Bronnie's latest version of outline
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Bronnie Thompson
Jun 23, 2011, 5:39:23 PM6/23/11
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Here's my revision after Sarah's feedback. I'd love further comment if anyone has time!
Sarah Stewart
Jun 24, 2011, 4:02:12 PM6/24/11
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Hi Bronnie
That reads much better - I had a much better understanding of where you were coming from and where you wanted to take me as the reader.
Sarah--
Sarah Stewart
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That reads much better - I had a much better understanding of where you were coming from and where you wanted to take me as the reader.
Sarah
Sarah Stewart
EdD Student and Consultant
http://sarah-stewart.blogspot.com
Skype: sarah.m.stewart
Twitter: SarahStewart
+64 27 7379998
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