Re: New Submission: Persona Form

[Astrid]

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2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <ziracho...@hotmail.com>

Umm this might feel like a dumb question but i can't seem to find where i should start writing on the site. All i find is the information pages.

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From: dragon.o...@gmail.com

Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:26:16 +0100

Subject: Re: New Submission: Persona Form
To: ziracho...@hotmail.com

Thanks :)

All good to go now. I'll get him up on the site in the next few hours, but feel free to dive right in if you feel like it.

2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <ziracho...@hotmail.com>

Your Name:	Timmie Svedberg
Your Email:	ziracho...@hotmail.com
D.O.B.	Jan / 7 / 1995
How'd you find us?	I searched the web for a free text based harry potter rp and checked out the ones that seemed good.
Name (First and last):	Zrascak Eversor
Pronunciation:	SRaSCaK eVeRSoR
Date of Birth:	Jan / 7 / 1995
Gender:	Male
Character Portrait:
Orientation:	Heterosexual
House:	Unsorted
Rank (if not, just put student)	student
Mother:	Mathilda Eversor. D.O.B. 01/13 1960. Works as an auror and is a half blood.
Father:	Ares Eversor. D.O.B. 12/13 1965. Works as an auror and is a half blood.
Siblings:	None
Other Signifiant People:	His uncle Odin Eversor who was a famous auror.(deceased)
Physical Description: (Atleast two paragraphs)	He is tall and slim. He has long black hair tied back with a black leather band. He has cold ice-blue eyes and very pale skin. Has a scar over his left eye (the eye itself is not damaged). Wears black sunglasses everywhere. Always goes clad in black clothes, shirt and long trousers and his houserobe. Usually has his wand hidden in the arm of the robe. Has muscles but not the big bulky kind, rather the slim kind which is associated with a lot of stamina. Has a necklace with the hair of a thesthral embedded in crysal the shape of a tooth that he always wears.
Personality: (Atleast three paragraphs)	Very smart and cold but if you say the right things to him he will try to kill you on the spot. A bit of lazy and always takes the, according to him, easiest way out. He can take very much shit but will almost always give back somehow, he can wait for five years and then strike if that is needed. A loner which almost never socialises and has a big love for death dealing magic and also fire magic. He does not really care about anyone except his parents and that will probably never change. He is not interested in girls at all. He values his possesions very much and if you steal from him he will probably try to kill him. He is not a pure dark wizard but rather if you need to name it a grey wizard. He does not take joy in killing but he does no despise it and he does not really fear anybody. He does not back away from ambushes and the like but if anybody challenges him to a fair duel then he will fight in a fair duel. He is pretty talented at flying but as it is he has not trained quidditch att all sinc ehe is not interested in it. He often flies with his familiar since that is one way for him too feel like he is a little free. He hates imrpisonment but he does not see imprisonment in a normal way, he takes much harder on imprisonment of the mind than that of the body but what he sees as imprisonment is not the same as everybody sees as imprisonment.
History: (Atleast three paragraphs)	Had a pretty normal childhood before hogwarts with the exception that he was one of the birghtest inhis school and actually knew more than some of his teachers. Everything was fine until his last year before hogwarts when he lived with his uncle for a week while his parents was out on a mission. His uncle had recently captured a dark wizard and was now targeted without anyone knowing about it by the wizards accomplises. One night they found out where he lived and went there to extrac their revenge. As they reached the house his uncle hid him in a place where he would be able to see what was going on and readied himself for battle, however the dark wizards were too many and finally they killed him with the death curse. As his uncle fell to the ground Zrascak lost his temper totally, something which had never actually happened before since nobody had done anything bad to him and accidentally destroyed the house wi! th fiendfyre. Authorithys was already one the way and they managed to put out the fire before anything really bad happened. When they finally was able to speak to Zrascak he was sent to Sankt Mungos for schock and stayed there for 24 hours. Until this day there has not been found a way to confirm the identities of the dark wizards killed in the fire.
Length:	13 inches
Wood:	Cherry
Core:	Poisonous fang from the right head of a Runespoor.
Notes:
Please list atleast two acceptable Houses (in order of preference):	Slytherin Ravenclaw
Elective One:
Elective Two:
Subject 1:
Subject 2:
Subject 3:
Subject 4:
Subject 5:
O.W.L. scores (list for all subjects sat)
Position:	None
Broom:	A black Nimbus 2300
Name:	Darkwing
Species:	Other (Ask BoD)
Familiar Image (Optional):
Physical Description:	A very big black raven, mainly noticeable because of size but also because of the fact that it has ice-blue eyes.
Personality:	Very intelligent bird which can use the human language almost as good as a regular human. Pretty much a bird version of Zrascak since it can easily take shit about most things from anybody but if you say the wrong thing it will peck your eyes out.
Subject:
Year hired:
Anything else we should know?

Is it better like this?

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From: dragon.o...@gmail.com
Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:09:35 +0100
Subject: Re: New Submission: Persona Form
To: ziracho...@hotmail.com

Hey Timmie,

Just a couple of things:

1) Could you expand this out into full sentences rather than snippets? The information is good, but full sentences makes it easier to read.

2) His personality needs a bit of work. We do have a three paragraph minimum for personalities. Of course, if you expand out what you've got already into sentences, I think you'll have about two paragraphs in any case. ^^

If you could get back to me with those it'd be great :) Good to have you on board.

Astrid

2009/8/9 JotForm <nor...@jotform.com>

Question Answer Your Name: Timmie Svedberg Your Email: ziracho...@hotmail.com D.O.B. Jan / 7 / 1995 How'd you find us? Searched the web for a free text based harry potter rp and checked out the ones that seemed good. Name (First and last): Zrascak Eversor Pronunciation: SRaSCaK eVeRSoR Date of Birth: Jan / 7 / 1995 Gender: Male Character Portrait: Orientation: Heterosexual House: Unsorted Rank (if not, just put student) student Mother: Mathilda Eversor. D.O.B. 01/13 1960. Works as an auror. Is a half blood. Father: Ares Eversor. D.O.B. 12/13 1965. Works as an auror. Is a half blood. Siblings: None Other Signifiant People: His uncle Odin Eversor, famous auror.(deceased) Physical Description: (Atleast two paragraphs) Tall and slim. Has long black hair tied back with a black leather band. Has cold ice-blue eyes. Has very pale skin. Has a scar over his left eye (the eye itself is not damaged). Wears black sunglasses everywhere. Always goes clad in black clothes, shirt and long trousers and his houserobe. Usually has his wand hidden in the arm of the robe. Has muscles but not the big bulky kind, rather the slim kind which is associated with a lot of stamina. Has a necklace with the hair of a thesthral embedded in crysal the shape of a tooth that he always wears. Personality: (Atleast three paragraphs) Very smart and cold but if you say the right things to him he will try to kill you on the spot. A bit of lazy and always takes the, according to him, easiest way out. He can take very much shit but will almost always give back somehow, he can wait for five years and then strike if that is needed. A loner which almost never socialises. Has a big love for death dealing amgic and fire magic. History: (Atleast three paragraphs) Had a pretty normal childhood before hogwarts with the exception that he was one of the birghtest inhis school and actually knew more than some of his teachers. Everything was fine until his last year before hogwarts when he lived with his uncle for a week while his parents was out on a mission. His uncle had recently captured a dark wizard and was now targeted without anyone knowing about it by the wizards accomplises. One night they found out where he lived and went there to extrac their revenge. As they reached the house his uncle hid him in a place where he would be able to see what was going on and readied himself for battle, however the dark wizards were too many and finally they killed him with the death curse. As his uncle fell to the ground Zrascak lost his temper totally, something which had never actually happened before since nobody had done anything bad to him and accidentally destroyed the house wi! th fiendfyre. Authorithys was already one the way and they managed to put out the fire before anything really bad happened. When they finally was able to speak to Zrascak he was sent to Sankt Mungos for schock and stayed there for 24 hours. Until this day there has not been found a way to confirm the identities of the dark wizards killed in the fire. Length: 13 inches Wood: Cherry Core: Poisonous fang fro the right head of a Runespoor. Notes: Please list atleast two acceptable Houses (in order of preference): Slytherin Ravenclaw Elective One: Elective Two: Subject 1: Subject 2: Subject 3: Subject 4: Subject 5: O.W.L. scores (list for all subjects sat) Position: None Broom: A black Nimbus 2300 Name: Darkwing Species: Other (Ask BoD) Familiar Image (Optional): Physical Description: A very big black raven, mainly noticeable because of size but also because of the fact that it has ice-blue eyes. Personality: Very intelligent bird which can use the human language almost as good as a regular human. Pretty much a bird version of Zrascak since it can easily take shit about most things from anybody but if you say the wrong thing it will peck your eyes out. Subject: Year hired: Anything else we should know?

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[Timmie Svedberg]

For some reason i can't enter the real RP group without signing in but i can enter the OOC group, is it how it is so that I will ahve to use emails or is it something wrong?

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From: dragon.o...@gmail.com
Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:37:25 +0100
Subject: [Platform OOC] Re: New Submission: Persona Form
To: ziracho...@hotmail.com; platform...@googlegroups.com

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[Astrid]

Should be fixed now. :) Though I think you still need to sign in to actually post to either of them... Yeah, you do. If you hit sign in, and create an account, you'll be able to use the message board. It doesn't require setting up a gmail address - it's just an account for googlegroups and will still use your hotmail address. Otherwise, you're probably stuck with emailing.

2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <ziracho...@hotmail.com>

[Timmie]

Which year do i begin with? Do i go after age or does he begin with
year one since it's my first time?

On 9 Aug, 22:55, Astrid <dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Should be fixed now. :) Though I think you still need to sign in to actually
> post to either of them... Yeah, you do. If you hit sign in, and create an
> account, you'll be able to use the message board. It doesn't require setting
> up a gmail address - it's just an account for googlegroups and will still
> use your hotmail address. Otherwise, you're probably stuck with emailing.
>

> 2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com>

>
> >  For some reason i can't enter the real RP group without signing in but i
> > can enter the OOC group, is it how it is so that I will ahve to use emails
> > or is it something wrong?
>

> > ------------------------------
> > From: dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com

> > Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:37:25 +0100
> > Subject: [Platform OOC] Re: New Submission: Persona Form

> > To: zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com; platform...@googlegroups.com

>
> > This is the main RP group:http://groups.google.co.uk/group/platform-934
> > <http://groups.google.co.uk/group/platform-934>Any thread with a tag of
> > any you can pretty much feel free to jump on, or start your own.
>
> > This is the OOC group:
> >http://groups.google.co.uk/group/platform-934-OOC?lnk=
>
> >  <http://groups.google.co.uk/group/platform-934-OOC?lnk=>You can post for
> > plotting, introductions, LOAs, and any random stuff over there
>

> > You can also post directly by emailing platform-934-...@googlegroups.comfor the OOC group or
> > platfo...@googlegroups.com directly.
>
> > 2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com>

>
> >  Umm this might feel like a dumb question but i can't seem to find where i
> > should start writing on the site. All i find is the information pages.
>

> > ------------------------------
> > From: dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com

> > Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:26:16 +0100
>
> > Subject: Re: New Submission: Persona Form

> > To: zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com

>
> > Thanks :)
> > All good to go now. I'll get him up on the site in the next few hours, but
> > feel free to dive right in if you feel like it.
>

> > 2009/8/9 Timmie Svedberg <zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com>
>
> >   Your Name: Timmie Svedberg Your Email: zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com

> > ------------------------------
> > From: dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com

> > Date: Sun, 9 Aug 2009 21:09:35 +0100
> > Subject: Re: New Submission: Persona Form

> > To: zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com

>
> > Hey Timmie,
> > Just a couple of things:
>
> > 1) Could you expand this out into full sentences rather than snippets? The
> > information is good, but full sentences makes it easier to read.
>
> > 2) His personality needs a bit of work. We do have a three paragraph
> > minimum for personalities. Of course, if you expand out what you've got
> > already into sentences, I think you'll have about two paragraphs in any
> > case. ^^
>
> > If you could get back to me with those it'd be great :) Good to have you on
> > board.
>
> > Astrid
>

> > 2009/8/9 JotForm <nore...@jotform.com>
>
> >   *Question* *Answer*  Your Name: Timmie Svedberg Your Email:
> > zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com D.O.B. Jan / 7 / 1995 How'd you find us? Searched

> > the web for a free text based harry potter rp and checked out the ones that
> > seemed good. Name (First and last): Zrascak Eversor Pronunciation: SRaSCaK
> > eVeRSoR Date of Birth: Jan / 7 / 1995 Gender: Male Character Portrait:
> >  Orientation: Heterosexual House: Unsorted Rank (if not, just put student)
> > student Mother: Mathilda Eversor. D.O.B. 01/13 1960. Works as an auror. Is
> > a half blood. Father: Ares Eversor. D.O.B. 12/13 1965. Works as an auror.
> > Is a half blood. Siblings: None Other Signifiant People: His uncle Odin
> > Eversor, famous auror.(deceased) Physical Description: (Atleast two
> > paragraphs) Tall and slim. Has long black hair tied back with a black
> > leather band. Has cold ice-blue eyes. Has very pale skin. Has a scar over
> > his left eye (the eye itself is not damaged). Wears black sunglasses
> > everywhere. Always goes clad in black clothes, shirt and long trousers and
> > his houserobe. Usually has his wand hidden in the arm of the robe. Has
> > muscles but not the big bulky kind, rather the slim kind which is associated
> > with a lot of stamina. Has a necklace with the hair of a thesthral embedded
> > in crysal the shape of a tooth that he always wears. Personality: (Atleast
> > three paragraphs) Very smart and cold but if you say the right things to
> > him he will try to kill you on the spot. A bit of lazy and always takes the,
> > according to him, easiest way out. He can take very much shit but will
> > almost always give back somehow, he can wait for five years and then strike
> > if that is needed. A loner which almost never socialises. Has a big love for
> > death dealing amgic and fire magic. History: (Atleast three paragraphs) Had
> > a pretty normal childhood before hogwarts with the exception that he was one
> > of the birghtest inhis school and actually
>

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[Astrid]

Basically, you have two options here:

1) Keep him at his current age, which would mean he was a fourth year now, since kids start Hogwarts at eleven.

2) Knock some years off his age and play him as an eleven year old firsty.

You don't have to start as a first year if you don't want to. You're more than welcome to write a character older than that! :)

2009/8/10 Timmie <ziracho...@hotmail.com>

[Timmie]

Thank you, I'll start with him as a fourth year then.

On 10 Aug, 16:24, Astrid <dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Basically, you have two options here:
> 1) Keep him at his current age, which would mean he was a fourth year now,
> since kids start Hogwarts at eleven.
> 2) Knock some years off his age and play him as an eleven year old firsty.
>
> You don't have to start as a first year if you don't want to. You're more
> than welcome to write a character older than that! :)
>

> 2009/8/10 Timmie <zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com>

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[Astrid]

Alrighty ^^

In that case you just need to pick two elective classes for him to take, and which House you'd like him in. The Electives are Arithmancy, Ancient Runes, Care of Magical Creatures, Divination and Muggle Studies. :)

2009/8/10 Timmie <ziracho...@hotmail.com>

[Timmie]

I'd like him to be in Slytherin and I choose ancient runes and Care of
Magical Creatures as electives.

On 10 Aug, 16:42, Astrid <dragon.of.sto...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Alrighty ^^
> In that case you just need to pick two elective classes for him to take, and
> which House you'd like him in. The Electives are Arithmancy, Ancient Runes,
> Care of Magical Creatures, Divination and Muggle Studies. :)
>

> 2009/8/10 Timmie <zirachofmiro...@hotmail.com>

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