That's going to be hard to tell without riding. Based on my own experience and preferences, I'd guess you'll want to stretch out a little more. Either longer stem or less sweep on the bars. Completely speculation though.
I'm a chronic cockpit tinkerer, and mess with bars and stem on at least two of my bikes every year. I've noticed one un-scientific constant every time I get a setup feeling close to ideal: if I draw an imaginary line between my hands (where they grip the bar), and sight through that line while riding, the bead from my eyes will almost exactly intersect the axis of the front hub. I don't know what the connection is or why it always turns out this way, but assume it has to do with weighting and stabilizing the steering adequately. It looks to me like you would be sighting behind the axle as currently mocked up?
Good news is that that that bike doesn't look too small. In case you were still worried you got the wrong size.
Regarding a second: I'd never try to talk someone out of a second riv. But keep in mind that the susie is very different from other rivendell models. I think the lowered bb height of yours will help, compared to my first run orange one, but bet its still quite different. My AR, Ram, Saluki, QB and Clem - though mostly older models - all have a characteristic Riv "feel". My Susie is completely different. I'd consider getting a different model for variety's sake.