ggamble wrote:
> On Fri, 01 Apr 2005 19:12:33 -0600, G_Cowboy_is_That_a_Gnu_Hurd?
> <vvo...@cpinternet.com.SPAM.naptha> wrote:
>
> >ggamble wrote:
> >
> >> On Fri, 01 Apr 2005 07:41:18 -0600, G_Cowboy_is_That_a_Gnu_Hurd?
> >> <vvo...@cpinternet.com.SPAM.naptha> wrote:
> >>
> >>>David wrote:
> >>>
> >>>> If I were revising this piece
> >>>> the first word i would take out
> >>>> is the first word on line twelve.
> >>>>
> >>>> I believe you will find
> >>>> it will give the line more punch
> >>>>
> >>>> .-D
> >>>Your right,
> >>
> >>>but I almost pulled out a whole grammaticly correct sentence.
> >>
> >> You found one?
> > no three can't read bleakin read
>
>
> 15-18
> 18-24
>
> Or maybe you're younger than fifteen perhaps?
Maybe Gary Gamble will be Dumbass of the Month in us.arts.poetry too.