Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

2 views
Skip to first unread message

Will Dockery

unread,
Jul 16, 2019, 3:29:32 PM7/16/19
to
"General Zod" wrote in message
news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com...
> On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
> Chorus Six
>
> Dollars in the bucket
> collect for the street singer.
> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
> points out the parrots.
>
> Blonde after blonde after blonde
> after the parade.
> People start looking really strange again.
>
> I must seem likewise to them
> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
> I'd draw these people with words
> but I'm not fast enough.
>
> They pass and fade
> part of the parade.
>
> On this really old wall
> good view from up here.
> Forever is a long time
> but not as long as yesterday.
>
> -Will Dockery

> Is this a re-write?

Basically the same, minor changes.

W.Dockery

unread,
May 30, 2022, 11:40:19 AMMay 30
to
"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com...
>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
>> Chorus Six
>>
>> Dollars in the bucket
>> collect for the street singer.
>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>> points out the parrots.
>>
>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>> after the parade.
>> People start looking really strange again.
>>
>> I must seem likewise to them
>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>> I'd draw these people with words
>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>
>> They pass and fade
>> part of the parade.
>>
>> On this really old wall
>> good view from up here.
>> Forever is a long time
>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>
>> -Will Dockery

>> Is this a re-write?

Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

General-Zod

unread,
Jun 1, 2022, 4:10:15 PMJun 1
to
Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

W.Dockery

unread,
Jun 2, 2022, 7:30:22 AMJun 2
to
"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com...
> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
>> Chorus Six
>>
>> Dollars in the bucket
>> collect for the street singer.
>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>> points out the parrots.
>>
>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>> after the parade.
>> People start looking really strange again.
>>
>> I must seem likewise to them
>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>> I'd draw these people with words
>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>
>> They pass and fade
>> part of the parade.
>>
>> On this really old wall
>> good view from up here.
>> Forever is a long time
>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>
>> -Will Dockery

Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

General-Zod

unread,
Jun 3, 2022, 4:35:15 PMJun 3
to
Having second read, better than ever......

General-Zod

unread,
Jun 4, 2022, 12:00:13 PMJun 4
to
Cool visual data....

W.Dockery

unread,
Jun 6, 2022, 8:50:16 PMJun 6
to
That was a fun night.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Jun 8, 2022, 11:20:16 AMJun 8
to
I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Jun 11, 2022, 9:10:15 PMJun 11
to
Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Jun 13, 2022, 3:15:16 AMJun 13
to
Good morning my friend and thanks again for the positive feedback.

W.Dockery

unread,
Jun 19, 2022, 10:45:16 AMJun 19
to
Good morning my friend, and thanks for the positive feedback.

🙂

W.Dockery

unread,
Jun 24, 2022, 2:05:15 AMJun 24
to
Good morning, and thanks again for reading and commenting.

W-Dockery

unread,
Jul 30, 2022, 10:25:39 PMJul 30
to
Good evening, Zod, and thanks again for the endorsement.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Aug 9, 2022, 6:25:31 AMAug 9
to
"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com...
>> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....


Thanks again for the nod, General Zod.

🙂

General-Zod

unread,
Aug 12, 2022, 6:39:14 PMAug 12
to
I thank you for writing all these great poems...!

W.Dockery

unread,
Aug 14, 2022, 4:25:47 PMAug 14
to
Good afternoon, thanks again.

General-Zod

unread,
Aug 16, 2022, 7:11:03 PMAug 16
to
As said, one of your best....

W-Dockery

unread,
Aug 18, 2022, 1:08:03 AMAug 18
to
"General Zod" wrote in message
> news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com...
> Will Dockery™ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>

> As said, one of your best....


Thanks again, my friend.

W.Dockery

unread,
Aug 27, 2022, 1:56:45 AMAug 27
to
Thanks again my friend.

W-Dockery

unread,
Sep 5, 2022, 5:32:35 AMSep 5
to
Good morning, thanks again.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Sep 9, 2022, 9:45:13 PMSep 9
to
Another poem Jim Senetto might enjoy.

🙂

W-Dockery

unread,
Sep 12, 2022, 12:02:41 AMSep 12
to
Thanks again my friend.

W.Dockery

unread,
Sep 14, 2022, 11:24:56 AMSep 14
to
As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

W.Dockery

unread,
Sep 16, 2022, 5:58:40 PMSep 16
to
Good afternoon, thanks again.
Reply all
Reply to author
Forward
0 new messages