2 Irresistible DIARY

[A. Trevor]

Diarist should post updates to me here:

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Friday Jan 30 - Everyone went to T.U. Library and found 9
books.
- Each of us makes a copy of book index.
Monday Feb 2 - We had brainstorming session to discuss about
topics,thesis and sub-topics.
Tuesday Feb 3 1. - rewriting tentative topic,thesis statement.
-brainstom the subtopics.
2. - writing source cards.
3. -each member takes responsibility as
assigned.
Thursday Feb 5 -suitable topic thesis statement and outline are ready
done
-10 source cards are already done and
recorrect them after A.Trevor checked them.
Friday Feb 6 -Find more 10 sources.

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Team members have already made 57 note cards from the sources.
After group meeting, we made an agreement on slugs and modified our
outline.

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Friday Feb 13 - Some of the group members went to the library and
found 9 more sources.

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This weekend our group members will start to write more 10 note cards.

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Tuesday-Feb 17 Our group have already 20 note cards each and we
have to make more 10 note cards each to complete 150 note cards by
Thursday
on our meeting with Aj.Trevor at 2.00
pm.Also we have discussed our indy topic in class and start to know
about primary research lecture in the class (Primary research packet).

Wednesday-Feb 18 Our group have meeting on 12.30 plan for the
interview and survey questions which our group approximately drafted
them already and give to all members in our group to discuss.

Thursday-Feb 19 we have a group meeting with Aj. Trevor discuss
our plan for primary research,hand in our 150 note cards and source
card
and also discuss our indy tentative
topic.After met Aj.trevor we have our group meeting to narrow our
outline and share the work for our members to find out more sources
and prepare for more 10 note
cards,due on Teusday-Feb 24.some members in the group start to find
more sources for indy paper at the library after our group meeting.

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Saturday Feb-21 --Today our group plan to do our work by divided into
2 small group,first group ;Om,Linn,Wee went to the National Library to
find more sources and new in formation about park because there're not
enough in our campus library and another group is Me and P'Gun go to
Lumpini park,place that we choose to survey,we tried to survey some of
the ploblems in this park .After the first group finish at the
national library we all met at Lumpini park at 5 o'clock and started
to discuss about our specific outline and plan for our new note cards
and also discuss our question for interviewing,we decide that each
person have to create approximately 10 questions each and we will
choose the best questions together on Monday at campus.

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Monday -Feb 23 Our group have meeting at 12.00 discuss and choose
question for survey and interview after all members in our group
created all questions on weekend.Also we have done all note cards.
Indy- members start to write 5 source cards each and find out more
books in the library.

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Tuesday Feb 24 Our group have meeting with Aj.Trevor.Sending our
draft survey and interview questions and also our brainstorming
waiting for Aj.Trevor to send our questions back.
Indy : sending our 5 source cards.


Thursday Feb 26 Our group have receive our survey questions back from
Aj.Trevor and after class we have our group meeeting to recorrect our
survey questions follow Aj.Trevor' suggestion and we are already
recollect them .Now we are waiting for Aj. to approve our newest
survey questions and we gonna start survey step as soon as possible
after Aj. approve them.

Indy: we have already sent our topic,thesis statement and our draft
outline in class and we are going to start our 20 note cards each
which due on tuesday march 3 ,group meeting with Aj. at 2:00
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This is the link for our newest outline:
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=3EEDA54D059S[BMMJSTE13SVDEEGC9

This is the link for our newest survey question:
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=3EEDA54D05L2AL5GXRP1H2MWZTLM9T


This is our updated survey question would you please suggest our
newest survey ques so,we can do our survey soon.

[lin]

Tomorrow, we plan to go to thaa park and do an interview of manager of
Lumpini Park
Then we are going to decide on a script for interviewing the Columnist
as the official
of Public Park Department's interview goin to take a month for da
process.
We've done the survey and compile information already done.

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Tuesday Mar 3 - We have Group meeting with Aj.Trevor at 2.00 talking
about our survey results which we' ve already done
and Aj.Trevor told us to compile our
information.
indy - Aj. Trevor sent our indy outline back & check
our first 20 note cards each.

Wednesday Mar 4 - Our compile information have already done and we
have our group meeting about planning for our
interview of an expert [Manager of
Lumpini park]tomorrow.

Thursday Mar 5 - Today our group go to interview the Manager of
Lumpini park at 10.00-11.30 after the interview we
go back to the campus
- In Aj. Trevor class ,Lecture were about the
new deadlines and the method of First Draft which our group
try to finish it before the 1st due [if
able to] on Thursday March 12 and also on Tuesday march 10
Aj.Trevor want a working/rough outline with
who is writing what.
indy - Aj.Trevor didn't check our next 20 note cards
each but he require for total 50 note cards and 15 source
cards each on Tuesday march 10.
After class - we have group meeting about our lastest outline
and compile our interview sound clips.

Friday Mar 6 - Our group have meeting about our interview transcript
of Manager og Lumpini Park [total 12 questions]
finish on the 1st part [ques No.1-6] and today
we're going to finish our next question No.7-12 today
so,our 1st interview for an expert[Manager of
Lumpini park]will be surely finish on this weekend and we
have plan for our interview of the non-expert
[Editor of Baan lae Suan magazine]on Monday, we also plan
for our 1st Draft [share the work] and try to
finish both survey transcript & 1 st draft before Thursday
March 12.

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Monday March 9 -Our group went to interview the editor of Baan lae
Suan (House & Garden) at 10.00 after finished we all went back to the
campus and started to work on our interview transcript and also our
final outline we've already done them.

Tuesday March 10 - Our group handing in our primary Research
Materials- Primary research transcript and survey results so we're
trying to finish our first draft on this Thursday march 12.


Indy: we all handed in our 50 notes card and our 15 source cards each
and Aj.Trevor require us more 5 sources cards and also 15 note cards
each on next tuesday march 17.

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In this midterm week we prepare for our first draft all the week ,we
all very tied about the work but it already fninished on Thursday
March 12 ,now we're waiting for the next steps which are coming soon
on Tuesday March 17.our group plan to do our indy more 15 notecards
and 5 source cards each.

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Due to our group accident it made oru group sent our first draft back
late for 1 and a hlf hour ,sorry for our group mistake which made you
dissapointed with our group but we really thank you for Aj.Trevor
kindness that give us a chance,7.5% for our earlier first draft,next
time it won't happened again.

Tuesday - Mar 17 Today is our group final outline due and we have
already finished it ,in this class is a lecture class on writing
draft ,Now our group is in the process of waiting for our first draft
back on Thursday mar 19.Our indy note cards Aj. Trevor didn't check
thems.


Thursday -Mar 19 Today we've received our group first draft back
with our average percentage and we will have our group meeting before
meeting with Aj.Trevor on thursday Apri 2 to getting understand about
our mistakes in the first draft and prepare to edit them ,In class
there is a lecture about MLA ParenthicalCitation.

Indy : Today is our indy final outline due and our group already sent.

After this,our group will start for our indy first draft which will be
due on Tuesday Mar 31 <may be except P'Gunn,due on Tuesday March
7,extended indy first draft due,if she can follow your condition.>

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Now we're in the process of start to edit our first draft and we all
analise our work.Om,our editor is editing the group draft after got
the feed back.Our group plan to edit some parts before meeting with
Aj.Trevor before thursday March 26 because we realise that we have a
few time left to make our work complete.

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Link for our already done works gathering together :
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Irresistible final outline: http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F62159EUQ[FPSDG64YY44LC6L9M
Irresistible interviw manager of Lumpini park :
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F621B0AK82YQSQ2ZB3C92MKSJHJ
Irresistible interview editor of Baan lae Suan :
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F621B0ARNMROH9ZBM84C8A4OJCQ
Irresistible survey result 1<compileinformation>:
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F62159E58PJOWO8SWQXJZGEBPQ4
Irresistible survey result 2<compile information>:
http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F62159E14ZQ2VE394YX8BK8RSGZ
Irresistible first draft: http://www.madoo.com/upload/download.php?file=890IrresistibleFirstDraft.doc
Irresistible first draft feedback: http://www.uploadd.com/download.aspx?pku=334F621B0AAS1RZ2A5SXYX3N9NMTRZ

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Thursday Mar 26 - We have our group meeting with Aj.Trevor at
2.00 .Aj.Trevor advised us about the mistakes in our first draft point
by point, and we all understand our mistakes after this we will fix
and try to edit for our better and more unity final draft and early as
we can. But now Om , our editor was trying to edit some part in our
first draft and already cut off the unuse stuff approximately 2000
words.

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Tuesday Mar 31 Due -This day is the individual first
draft due by email.
Inclass - Lecture on Rewriting
"Global Changes"


Thursday - Apr 2 Due -Today is Print-outs of Indy First
Drafts Due
Inclass -Lecture on Polishing " MLA Research Paper
(Daly).

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Tuesday Apr 7 In class exercises-in class essay "What are dreams?" ,
Hand in homework about new laws to control the drivers who using cell
phone.

Thursday Apr 9 -"Mean" teacher./Whats a good paper./Homework/Go over
group papers./Group meetings schedule-Irresistible After Sonkran week
on Tuesday Apr 21 [2.15]. Explain indy feed back./Give papers back.

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Saturday Apr 11 - Now Irresistible is in the process of editing the
final draft.We are waiting for our editor to send back our draft to
everyone in this group so, we can help our editor to check them
again.We will receive our draft from Om may be on Friday 17 or
Saturday 18.

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Friday Apr 17 -All of our members got our final draft back from Om,our
editor .She finish edited tht since Thursdau Apr 16 but she was in
Chiang Mai so,she sent us on Friday instead.

After that on Sunday Apr 19 - Wee ,who work on the citation for our
group sent us back on the final draft complete versions.

Tuesday Apr 21 - We have our group meeting with Aj.Trevor.We discuss
about the citation on the first draft and the deadline of the group
paper which will be due on thursday Apr 23.

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Now our group and Individual work have done all.Irresistible are
waiting for our work result both group ad indy on Thursday May 7 .

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And we also collect our past work in every steps to send to Aj.Trevor
for our extras point.

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Now,our work were finished both group and indy with our great points
from Aj.Trevor. Thank you Arjan very much for your excellent course,we
gained much information which we thought we can surely use them in the
future.