Suggestion: Break text into chapters

[Kat]

I think you would be a little better served by breaking page one into
about three chapters which you click to. People generally scan text
and that's a pretty long page of nothing but text.

Suggestion is just break it down and if possible make the window size
a bit thinner.

TLDR=Too long didn't read
or
Wall of text crits you for 12,000!

[Matthew]

That's actually a really good idea. I sort of dashed it off without
estimating how long it would end up being. I guess I figured it's
shorter than a short story in a book so I could go the whole page, but
people see text on screen differently and even when reading a book you
get the pleasure of turning a page once in a while. ;)

Thanks for the suggestion Kat!

[Winston Zardo]

The modern culture is attracted to briefness. Text messages.
Twitter. etc. LOL
Present your meme briefly and it will attract like-minded
consciousness. Some like the spark, others like the pond.
Bring on the pond. :-)
Zardo

[Matthew]

True enough and per Kat's suggestion it is now broken up into chunks.

I certainly could go farther and find ways to expand it into
Twitterworld. Hm, that may be worth a try. Thanks!

On Dec 10, 12:29 am, Winston Zardo <richardbrown...@hotmail.com>
wrote: