on the week 3-7feb
-Discuss about the topic and finally our topic is welfare, define in 3 kinds of welfare such as children, poor and unemployed people
-Research the book from library and in the internet
-collect all the resource to make the source cards
-need more source from internet
For today 23th
19th March
the next draft will be better.
After the group meeting we understand more about research paper and the comment for each person. Such as using the right formal words, keeping away from somethings that not involved with thesis. Now we are discussing about final draft but it is in the processing not going as well because this week we have to sent our indy first draff.
This week the editor order all members to edit the first draft in order to finish it before Song Kran day. We plan about our final draft, bring the topic sentences of each member to re-write again. According to group meeting last week Ajarn introduce us to switch section and topic sentences of two members to be more clearly.
19 April
We are already sent the finally group paper last thursday and all of group working were finished at last week too. Now everyone are doing the indy paper in the editing process and it ready to sent on this Thursday.