
>
>> I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of
>> unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
>> founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be quite unreligious
>
>I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
>which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist apocalyptic
>Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship, since they knew it
>was the End Times).

Actually it was founded by a coalition of several similar
fundamentalist sects, which is why it disintegrated so quickly. If it
had been a single group I estimate they'd have lasted a decade or so
before the first serious schism.

They needed to join forces to afford the ship, even under a government
that was actively encoyuraging fringe groups to emigrate at the time.
And yes, they did use cold sleep, which is why there weren't any
splits until after they landed.

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William December Starr

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Nov 12, 2006, 3:36:23 AM11/12/06
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In article <proto-111B7F....@reader2.panix.com>,
Walter Bushell <pr...@panix.com> said:

Which from the sound of things could only improve them.

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Walter Bushell

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Nov 12, 2006, 5:50:56 PM11/12/06
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In article <ltadl29m27vur329n...@news.rcn.com>,
Lawrence Watt-Evans <l...@sff.net> wrote:

> On Sat, 11 Nov 2006 20:23:02 -0500, Danny Sichel <dsi...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> >Stanislaus. B wrote:
> >
> >>>>. . . Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
> >>>>of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
> >
> >> I think that in works of Vance you can find as many examples of
> >> unexpected results of society design as you wish. Eg - many colonies
> >> founded by religious minorities and sects, that turn out to be quite
> >> unreligious
> >
> >I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
> >which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist apocalyptic
> >Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship, since they knew it
> >was the End Times).
>
> Actually it was founded by a coalition of several similar
> fundamentalist sects, which is why it disintegrated so quickly. If it
> had been a single group I estimate they'd have lasted a decade or so
> before the first serious schism.
>
> They needed to join forces to afford the ship, even under a government
> that was actively encoyuraging fringe groups to emigrate at the time.
> And yes, they did use cold sleep, which is why there weren't any
> splits until after they landed.

One thing, that is bad is a religious war on a spacecraft, particularly
among religions that are similar.

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David Cowie

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Nov 13, 2006, 3:25:20 PM11/13/06
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On Sun, 12 Nov 2006 17:50:56 -0500, Walter Bushell wrote:

> One thing, that is bad is a religious war on a spacecraft, particularly
> among religions that are similar.

_Iron Council_ by China Mieville has a civil war on a *train*. The
survivors refer to that period as "the idiocy".

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Jesper Lauridsen

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Nov 14, 2006, 6:29:29 PM11/14/06
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On 2006-11-12, Walter Bushell <pr...@panix.com> wrote:
>
> One thing, that is bad is a religious war on a spacecraft, particularly
> among religions that are similar.

ObSF: Red Dwarf.

Robert Carnegie

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Nov 15, 2006, 11:18:46 PM11/15/06
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Danny Sichel wrote:
> I'm recalling the colony planet Godsworld, in LWE's _Shining Steel_,
> which was settled by the members of an ultrafundamentalist apocalyptic
> Christian sect (they saved up and bought a slowship, since they knew it
> was the End Times).

Slowship... was actually arriving at their destination before the
Rapture on their agenda? Or did they expect only Earth to be done away
with, and they'd be safe in the sky?

As for the original question... I suppose the classical utopias and
dystopias may often qualify for unintended consequences. By
"classical" I mean those that don't admit to being science fiction.

Then there's Oedipus. I think the ancient play has him legislating
against himself without realising it.

And Lewis Carroll's _Sylvie & Bruno_ and its sequel or second half - in
one or the other, a country is described as having adopted the British
system, I think, of a political party of government checked by another
party in opposition to the first. (With the usual arrangement of
elections, I suppose.) However, they interpreted opposition to the
point that if one party arranged for crops to be planted, the
opposition would dig them up again immediately, and so forth.

Konrad Gaertner

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Nov 16, 2006, 5:14:42 PM11/16/06
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Robert Carnegie wrote:
>
> Then there's Oedipus. I think the ancient play has him legislating
> against himself without realising it.

He starts a large investigation into who murdered his predecessor,
only to find out it was himself.

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Walter Bushell

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Nov 16, 2006, 6:24:37 PM11/16/06
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In article <1163647640.2...@b28g2000cwb.googlegroups.com>,
"Robert Carnegie" <rja.ca...@excite.com> wrote:

> Then there's Oedipus. I think the ancient play has him legislating
> against himself without realising it.

That would be Kinging against himself, there being no legislature extant.

Hard to enforce rules against a King.

When he saw what he had done,
He tore his eyes out one by one.
A tragic end to a loyal son.
Who loved his mother.

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Dan Tilque

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Nov 19, 2006, 4:28:31 AM11/19/06
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Hallvard B Furuseth wrote:

> James Nicoll writes:
>> There is the ideal of the government, as it is envisioned
>> when people are putting it together [1] and then there is the
>> actual goverment in practice, which is sometimes a little
>> different. (...)
>> Any more clear examples of a fictional state where the design
>> of the government turned out to produce unexpected results?
>
> I can't imagine the Barrayaran government works like anyone
> intended, though it's beginning to resemble someone's idea of a
> government now.

It's hard to plan for natural disasters like the wormhole
collapse, so maybe we should give them a break on that one.

But there was no wormhole collapse for Athos (in the same
universe) and look what happened there. As I understand it, the
Founding Fathers intended it to be a religious colony, much like
its namesake here on Earth.

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William December Starr

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Dec 4, 2006, 1:49:55 PM12/4/06
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In article <455CE2CF...@worldnet.att.net>,
gae...@aol.com said:

> Robert Carnegie wrote:
>
>> Then there's Oedipus. I think the ancient play has him
>> legislating against himself without realising it.
>
> He starts a large investigation into who murdered his predecessor,
> only to find out it was himself.

And people think that Homer Simpson invented the phrase "D'oh!"

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