1 McFish DIARY

[A. Trevor]

Diarist should post updates to me here:

[NAT]

we found about 11 books from the libraries and some electronic sources
on the internet.

the note cards are on the process.

our outline about censorship is still open-wided because we are not
sure that some of the subtopics need to be changed or not. It's up to
how much information we can find about those subtopics.

[NAT]

Now as we already talked about what our outline should be like
we discussed and write it down subtopics
Members know better about which way to go on
and it give us an easier way to find some more sources according to
the new outline

And for this weekend, it is such an hard work for us to find source
for more 10 note cards
but we all goin for it....anyway :")

[NAT]

we all working on 30 individual note cards and about the group paper
the question for the interview an expert is already done included
the questionaire for surwaying, we ready to go interview in this
thursday 5
Hopefully everything will work perfectly !!

[NAT]

This week which is a week of mid term exam, we normally have no
classes
except research paper So, it mean we have much more time to run our
project
and also individual paper. For our group now, an interview already
done
we gathering all informations we got and everyone response for each
sup-topic
trying to make a first draft before the end of the week

[Natda Arthabowornpisan]

Now our first draft already sent,,,,even not such a perfect but 

we all tried our best ,,it's gonna be like a ton of mistakes, not surprisingly!

moreover,,individual paper also waiting for us beside 2nd draft ! 

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[NAT]

After we got our first draft back, the editor forward your comment to
all members
to read and re consider each part of the whole paper we did. Of course
there are
like ton of mistake, some are just a little possible mistake and some
are a terrible!
We all sincerely admire you for you deep consideration for our paper,
you went into
a detail and told us about what it should better be like,
We will manage our time to get together, and work together at
someone's place
sometime, after our individual paper, first draft were sent .
Have to thank you lots for every advise you gave :")

[NAT]

last week every member was doin there iny first draft
so we break the group paper n mean to continue this week
we are now editing our paper tryin to improve them
and the home work that you assigned, i think it's quite useful
to help us step back, reconsider what we are talking about
and rearrange our information again with other poeple.
mc fish go go !!!

[NAT]

As the newest outline for group paper due on this coming Thursday
now we all working on improving our paper
we have change our thesis statement and paper outline a little bit,
making it more easier and more specific
"Greater liberalization of censorship laws allow Thailand to be a
freer
society as long as sefeguards to protect aspects of Thai culture and
morality are not entirely abandoned".
Hopefully it going to work better.