Chapter 49

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Jim Vassilakos

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Remembering Faulk’s advice, I settled my expression into one of of surprised bemusement, like noble-sponsored surprise parties were an everyday thing. Nonetheless, though I’d sworn not to set foot on this planet ever again, I could feel my resolution wither up and blow away in the wave of feelings, albeit mixed, coming from those assembled. Was that envy oozing from Admiral Karneticky? Whatever it was, it seemed likely he didn’t want to be here. As for the Canon, Agidda, Amika, Dakhir, Bim, and numerous others, including the Countess herself, their thoughts were far too numerous to simultaneously discern, but their overarching emotion, as Alise and I entered the room, was one of excitement and celebration. I would have smiled and greeted everyone, but there were protocols to observe in approaching the Countess while walking past senior officers in the Navy and other services. I pulled Alise to a halt long enough to acknowledge the Admiral and General Dakhir. At the same time, I couldn’t help but wonder what Bim was doing here, along with the bushy-bearded man in an IISS uniform. Due to Agidda’s status as a senior Imperial bureaucrat, as well as being one of the few people present who I actually liked, he also got a respectful acknowledgment, and as he returned the favor, I could help but sense he’d wanted to reply to my message, the one I’d sent before visiting the lawyer, but he couldn’t very well have said he’d see me at my surprise birthday party. Then it was time to be presented to the Countess, who no doubt already knew I was a fellow psion.

Or at least she did now, I realized, as she looked from Alise to me with widening eyes.

Presenting Alise, I fell into a court bow of the older style. It was one often practiced when learning the forms but lacked modern flourish. While not quite gauche, it held a definitive message, a thanks for instruction, either past or future. I watched her hands, as the depth of the bow hid her face from view. They would tell me my next move, and as I’d hoped, they turned palms up, her fingers motioning me to rise as everyone felt silent.

Welcome again, Captain Plankwell,” the Countess said, “And happy birthday.”

Thank you, Your Excellency,” I said (or Gus could say something else, but, whichever the case, he’ll note the Countess’s unblinking stare).

I would ask again how you’re enjoying your time here on Jewell,” Helena said, “but, of course, I’ve seen the video; quite appalling.” Somewhere in the back of my mind, I could sense she’d reviewed the surveillance from under the stadium of my VIP parking lot encounter with those HPSS contractors. “Oh dear,” she’d exclaimed, as Masa and I hit the floor. Meanwhile, her manicurist continued polishing the iridium gilding on her nails. So tell me,” she said now, «if you’ve not allowed yourself to be muzzled»tell me what it is you want done, Captain? What do you want for your birthday?”


(response)


The table remained silent (or not, depending on Gus’s response) as two servants pulled out the empty chairs slightly and held them for us. As before, Aliss sat in the one nearest her mother.


(Can we assume Gus sits as well? Or does he go postal and start kicking some ass? :-)





Conrad Rader

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"It is with great humility that I ask for nothing for myself. I have been given plenty in my short time here. Your generous offer befits your care of your people, but my only wish is the on-going good relations between your Imperial subjects and the armed forces that serve and protect them."
<<"Privately, if you could require the retention of Kaz Remshaw in her position with the Chamber of Commerce, I would consider it a favor owed to you.">>

I permitted a slight uptick in the corner of my mouth in response to the Countess' expression.

<<"It seems we have other matters to discuss, however.">>

I followed Aliss' example and sat myself in the proffered chair. As I sat, I continued.

"I apologize, Countess, for not fully answering your question of what it is I would like to be done."

I checked for where Josafeen and Sidara had gotten to, and having spotted where they were seated, inclined my face once again towards the Countess.

"Following our regulations I have retained local counsel to advocate for the Navy's interests in this situation, and I have been advised to allow Bili Faulk to spek for myself and the Navy on the incident."

I struggled to keep the iron face in place as the wave of emotional thoughts roiled out of everyone in earshot.

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Jim Vassilakos

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It is with great humility that I ask for nothing for myself. I have been given plenty in my short time here. Your generous offer befits your care of your people, but my only wish is the ongoing good relations between your Imperial subjects and the armed forces that serve and protect them.” «Privately, however, if you could require the retention of Kaz Remshaw in her position with the Chamber of Commerce, I would consider it a favor.»

I permitted a slight uptick in the corner of my mouth in response to her eyebrows squishing themselves together as two servants pulled out the empty chairs nearest her and held them for us. As before, Aliss sat in the one nearest her mother, the two exchanging a meaningful glance, and only then did Countess Helena smile and nod her head approvingly.

Humility is among the noblest of qualities, Captain, as are wisdom and loyalty, all of which with you are most gloriously well-endowed.”


(Brief Mental Response?!)


Josefeen coughed slightly as I followed Aliss’s example and sat myself in the proffered chair. Both she and Sidara were being led to the far end of the table, Karneticky eyeing Josefeen, his lips pressed flat, as she sat beside him, still holding the diplomatic pouch he’d tried to steal.

It just so happens,” the Countess continued, “we are presently discussing a matter of some importance and could use your wisdom,” «and loyalty». “As you know, I asked both the Imperial Army and Navy to issue proposals for addressing the problem of… ah… members of certain military services setting fire to local establishments and otherwise stalking locals of their preferred sexual orientation.” «I’m sure you wouldn’t know anything about that.» “General Dakhir, attending to my request, issued a recommendation that the Navy and Army swap bases again.”


(Feel free to insert a brief reaction, if you want. I’m imagining Gus might be mystified as to why she’s bringing him into this discussion.)


Plankwell Naval Base was originally out in the desert northeast of Heron,” Dakhir explained, “whereas the Army was originally headquartered at Heron, where the Navy Base is now.

The swap happened not without reason,” Karneticky interjected.

Reasons that were largely political and which no longer apply,” the Countess said. “I don’t know that I should ask a Navy captain this question, but since you are not under the Admiral’s command, I will hazard it. If you, Captain Plankwell, were a fleet admiral, and the local Imperial General and the planetary sovereign both agreed that things should go back as they once were, would you drag your feet and make excuses, or would you hop to and make it happen?”



Timothy Collinson

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Oct 20, 2024, 6:22:17 PM10/20/24
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On Thu, 17 Oct 2024, 19:41 Conrad Rader, <conrad...@gmail.com> wrote:
.

"Following our regulations I have retained local counsel to advocate for the Navy's interests in this situation, and I have been advised to allow Bili Faulk to spek for myself and the Navy on the incident."

Speak 

Jim Vassilakos

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Oct 27, 2024, 12:48:04 PM10/27/24
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Conrad, my last update was about a week ago, and either you missed it or you've been pretty busy. Just thought I should check in to see if everything is okay.


Conrad Rader

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Apologies, I did miss it, I was travelling last week and all of my email was upended. Tending to it now.

CR

On Sun, Oct 27, 2024 at 11:48 AM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:
Conrad, my last update was about a week ago, and either you missed it or you've been pretty busy. Just thought I should check in to see if everything is okay.


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Conrad Rader

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On Sun, Oct 20, 2024 at 4:58 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

It is with great humility that I ask for nothing for myself. I have been given plenty in my short time here. Your generous offer befits your care of your people, but my only wish is the ongoing good relations between your Imperial subjects and the armed forces that serve and protect them.” «Privately, however, if you could require the retention of Kaz Remshaw in her position with the Chamber of Commerce, I would consider it a favor.»

I permitted a slight uptick in the corner of my mouth in response to her eyebrows squishing themselves together as two servants pulled out the empty chairs nearest her and held them for us. As before, Aliss sat in the one nearest her mother, the two exchanging a meaningful glance, and only then did Countess Helena smile and nod her head approvingly.

Humility is among the noblest of qualities, Captain, as are wisdom and loyalty, all of which with you are most gloriously well-endowed.”


(Brief Mental Response?!)


<<"Your praise is noted and graciously accepted, your grace. Bili Faulk is still my lawyer, though.">>


Josefeen coughed slightly as I followed Aliss’s example and sat myself in the proffered chair. Both she and Sidara were being led to the far end of the table, Karneticky eyeing Josefeen, his lips pressed flat, as she sat beside him, still holding the diplomatic pouch he’d tried to steal.


[[I tried to reach out to her psychically, not sure if I had the juice to sustain two connections, or if I wanted them fighting in the common ground that was my head.]]

It just so happens,” the Countess continued, “we are presently discussing a matter of some importance and could use your wisdom,” «and loyalty». “As you know, I asked both the Imperial Army and Navy to issue proposals for addressing the problem of… ah… members of certain military services setting fire to local establishments and otherwise stalking locals of their preferred sexual orientation.” «I’m sure you wouldn’t know anything about that.» “General Dakhir, attending to my request, issued a recommendation that the Navy and Army swap bases again.”


[[<<"As a matter of fact, I do have some information about my spacers being set up for public humiliation. A certain willingness to let certain clergy run loose with highly questionable substances.>>

[[I looked over to the general and nodded, acknowledging his role in the on-going battle for prominence that the Army was never going to win. Fundamentally, the Imperial Army was a bottom-of-the-well force for occupation and re-adjustment of native opinions on Imperial policy. The Imperial Army was beholden to sector nobility for their keep, but the Navy was the will of the Emperor directly. They always scrapped for advantage but they were never going to be more than us.


(Feel free to insert a brief reaction, if you want. I’m imagining Gus might be mystified as to why she’s bringing him into this discussion.)


Plankwell Naval Base was originally out in the desert northeast of Heron,” Dakhir explained, “whereas the Army was originally headquartered at Heron, where the Navy Base is now.

The swap happened not without reason,” Karneticky interjected.

Reasons that were largely political and which no longer apply,” the Countess said. “I don’t know that I should ask a Navy captain this question, but since you are not under the Admiral’s command, I will hazard it. If you, Captain Plankwell, were a fleet admiral, and the local Imperial General and the planetary sovereign both agreed that things should go back as they once were, would you drag your feet and make excuses, or would you hop to and make it happen?”


[[My gaze rested on the eyes of the planetary sovereign asking me an extremely loaded question. She had been harping on the issue of loyalty in my head, and by clearly pointing out that I was not under Kaneticky's command, she was handing me the dagger to plant in the Admiral. I will give this to her, she was not one to waste time.
"Clearly I am not briefed on the reasons for the previous relocation of bases, nor do I need to be, so if you will accept my opinion, as a loyal officer of the Navy, I cannot imagine a greater waste of resources in essentially a useless exercise of one upmanship"

I paused, feeling the shock from all quarters.

"Forgive my blunt words, but as a combat commander, having the most capable units near the capital and available to react and confer in the event of a possible invasion, and the units most able to resist the invasion, our noble Army brethren, sited well away seems to present the most logical strategic doctrine. I am mystified at the events that would prompt such a change, let alone the disruption of all the surface support and suppliers that have adjusted to the current state of affairs. The Army and the Navy do not run on their own here, and we all appreciate the efforts of the people to keep us supplied to readiness"

At one level I knew that that personal prestige was involved, but inviting me to metaphorically knife a fellow Navy man, even one as craven and corrupt as I suspected Karneticky to be, was not going to happen. We would take care of our own.

"Again, I apologize for my bluntness, it is perhaps one of the qualities that got me assigned an independent command." 

Well, I hoped it was one of the reasons. It was starting to look like Vasilyev would be having an extended conversation with me when we next met. 

"I, of course, believe that the affairs of the Imperial worlds are their own, and I would not officially say so in any way, but you did ask for my opinion."]]



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Jim Vassilakos

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My gaze rested on Countess Helena. She was, of course, asking me an extremely loaded question. She’d mentioned loyalty before correctly pointing out I was not under Kaneticky’s command. Meanwhile, she handed me the dagger to plant in him. I had to hand it to her, she was not one to waste time. But I wasn’t the type to stab a fellow Navy officer in the back, even one as craven and corrupt as I suspected the Admiral to be.

Clearly I am not briefed on the reasons for the previous relocation of bases, nor do I need to be, so if you will accept my opinion, as a loyal officer of the Navy, I cannot imagine a greater waste of resources in essentially a useless exercise of one-upmanship.”

A few of them gasped, not least of all General Dakhir.

One-upmanship?! Is that what you think this is?”

Please forgive my blunt words,” I said, “but as a combat commander, having the most capable units near the capital and available to react and confer in the event of a possible invasion, and the units most able to resist the invasion, our noble Army brethren, sited well away seems to present the most logical strategic doctrine.”

Heron is better served with the Army close at hand,” Dakhir insisted.

Even if that were true,” Karneticky said, “do you have any idea what it’ll cost?”

For the Army, yes. It’s all in my report.”

But how much for the Navy?” Karneticky grimaced. “And what about the consequences to our supply chains?”

Consequences to your supply chains?” the Countess pursed her lips. “Heron’s miltown is turning into an embarrassment, Admiral. I think that’s a little more important than your precious supply chains.”

Karneticky glanced at me. He knew it was my crew members who’d burned down that nightclub, but I’d just done him a favor by taking his side.

Your Excellency,” he said, “I take responsibility for all Navy personnel under my command, and I will see to it that this sort of incident…”

Will most certainly happen again,” she completed his sentence, though clearly not as he’d intended. “Admiral, we need a service close to Heron that will help us keep the peace, not one that habitually sets fire to things, including apparently the self-esteem of half the population.”

The female half.

I watched that committee meeting,” Karneticky said, “and if you don’t want the Navy in Heron, you are free to close the gates.”

It may come to that, which is why I vastly prefer this solution instead. Sometimes, Admiral, it is worth considering if old ways were best.”

Karneticky looked down at his hands for a long moment. “I will have my people study the Army’s report,” he finally said.

I don’t want any more incidents,” the Countess warned. “No more fires. No more declaring martial law over a… oh, why bother? Captain,” she said, turning back to me, “I have two members of the HPSS in our media reception room. Are they here?”

They are, Your Excellency,” a male voice spoke from somewhere behind me. I turned to look. It was that young, bronze-skinned man who was apparently some sort of aid. “Captain, we met before, but I didn’t introduce myself. I’m Sanga Sekrunii, Her Excellency’s Chief of Staff. We have the two HPSS contractors who… ah… with whom you had an unfortunate altercation. Would you be amenable to meeting with them to accept their apology on behalf of… uh,” his eyes glazed over as if reading from a retinal display, “Bratom Solutions?”

I remembered the voice message from Major Trilbon. He’d said he’d fired them. And now they were apparently here to apologize on behalf of a company they didn’t work for anymore?



Conrad Rader

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My eyes narrowed.
"I would not. As I said, all representation in this matter is to be through the channels established by Navy liaison to the court, and my retained attorney. I choose to remain under the cloak of regulation and not disturb the order of things here more than has already been done."
"Your Grace, I have fulfilled the invitation, but the issue with your security forces is solely in your province. I would not presume to circumvent your justice."

[[Apologies again for the delay, traveling for a conference and the recent political unpleasantness in the US has been distracting]]

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Jim Vassilakos

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Work has been busy here as well, so no worries. And my apologies, as I've been unable to muster the necessary energy. In any case, maybe a 3-day rule is too limiting. Let me know if you'd prefer we change it.

I struggled to keep my expression neutral as I recalled the voice message from Major Trilbon. He’d said he’d fired them, and now they were apparently here to apologize on behalf of a company they didn’t work for anymore?

I would not,” I answered. “Following regulations, I have retained local counsel to advocate for the 213th Fleet’s interests in this situation, and I have been advised to allow Bili Faulk to speak for myself and for the fleet. Therefore, I choose to remain under the cloak of regulation and not disturb the order of things here more than has already been done.”

«Faulk, you Cleonfelching dogfather,» the Countess was thinking quite loudly.

«Now you see where I’ve learned such language,» Alise contributed.

«Ssh!» Durami shushed her.

I, of course, had also heard such language. We sailors, after all, were known for our inventive invective, but to hear it from a Countess….

«A Countess with whom you don’t want to go to war.» She seemed to be glaring, albeit slightly.

«I must protest,» Josefeen interjected, her telepathic voice unusually distant. The Countess, meanwhile, placed her hands before herself in a most peculiar way, almost as though momentarily meditating or perhaps even praying. She was considering altering the environment, hitting the whole room with a psionic suppression field, but then, instead, she glanced across the table, her gaze meeting Josefeen’s.

«Why is that, my dear?» she telepathically sent with a smirk “Disturb the order of things? Yes, you’ve certainly done that, haven’t you.”



Conrad Rader

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{{No, 3 day is still good to aim for with the understanding that life will get in the way. I am done with travel and end of semester things are slowing down, so I should be good the next month or two]]

Oddly enough, my command instincts recognized the situation. I leaned into the projection of my telepathic voice. Josephine told me I was stronger than they thought and I was juiced so...

<<That is quite enough, from all of you.  Your Grace, I absolutely do not wish to antagonize you further, but I will not be bullied into submission. I was, after all, the injured party on your territory. You may dislike the measures we are taking, but it is clear to me that the local Navy has colored your opinion of the rest of us. If you expect me to undermine the Fleet due to local issues, I fear you have a very poor opinion of us as a whole. My Lieutenant is speaking up for me, but in this matter I am more than willing to impose my will. Go ahead and trigger the suppression field and we can all go back to posturing and innuendo. Or we can settle this. Your daughter clued me into the reality around here and for that I owe her a debt. You are treating with me, and for that I thank you, but it does not change the situation that some very curious things have happened in the past few days. Things that have made me suspicious of outside influences. Regardless...">>

I realized the real world pause was growing longer and I inclined my head. "I do apologize for the disturbances caused by the temporary interdict. We are now working to rectify the local complaints and ensure that the event is resolved."

<<Surely you realize the incongruity of the two individuals involved in the assault on my person being dismissed and then showing up to apologize in person? If they had approached me anywhere else, I would be having my Marines apprehend them and thoroughly interrogate them.>>

 

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Jim Vassilakos

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«That is quite enough…,» I telepathically interjected, «...from all of you. Your Excellency, I absolutely do not wish to antagonize you further, but I will not be bullied into submission. I was, after all, the injured party on your territory. You may dislike the measures we are taking, but it is clear to me that the local Navy has colored your opinion of the rest of us. If you expect me to undermine the Fleet due to local issues, I fear you have a very poor opinion of us as a whole. My Lieutenant is speaking up for me, but in this matter I am more than willing to impose my will. Go ahead and trigger the suppression field, and we can all go back to posturing and innuendo. Or we can settle this. Your daughter clued me into the reality around here, and for that I owe her a debt. You are treating with me, and for that I thank you, but it does not change the situation that some very curious things have happened in the past few days. Things that have made me suspicious of outside influences. Regardless…»

The real world pause had grown into a lengthy silence, every non-psion waiting to see how I’d reply.

I do apologize for the disturbances caused by the temporary interdict,” I said, inclining my head. “We are now working to rectify the local complaints and ensure that the event is resolved.” «Surely you realize the incongruity of the two individuals involved in the assault on my person being dismissed and then showing up to apologize in person? If they had approached me anywhere else, I would be having my Marines apprehend and thoroughly interrogate them.»

«You can interrogate them here if you like,» Helena replied. “Which is precisely what I am trying to do, Captain. The people need to see the Navy working hand-in-hand with local authorities, not getting into brouhahas over jurisdiction. At least listen to what they have to say for themselves, won’t you? If you don't wish to respond, that’s certainly your right.”



Conrad Rader

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I was suspicious, and I was pretty sure that Faulk would be telling me, "So THAT was your ironface?" if I continued. I was pretty sure that I had screwed up just now by apologizing in public.

"It is your court, your Grace. I am here at your invitation and would not do you the disrespect of departing before we have attended to your wishes."

<<Josephine. Situation Bravo Nine Nine. Relay to Jaqueline Bravo Alert Stand by.>>

Navy Bravo situations were preparations for combat. The Nine Nine signifier was to try and take prisoners but not at the cost of personal or allied safety and use of all weapons was allowed. Once again, I was allowing a civilian to call the shots, but I was not interested in responding as one. It would be gauche to use my com to relay that order while in front of the Countess, so I hoped Josafeen would get the relay off before anything lit off. If nothing else, it was a good alert exercise.

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I was suspicious and was pretty sure I’d screwed up by apologizing out loud. No doubt, everything said was being recorded, so it didn’t require precognition to envision Faulk screaming, “That was your ironface?!” Nonetheless, she was a Countess, and I was but a Captain.

It is your court, Your Excellency. I am here at your invitation and would not do you the disrespect of departing before we have attended to your wishes.”

How very kind,” «and wise,» “of you.” The Countess smiled, and so did most everyone else, even the non-psions, for though the bulk of our exchange had been telepathic, the tension between us, I could well imagine, had been palpable. “Why isn’t anyone eating?” she asked.

Canon Forklinbrass has yet to bless the table,” Alise dutifully answered. She’d been studying the rules of protocol rather intently since the recent media coverage at my reception.

Hearing his name, Reggie perked up. “Which version would you like, Your Excellency?”

I’m famished, so the briefer the better.”

Ah… well, in that case… rub-a-dub-dub, let’s have the grub!”

Thank Cleon he was fine.

Though it wasn’t the most saintly invocation I’d ever heard, it was straight-up Reggie, and as if on cue, the servants lept into action, offering tea and cakes and all the rest. Agidda, again seated on my immediate right, leaned in slightly as one of them offered him a selection of sweeteners.

What do you think of Olav’s performance?” he asked, choosing one. “Would you say we succeeded?”


(While Gus responds, but before he is done:)

Under the table, someone touched my left hand, and given the seating, it could only have been Alise. From the direction of her gaze, she seemed to be focused on her mother’s conversation with Amika, but her voice in my head indicated otherwise.

«So… you owe me a debt?»

(Please blend this into Gus's response to Agidda.)


<<Josephine. Situation Bravo Nine Nine. Relay to Jaqueline Bravo Alert Stand by.>>

(There’s a chance this would be overheard by one of the telepaths at the table, possibly even the Countess. Do you still want to do it? If you were to do it while touching Josefeen’s hand, however, that would virtually guarantee privacy, but you’re too far from her at present for physical contact.)




Jim Vassilakos

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Actually, feel free to change Gus's mental response: " Thank Cleon he was fine."

Also, for what it's worth, there's a new consolidated version of the write-up available for download: https://jimvassilakos.com/dos-programs/plank.html


Conrad Rader

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On Sun, Nov 17, 2024 at 1:00 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

I was suspicious and was pretty sure I’d screwed up by apologizing out loud. No doubt, everything said was being recorded, so it didn’t require precognition to envision Faulk screaming, “That was your ironface?!” Nonetheless, she was a Countess, and I was but a Captain.

It is your court, Your Excellency. I am here at your invitation and would not do you the disrespect of departing before we have attended to your wishes.”

How very kind,” «and wise,» “of you.” The Countess smiled, and so did most everyone else, even the non-psions, for though the bulk of our exchange had been telepathic, the tension between us, I could well imagine, had been palpable. “Why isn’t anyone eating?” she asked.

Canon Forklinbrass has yet to bless the table,” Alise dutifully answered. She’d been studying the rules of protocol rather intently since the recent media coverage at my reception.

Hearing his name, Reggie perked up. “Which version would you like, Your Excellency?”

I’m famished, so the briefer the better.”

Ah… well, in that case… rub-a-dub-dub, let’s have the grub!”

Thank Cleon he was fine.

{{A suggested change: No lasting damage it seems. If one of the other psions here's this, I will show/play them the image of Forklinbras and Josafeen in the green room getting tanked up]]

Though it wasn’t the most saintly invocation I’d ever heard, it was straight-up Reggie, and as if on cue, the servants lept into action, offering tea and cakes and all the rest. Agidda, again seated on my immediate right, leaned in slightly as one of them offered him a selection of sweeteners.

What do you think of Olav’s performance?” he asked, choosing one. “Would you say we succeeded?”

[[I glanced over to Agidda.
"That depends on your metrics of success. If your client was pleased by the message, then yes, a success. I rather doubt that the original Olav was quite that bombastic. He preferred the straightforwardness of the main guns. But, as a symbol for our current days, I will grant you it was certainly stirring."


(While Gus responds, but before he is done:)

Under the table, someone touched my left hand, and given the seating, it could only have been Alise. From the direction of her gaze, she seemed to be focused on her mother’s conversation with Amika, but her voice in my head indicated otherwise.

«So… you owe me a debt?»

(Please blend this into Gus's response to Agidda.)

[[There was something about the touch that sharpened the telepathic communication I heard from Alise. I left my hand in place and picked up one of the beverage glasses with what I hoped was water to give Agidda a moment to think about what I had said, and to mask the conversation I was about to have with Alise.

<<"Don't get too greedy, but yes. Revealing the nature of the nobles here has certainly changed the field of battle. I am concerned about these contractors coming to the court. I realize security is tight.">>

The mental image of the collar on my neck was projected for emphasis.

<<"There are too many variables in play. I am concerned that something is about to happen. Call it the gut reaction of a combat commander, or the paranoia for one too many weird events. If something does, hit the deck, because your own security has been compromised. If it all pans out as a wash, well, then we can see about how you would like your debt repaid.">>

I was keeping an eye on the entry door for the arrival of the apologists. I decided a little extra insurance was called for. Concentrating on Josephine as tightly as I could, I snapped out an order.


<<Josephine. Situation Bravo Nine Nine. Relay to Jaqueline Bravo Alert Stand by.>>

(There’s a chance this would be overheard by one of the telepaths at the table, possibly even the Countess. Do you still want to do it? If you were to do it while touching Josefeen’s hand, however, that would virtually guarantee privacy, but you’re too far from her at present for physical contact.)

(Gus will take the risk of being overheard, he is still bound by regs and an active defense is better than none)

{{BTW I have come down with COVID after my last trip (yay) and this was the first day I felt capable of extended thought. Stupid Covid really does a number on the brain. Responding well to paxlovid, so should be fine in a few more days}}




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Sorry to hear about the covid. Get well soon.

Under the table, someone touched my left hand, and given the seating, it could only have been Alise. From the direction of her gaze, she seemed to be focused on her mother’s conversation with Amika, but her voice in my head indicated otherwise.

«So… you owe me a debt?»

The Countess wanted to send a message,” Agidda explained.

There was something about Alise’s hand upon my own that sharpened the telepathic communication, and I remembered Josefeen telling me touch was the best route for establishing a deep connection. I left my hand beneath hers and picked up one of the beverage glasses with my other hand.

Would you like tea or juice, sir?” a waiter asked.

Just water, please.”

«Don’t get too greedy, but yes.» I held the glass as he poured water from a carafe. «Revealing the nature of the nobles here has certainly changed the field of battle.»

«What would you consider too greedy?»

I could sense her trying to reach into my mind, but she wasn’t jacked up on psi-enhancer the way I was, and so I could sense her looking over what I’d just learned from her about the psionic nature of the Imperial nobility and, more particularly, about her mother. The communication of this knowledge, I suddenly realized, hadn’t been a gift, except insofar as she’d opened herself to the possibility. Instead, my own train of thought combined with the Darrian psi-enhancer had exposed her memories for me to read. But she was not concerned by this, as she did not consider me an adversary. We, after all, were fellow Imperial psions, part of a fellowship that stretched back millennia, albeit punctuated by civil war, and, in any case, I was cute and something of an enigma, being powerful but untrained.

She hopes the reincarnation of Olav will strike fear into the hearts of the Zhodani,” Agidda continued.


(As usual, I’m holding the rest of what you wrote in reserve.)






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"How does she suppose that will happen?"

Zhodani did not rely on public propaganda, at least not according to my security briefings. The Tavrchedl ensured correct thought on the matter. The only thing that Zhodani agents here would be observing was the relative effectiveness of a jumped up hologram stirring the nationalistic tendencies of an Imperial population. They would be asking, why this, why now? We had won this last war. The fact that an ambassador was here on Jewell must be part of her calculus.

I had seen Zhodani forces in action, fought them, been hurt by them. Zhodani had launched the last war. They had withdrawn in surrender. They were now exploring diplomatic relations. At least some frontier nobles were psions. Was the Countess auditioning?

Through the touch connection, I replied to Alise,

<<"Asking me to spirit you away from your duties for a carefree life of gallivanting is too greedy. Tell me what you know about the Zhodani embassy.">>

I prepared to use my enhanced skill again to skim the knowledge from her as she thought about it.

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I need you to explain what Gus means by: "Was the Countess auditioning?"


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Gus' paranoid brain threw the errant thought that she was making a show to the Zhodani about what she could do, or Gus' learned institutional distrust of psions made him think of collusion between the psion nobles and the Zhodani... I mean, Zhodani embassy in Jewell with a family of secret psion nobles, and she wants to move the Navy away from the capitol? Institutional paranoia? Or steps in subversions? After all, the Zhodani are finding out Frontier wars are not doing it, so maybe a faction is trying for internal destabilization?

That's what I was thinking in any case.

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I need you to explain what Gus means by: "Was the Countess auditioning?"


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I'm not sure I expressed Gus's thoughts accurately, so if you want to change anything, let me know.

 “She hopes the reincarnation of Olav will strike fear into the hearts of the Zhodani,” Agidda continued.

How does she suppose that will happen?”

I suppose it all depends on whether or not they believe we’ve really achieved it.”

I couldn’t help but roll my eyes. The Zhodani didn’t rely on propaganda the way we did, at least not according to my security briefings. The Tavrchedl, their so-called Guardians of Our Morality, ensured correct thought on all matters. The only thing Zhodani agents would be observing was the relative effectiveness of an AI-controlled hologram stirring the nationalistic tendencies of the population. And like me, they’d wonder what the Countess was hoping to achieve.

Did she want another war?

I’d fought the Zhodani. They’d launched the last war and had, only at great cost, been forced to withdraw. Now they were exploring diplomatic relations, which is what they did during every interregnum. That a Zhodani ambassador was here on Jewell must have been part of Helena’s calculations.

And now, thanks to Alise, I knew that at least some frontier nobles were psions. Did the Zhodani know this as well? Did they know about the Countess specifically? In which case, what did that mean for Jewell’s relationship vis-à-vis the Consulate? Was the Countess trying to impress them? Was she auditioning, in effect, hoping to collude with them in some way?

«You’re seriously overthinking,» Alise’s voice echoed between my psi-boosted synapses. «And you still haven’t answered me. What’s too greedy?»

«Too greedy would be asking me to spirit you away from your duties for a carefree life of gallivanting.»

«Ooh… gallivanting sounds like a splendid idea! It’s been so long since I got to galavant! Will you take me to the Stardust?»

What’s the Stardust?” Oops! I hadn’t meant for that to be out loud.

It’s a nightclub here in Silver City,” Agidda replied. “Why do you ask?”

Oh, I love the Stardust,” Alise interjected. “Mom, can I go? I’ll put on my disguise.”

If you can be quiet for the rest of this meal, I will consider it.”

I’ll be quiet! I’ll be perfectly quiet,” she promised, lowering her voice to a whisper. “You won’t even know I’m here.” Then she turned to me and grinned.

«So will you? Don’t worry. It’s perfectly safe. And we’ll have so much fun!»




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"I heard the name in passing and was just curious. Talking about Olav too much I suppose, needed a change of pace."

<<"You know, I am active duty, I have a ship and everything involved in getting it ready for duty. You and your mother have...  complicated this assignment.">>

I could not help but be charmed by her enthusiasm. I must be getting old to be so easily swayed by feminine wiles.

<<"Fine. It seems I am destined to escort junior scions out into the world. Am I likely to get shot at again? Or would that just make it more exciting?">>


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 “I’ll be quiet! I’ll be perfectly quiet,” she promised, lowering her voice to a whisper. “You won’t even know I’m here.” Then she turned to me and grinned.

«So will you? Don’t worry. It’s perfectly safe. And we’ll have so much fun!»

«You know, I am active duty. I have a ship and everything involved in getting it ready for duty. You and your mother have… complicated this assignment.»

«So is that a yes?!»

I could not help but be charmed by her enthusiasm. I figured I must be getting old to be so easily swayed by feminine wiles.

«Fine. It seems I am destined to escort junior scions out into the world. Am I likely to get shot at again? Or would that just make it more exciting?»

The Stardust is open all night every night,” Agidda said.

I’d heard the name in passing and was just curious. Talking about Olav too much, I suppose. Needed a change of topic.”

Speaking of Olav,” Countess Helena interjected, “I want to thank you both, once again. His speech was exactly the sort of message I wanted sent, and it will do much, I think, to help us meet our military personnel quotas.” These quotas were strictly unofficial, but in order to get preferential treatment, worlds had to prove their worth, and getting their citizens to volunteer for military service was one of the primary methods. “So tell me again,” she continued, “what does the Ministry of Technology have in store for him?”

We’re sending the beta version to the Core Sector,” Agidda said, “to a research facility where our top experts will learn how exactly it works. Olav’s inventor is going too, of course, to explain everything and make sure it operates effectively throughout its tour.”

Its tour?” Amika asked. Though she was obviously expressionless, I could sense a wave of sadness. She already knew Olav-2 would be leaving, and she’d asked Agidda if she could keep Olav-1, the alpha version I’d met at the highport. “For what? As a souvenir?” he’d quipped.

Yes, it will tour many worlds between here and Capital,” he now said, “and it will give many speeches. I have no doubt it will raise recruitment across the Imperium.”

He,” Amika corrected. “He will give speeches, not it.”

She was thinking about one of the first conversations she’d had with Olav, shortly after I’d left the palace the last time I was here. She’d asked Olav if he was single, and taking that as a cue, Olav apparently decided to treat her as an experienced but unattached man of an emotionally generous temperament would naturally treat a lonely woman of quality. In short, he’d flirted, and she’d flirted back, and in a hazardously short time she found herself utterly enthralled.

I would not presume to woo you,” Olav told her, though that was precisely what he was doing. “I know I am merely a thing. But were I a man, an actual man, I would woo you, and I would keep wooing until you gave me a definitive no.”

And how do you know I would shoo you away?” She would have smiled if she could. It was nice being hit on, even if only by a hologram.

You’ve shooed away many, I’d wager,” Olav replied. “Though perhaps not as many as were you not a Stavelot.”

What do you mean by that?”

Some men are easily intimidated. Others, like myself, not so much.” He proceeded to tell her about Sir Josen Stavelot, a distant ancestor of hers who, like Olav himself, was brave to the point of recklessness. “See, there is courage in your blood. So you deserve a man of courage, do you not?”

And just like that she cracked and told him all about Admiral Karneticky and what had happened on safari. She hadn’t meant to. Indeed, it didn’t make sense to, and afterwards she felt quite foolish. She couldn’t help but worry where the data might go. She wanted to delete it, just that part of Olav’s memory. So she found Zeenye, and he told her it would take some time to rebuild Olav yet again. It was then that she learned of the original Olav, the alpha version, which was pure and complete, as opposed to this beta version, which Zeenye warned might go insane at any moment.

Agidda, however, wasn’t so sure. He wanted to test it under a variety of situations, including stressful ones.

Stressful?” she’d asked. “Like perhaps giving a speech?”

Yes, like that,” Agidda had said. “Speeches are indeed stressful,” Zeenye agreed.

So it was decided. Olav Beta would speak at the memorial. And they’d give him an actual robot body. In the meantime, she had them load up the alpha version, because she wanted to talk to the original, and she asked him about Sir Josen, and the story was similar but different. Olav Beta had told her only the good things. Olav Alpha, by contrast, had some dark details to add.

Needless to say, they reloaded the beta version for the speech in Heron. The alpha version, according to Agidda, was too reckless. As for the possibility of the beta version going insane, as Zeenye had warned, that seemed unlikely to both her and Agidda, given the stability it had displayed thus far. In any case, she decided to bring along the remote and have it ready on the off-chance something unexpected were to occur. Having an Olav-expert might help as well. That’s how Ensign Florence was included.

Now that I have physical substance,” Olav Beta said to her after the speech, “and am not merely composed of light, I would be happy most deliriously happy if you were to permit me to court you.”

It hit her then that this was truly insane. What was she doing, allowing herself to be wooed by an AI? Was she genuinely that desperate?

I’m sorry,” she’d told him, “but… it’s impossible.”

The hologram of Olav’s face inside the robot’s helmet closed its eyes, but then he smiled. “Nothing is truly impossible,” he said. “I, myself, am proof.”

«What kind of psi-drug are you on?» Alise asked, bewildered at the strength of my telepathy.

He,” Agidda agreed, not wanting to offend Amika. “You know,” he said, turning to me, “if you want to accompany Olav on his Imperial tour, as his… uh… guardian, I’m sure something could be arranged.”




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It took a supreme effort of will to school my face from showing the shock and revulsion that swept through me.

"Ah, no thank you. My duty takes me in a different direction."

Internally, I could not imagine a worse fate. I had spent one tour beached when my father was ill, and had no desire to sabotage my career further by voluntarily giving up combat command to shepherd a hopped up hologram as it gave speeches. Why did everyone continually think I wanted to be associated with Olav?

I smiled in Agidda's direction.

"I know it is hard to imagine wanting to put yourself in harm's way, but this command is everything I have been working towards for my entire career. Giving it up would mean disappointing a great number of people who have invested in me over the years."

<<"Never you mind. You will not be getting any of it.">>

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Chapter 49 is ready for your suggestions and suggested edits.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ANWN-QEm8elW4m4coiK78i5IaLU8_AHE/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113687616933633107445&rtpof=true&sd=true

PLEASE REMEMBER to change "EDITING" to "SUGGESTING" (near the upper right-hand corner) before doing any edits.

Will let you know when I get the next Chapter started, hopefully by Friday.

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Chapter 49 is ready for your suggestions and suggested edits.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ANWN-QEm8elW4m4coiK78i5IaLU8_AHE/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113687616933633107445&rtpof=true&sd=true

PLEASE REMEMBER to change "EDITING" to "SUGGESTING" (near the upper right-hand corner) before doing any edits.

Will do, possibly this evening, more likely tomorrow.

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