RE: Final Version of Smarika without Ads

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Chetan Bohra

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Aug 6, 2013, 10:19:03 PM8/6/13
to Bishnu Vyas, Arvind Purohit, Arvind Purohit (Gmail), Ashok Guchiya, Ashok Vyas (Rajkumar), Bishnu Vyas, Ravi Purohit, Pushkarna Committee Bangalore, Sudhir Purohit, Vicky bhayya Pushkarna
 
Hey Bishnu ji,
Thank you for your efforts in putting this all together...we know you've had few sleepless nights...
 
Few things after a quick review:

1. Brahmin on Page 2 shoould be --> Brahmana (as per our reg.)
2. Page 4 --> here we can also mention our google group wala mail (committee)
3.Page 6 --> hindi revisit, there are few mistakes we need to correct, if print-person will take care then its fine
4. Page 8 --> Gopal ji photo missing
5. Page11/12 --> Well wishers' messages missing, just one there, where are the others ?
6. Page 37 --> Ashish Purohit photo missing
7. Page 41 --> It should be M.S. for Ravi Vyas in Education column (its  M.Sc. presently)
8. Page 61 --> photo missing
9. Page 98 --> Vandana Purohit AGE 40 , recheck once if possible
10. Page 118 --> photo missing
11. Page 114 --> Sudhir bha's family details info not complete (Committee member hai bhai :)
 
JSK,
Chetan 
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Subject: Final Version of Smarika without Ads
Date: Tue, 6 Aug 2013 20:37:54 +0000

Jai Shri Krishna !!

Finally, I think the final version is ready, except for the below ones, so how can I call it final J

 

Based on our Sunday meeting:

-          All available updates\photos have been included.

-          All updates received till today evening\night have been included.

-          Adverstisements which were provided to me are included. Sudhirji, please check the last page for your uncle’s advertisement. This is color one and printer will take this as it is. Does it look ok ?

-          Front page was changed as we discussed. Let me know if any changes.

-          Photos pending: Gopal ji purohit , Bhanu Prakashji. I will follow up by morning to get Bhanu prakashji & asked Vicky to get his Papa’s photo.

-          Have left blank pages for advertisements for which AShokji, Vicky, Raviji have got visiting cards. Printer person will add them himself.

-          Photos of Founders, Committee, & previous events photos will be color and others all in B\W.

-          Pages running nearly 140+. Thanks to advertisements and late entries. So expect cost to be again 25% more than initially

 

Finally, hope all above will complete by tomorrow and we get proof copy by Friday. From there, printing press will take 4 days to print all books.

 

Best Regards,

Bishnu

Chetan Bohra

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Aug 6, 2013, 10:28:35 PM8/6/13
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+ We should also mention about our facebook presence on Page 4
    (Pushkarna Samaj, Bangalore @ fb) 
 

Chetan Bohra

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Aug 6, 2013, 11:24:16 PM8/6/13
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+ few more things
12. My name' spelling on page 14 is incorrect (should be CHETAN)
13. Page 16 - Sports day was 19th May not 18th May
 
Call me whenever you are editing for these corrections !
 
JSK,
Chetan
 
Date: Wed, 7 Aug 2013 02:28:35 +0000

Arvind Purohit

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Aug 7, 2013, 2:12:16 AM8/7/13
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I would correct the Hindi letter and resend it.

From: Chetan Bohra <chetan...@hotmail.com>
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Sent: Wednesday, August 7, 2013 7:49 AM
Subject: RE: Final Version of Smarika without Ads

Vyas, Bishnu

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Aug 7, 2013, 2:13:51 AM8/7/13
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JSK Chetanji,

Thanks for reviewing this in detail and avoid the embarrassment.

I have given my inputs below. Let me know when we want to talk.

 

Best Regards,

Bishnu

 

From: Chetan Bohra [mailto:chetan...@hotmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, August 07, 2013 8:54 AM
To: Vyas, Bishnu; Arvind Purohit; Arvind Purohit (Gmail); Ashok Guchiya; Ashok Vyas (Rajkumar); Bishnu Vyas; Ravi Purohit; Pushkarna Committee Bangalore; Sudhir Purohit; Vicky bhayya Pushkarna
Subject: RE: Final Version of Smarika without Ads

 

+ few more things
12. My name' spelling on page 14 is incorrect (should be CHETAN) - Done
13. Page 16 - Sports day was 19th May not 18th May – ah…changed now.


 
Call me whenever you are editing for these corrections !
 
JSK,
Chetan
 

+ We should also mention about our facebook presence on Page 4
    (Pushkarna Samaj, Bangalore @ fb) 
 

 
Hey Bishnu ji,
Thank you for your efforts in putting this all together...we know you've had few sleepless nights...
 
Few things after a quick review:

1. Brahmin on Page 2 shoould be --> Brahmana (as per our reg.) - Done
2. Page 4 --> here we can also mention our google group wala mail (committee) - Done
3.Page 6 --> hindi revisit, there are few mistakes we need to correct, if print-person will take care then its fine – Printing will not take care. We need to fix it. Can you take this up

5. Page11/12 --> Well wishers' messages missing, just one there, where are the others ? – Will get two of them from my side and one if pending from Arvindji. Arvindji, can you please send the scan copy of the one available.
6. Page 37 --> Ashish Purohit photo missing – yes, have mailed Vicky to get both ashish & Gopalji photo. Yet to get them.
7. Page 41 --> It should be M.S. for Ravi Vyas in Education column (its  M.Sc. presently) - Done
8. Page 61 --> photo missing – Yes, not available.
9. Page 98 --> Vandana Purohit AGE 40 , recheck once if possible – verified, it is 40 in paper last year, but I adjusted all ages to be current.
10. Page 118 --> photo missing - Yes, not available.
11. Page 114 --> Sudhir bha's family details info not complete (Committee member hai bhai :) – Had sent mail yesterday to get details. Sudhirji can you reply at the earliest. Will call you as well.
 
JSK,
Chetan 

Chetan Bohra

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Aug 7, 2013, 3:51:45 AM8/7/13
to Bishnu Vyas, Arvind Purohit, Arvind Purohit (Gmail), Ashok Guchiya, Ashok Vyas (Rajkumar), Bishnu Vyas, Ravi Purohit, Pushkarna Committee Bangalore, Sudhir Purohit, Vicky bhayya Pushkarna
Hey Bishnu ji,
Here are the complete details of Sudhir bha' family.
Kindly update the page114 in the doc.
 

FAMILY DETAILS

 

 

 

 

Name

Age

Relationship

Education

Profession

SUDHIR PUROHIT

36

SELF

BE

SOFTWARE ENGINEER

SHAILJA PUROHIT

 30

WIFE

BA

HOME MAKER

KIRITI PUROHIT

 4

DAUGHTER

1ST STD

 -

VANSH PUROHIT

1

SON

 -

 -

PURUSHOTTAM PUROHIT

 59

FATHER

 PG

Public Sector

RADHA RANI PUROHIT

 57

MOTHER

 PG

 Teacher

 
JSK,
Chetan

Subject: RE: Final Version of Smarika without Ads
Date: Wed, 7 Aug 2013 06:13:51 +0000
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