Chapter 48

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Jim Vassilakos

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Faulk’s office was high up in one of Silver City’s towers, at least as evidenced by the view from his office window. The turboporters had dislodged us, one at a time, on the very floor of the building in which it was located, all without giving any indication of which building we were in or even which floor we were going to. Hence, the view came as a mild surprise, but then I remembered that the thin man of middling height standing before me was a high-end lawyer, a specialist in High Justice, no less. He had gaunt features and a beard that was more white than gray, but his eyes were his most notable feature, dark and penetrating, like a predator sizing up potential prey.

Let’s start by you telling me what happened,” he said once we’d gone through the perfunctory introductions, sat down, and been offered drinks by his autoserver.

To make a complicated story simple, I was accosted by Heron security,” I said, “ostensibly over an incorrect entry visa. The Captain I was with attempted to intervene on my behalf, and when these security agents resorted to force whilst ignoring our comments, I called in my own forces and laid a temporary interdiction over the area. I admit there was an inconsistency in my visa approval, but I submit that the response was an order of magnitude greater than it needed to be, and, let me be clear, attempts to apply force to active duty naval officers is not tolerated. Especially when it is agents of the local government applying force. I have commended my Marines in their restraint.”

Faulk looked at me, perhaps waiting to see if I’d go on. Meanwhile, Lt. Sidara was thinking about their prior conversation and how he’d told her that at least during peacetime, the Navy only had free reign within the naval base and starports, and in the case of the latter, we still had to deal with the SPA, although they, at least, were an Imperial institution. Faulk didn’t bother to repeat any of this to me, however, and his brain, unlike Sidara’s, wasn’t bleeding stray thoughts into the ether. Instead, he simply asked a question.

Now that it’s all over, what do you want?”

I felt a certain heaviness in the pit of my stomach. What did I want?

I spent so much time implementing and doing what the Navy wanted, it sometimes took me by surprise that I had needs that didn’t always align. But here was a chance to try to make some positive change so some future spacer wouldn’t get roughed up by power hungry locals. I could even exact some personal revenge, but I pushed that thought to the side. If my experiences with Maakhiriin were anything to go by, I preferred revenge through living well.

What I would like is an investigation into policing practices as relates to the Navy,” I finally answered.

A local investigation or an Imperial one?”

Before I could decide, Sidara asked, “What would you recommend?”

Well, it would be fun to attack the bastards from both sides,” Faulk said. “The problem we’ll run into is the JIPD will probably back the HPSS.”

JIPD?” Sidara asked. She began to scroll through her notes.

The Justice, Incarceration, and Policing Division,” Faulk replied, “a.k.a. the keepers of order. How long do you plan to be here?”

At Jewell? It depends on how long it takes to do repairs,” I said.

Faulk nodded. “I’ll petition them and the County Court for expedited hearings.”

We’ve already got an Expedited Adjudication Request,” Sidara said.

Signed by?”

The Countess’s Chief of Staff, I believe.”

Really? How did you manage that?”

Sidara looked at me, causing Faulk to do likewise.

I saved the Countess some face by drawing down the interdiction in exchange for the Expedited Adjudication Request, this after she ignored my attempts to contact her directly.”

Interesting,” Faulk said. “Flick me a copy of that request. Actually, when they’re signed by the palace, we call them orders.”

It says request,” Sidara said.

But it’s from the palace, which sort of makes it an order.”

She glanced toward me, wide-eyed. As acting protocol officer, that was something she should have known, and it rather confirmed my initial assessment of the palace invitation.

It’ll definitely help us cut through the bureaucracy,” Faulk continued, “like a laser scalpel through warm butter. I’ll schedule a pair of hearings, and we’ll get this show on the road. With any luck, we’ll get the County Court to order the MOJ to open an investigation. Once that happens, the JIPD will be compelled to actually do their job.”

What about this Directorate for Ethical Reform in Policing?” Sidara asked, looking at her notes.

They’re a Citizens Action Committee that got too big for its britches,” Faulk said with a smirk. “Ever since they were elevated to the status of a directorate, they’ve been pushing for blindness in justice.”

Blindness in justice?” Sidara asked.

Anti-profiling. But that’s fine. We can go talk to them, and with this Expedited Adjudication Order, they’ll have no choice but to fit us into their schedule.”

I groaned inwardly, feeling the heaviness in my stomach tighten into a knot.

What I’m worried about,” I said, “is that at the end of all this, I’ll get an official apology, meaning a false one, and someone will make a notation in some secret file flagging me for additional screening every time I come into contact with local law enforcement.”

Faulk stared at me momentarily, his expression perfectly blank.

Are you planning on retiring to Jewell?” he finally asked.

No.”

He shrugged. What he was saying, albeit tacitly, was that it didn’t matter if Jewell’s labyrinthine bureaucracy decided to hold a grudge. I wasn’t going to be here long enough to let it worry me.

Something else may be going on,” I said, leaning in, “something that leaves me with an ill taste in my mouth. I can’t prove anything, but there have been enough random events connected to me and my crew to give me suspicions. My job involves keeping the Imperium safe. The Imperium has seen fit to give me the tools to do that job decisively. The Interdiction I pulled down? It could have been a lot worse if one of us had died. We are currently processing all the Intel data we scooped while we were in control, and we are looking for differences in the stories we are being told. What are the penalties for lying during court proceedings here?”

In the Magisterial Court for the County of Jewell, perjury carries a five year sentence, but in the Jewellian courts, it’s seven.”

I leaned back again. He was nominally my representative to both.

I am required by regulations to use local representation in these matters. But we are in a situation of overlapping jurisdictions, and decisions made in one sphere are likely to precipitate actions in another.”

I get it,” he said, nodding. “This is political. Caution is justified, prudence an asset. But there’s something you need to understand. Legal contests at this level are like street fights, and if we mean to win, we can’t pull our punches. It’s go for the throat or walk away.”

Walk away. Now there’s something I hadn’t considered. But I nodded. Faulk was using language I understood.

What I want, Mr. Faulk, is to finish repairing my ship and continue on my mission, with the least amount of official interaction I can get away with.”

My understanding is you’re scheduled to appear at the Imperial Palace today.”

Yes.”

He arched an eyebrow, probably amused at my role as the reluctant birthday boy.

When you get in there,” he said, “somebody on the Countess’s staff will ask for your side of the story, but what they’ll really want to know is how angry you are and how serious you are about getting even. If you tell them what you just told me, they’ll make a bunch of promises that will most likely be forgotten the moment you leave. Once you’re gone, this whole incident will be swept under the rug. The HPSS will keep doing whatever they want, and nothing will change.

If you want things to change,” he continued, “we have to get under their skin. But you need to be careful what you say, because if the palace decides it’s more expedient to throw you under the bus than go to war with the HPSS, that’s what they’ll do, so you need to avoid saying anything they might be able to turn against you. So what you do is you tell them you hired me and will be speaking through me. Tell ‘em Bili’s got your back. Then they’ll stop bothering you, and they’ll start bothering me, and when they do, I’ll get them to fall in line, because like I said, this whole thing is probably going to end up local versus Imperial, and once that happens, they really have no other choice. No matter what they say to you now, they will ultimately fall in line. But you have to let me do the talking.”

I took this in and really studied the man before me. Command involved assigning the best person to the job and letting them get it done.

Understood. May I show them how mad I am? Or would you prefer Captain Ironface?”

Ironface,” he replied. “The fact that you hired me will speak for itself.”

Just so you know, I have some personal history with someone on the Countess’s staff.”

Oh?”

An old shipmate, Guri Maakhiriin, now of the Subsector Navy.”

An old friend?”

Quite the opposite. If I were them, that’s who I’d assign… to see if he can get a rise out of me. It’s what they’ve been doing so far, either that or he’s been freelancing for his own reasons.”

What’s the beef about?”

He thinks I ruined his career.”

And he’s a member of the palace staff?”

Naval Liaison.”

Naval Liaison to an Imperial Countess. Doesn’t exactly qualify as a ruined career. What was he expecting? That he’d be Grand Admiral?”

I couldn’t help but grin. “For some people, their anger doesn’t need to make sense. But, to be fair, he was discharged from the Imperial Navy and ended up relegated to a colonial fleet, which I can well imagine feels like a slap to the face.”

I’m glad you warned me about this guy. Be very careful what you say to him or in his presence.”

I nodded. “There’s one more thing. I’ll be perfectly frank. If worse comes to worse, we can make a deal, and I can accept the surface platitudes and be on my way. But I can’t help but think someone is trying to make some changes, and they’re using me as a lever. Those most affected should have an opportunity to fight back, so maybe we should talk to these Ethical Reform people. I’m probably not the sort of victim they’re used to, but maybe we can find some common interest.”

I suppose it’s worth a shot,” he said.

Please keep Lt. Sidara apprised of any further requirements. I will be happy to make myself available at your discretion. If there’s nothing further, I believe we have a summons — sorry, invitation — to accept.”

Sidara’s brain seemed to go offline for a moment, but then it chirped back up with You Idiot! How could you not know it was a summons!? Because it said invitation. How was I supposed to know it was being coy? Because you’re the acting Protocol Officer, idiot!

«Schizo,» Josefeen observed. «This is what happens when people take their jobs too seriously

Indeed, Sidara was flushed and beginning to sweat, so much so I could feel the tingling heat in her face as we took turns shaking Mr. Faulk’s hand. Then we headed back to the turboporter, Sidara still scolding herself for the error.

«Poor woman. You should really give her some shore leave. By the way, the reason you couldn’t read any thoughts from the lawyer was because of his subderm A subdermal psi-shield, she meant. The operation was somewhat dangerous, as it involved a skull transplant, and Darrian, a non-Imperial world, was the only place in the sector one could get it done reliably. Nonetheless, for certain wealthy individuals with very good reasons (i.e., professional reasons) for keeping their thoughts private, subderms were becoming something of a fashion, albeit an invisible one.


(Gus can feel free to carry on this telepathic conversation for a few moments, but whatever he might send would have to be fairly quick.)


As we approached the single turboporter terminal, I once again motioned for my companions to go first, and Lt. Sidara told Josefeen to go, so off Josefeen went, Sidara turning to me during the brief interlude between when the turboporter door closed and would reopen.

Sir.” He doesn’t want the crew to salute him. How do you think he’s going to feel about having to listen to an awkward apology? “I’ll go ahead, sir,” she said, losing her nerve.


(Gus doesn’t need to respond to this, but he can if he wants to.)


She entered her capsule, and soon an empty one took its place.

“State destination,” a computer-generated voice said as I entered.

“Imperial Palace.

The capsule started moving fast and then faster, and outside the narrow window, it was like a mosaic was flowing by, white floodlight reflecting from seemingly countless angles, Silver City starkly luminous against the jet back sky.


(Describe what Gus is thinking, if anything.)


The capsule came to a stop, and as the doors slid open, I could see I was back in the palace’s security foyer. As expected, Josefeen and Lt. Sidara had arrived ahead of me, but who they were introducing themselves to was surprising. It was none other than Lady Alise and her minder, Squiress Durami, the latter now free from her head-bubble.

Hello.” The Squiress smiled. “I’m cured.” She curtsied as I approached, using the form that denoted respect to the Imperial Military. Alise, of course, couldn’t follow suit, for she was a lady and could only curtsy a flag officer, but she nodded her head slightly, no doubt awaiting my bow.


(What does Gus do/say/think?)



Jim Vassilakos

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I'm going to remove that stuff about Darrian being the place to get this operation done. I was initially thinking it would be something on the edge of the tech curve. However, during a TML discussion on this topic (see https://www.simplelists.com/tml/msg/25650551/), Rupert Boleyn pointed out that TNE’s Fire, Fusion, & Steel shows cybernetic psionic shields coming available at TL-13, and they apparently go slick (subdermal) at TL-14 (see the Cyber Head Options table on page 82). So they aren't going to be quite as rare as I initially thought. All of which begs the question, is psionics useful if most reasonably wealthy people can afford a subderm? Maybe it's akin to VPNs. Most people can afford them, but how many actually get one? Most don't care enough to bother, but those who do are going to get one. Anyway, this does depower telepathy to a degree, but I suppose it was an inevitability. Let me know your thoughts.


 


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<<"Interesting.">> I thought back to what it felt like to encounter the lack of presence of the mind. I wondered briefly if the subderms had sensors that let the user know they were being probed.
<<Any wisdom there?">>


(Gus can feel free to carry on this telepathic conversation for a few moments, but whatever he might send would have to be fairly quick.)


As we approached the single turboporter terminal, I once again motioned for my companions to go first, and Lt. Sidara told Josefeen to go, so off Josefeen went, Sidara turning to me during the brief interlude between when the turboporter door closed and would reopen.

Sir.” He doesn’t want the crew to salute him. How do you think he’s going to feel about having to listen to an awkward apology? “I’ll go ahead, sir,” she said, losing her nerve.

(Gus doesn’t need to respond to this, but he can if he wants to.)

"Lieutenant." I waited until I had her attention back. Pep talks work better if the subject is paying attention "I am sure you are capable in your role as legal liaison. As an acting protocol officer, you are taking on a bigger burden. Where are you from? Doesn't matter really, protocol is a big area and you never know when you are going to run into people who have more knowledge than you. Do not let yourself get caught up in my battles too much, I need you to safekeep the Navy's reputation." I smiled at her. "You are doing fine. Keep up the good work. After all you could have it worse like Lt Abbonette who I pressed into being my aide. She has to agree with me. You get to offer contrary suggestions at least." I gestured to the waiting capsule. "Off you go."


She entered her capsule, and soon an empty one took its place.

“State destination,” a computer-generated voice said as I entered.

“Imperial Palace.

The capsule started moving fast and then faster, and outside the narrow window, it was like a mosaic was flowing by, white floodlight reflecting from seemingly countless angles, Silver City starkly luminous against the jet back sky.


It was a mixed bag, being able to see the inner thoughts of my crew. It certainly made me seem more effective in delivering needed reassurances, or stinging points of correction, both of which were starting, or at least I hoped, were starting the legend of an omniscient captain persona. On the other hand, I had actionable intelligence that I could not act on without revealing the source, which would create bigger complications than I was prepared to deal with.


(Describe what Gus is thinking, if anything.)


The capsule came to a stop, and as the doors slid open, I could see I was back in the palace’s security foyer. As expected, Josefeen and Lt. Sidara had arrived ahead of me, but who they were introducing themselves to was surprising. It was none other than Lady Alise and her minder, Squiress Durami, the latter now free from her head-bubble.

Hello.” The Squiress smiled. “I’m cured.” She curtsied as I approached, using the form that denoted respect to the Imperial Military. Alise, of course, couldn’t follow suit, for she was a lady and could only curtsy a flag officer, but she nodded her head slightly, no doubt awaiting my bow.


(What does Gus do/say/think?)


I took a few steps forward and bowed to Alise, and included Durami by dint of deflecting the direction of the bow a couple of degrees off center from Alise and in the form of respect to superior nobility, which they both were to me. I left it a little long, enough to move the respect conveyed past what would be given to new meetings but not so long enough to infer familiarity.I wondered if they noticed the flourish I added with the slight click of the heels to indicate loyal service.
"My ladies, a pleasure to once again be in your company."
As I stood, I looked about to see if anyone else was about and gently stretched out my mind to feel for the same.
I was slightly conscious of the tightening of my uniform across my armored chest as I stood from my bow into a shoulders back parade rest.
"To what do I owe the honor of your greeting?"



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«Interesting.» I hadn’t tried probing Faulk’s mind and wondered what might have happened if I had. Did subdermal psi-shields included sensors that let the user know they were being probed? «Any wisdom there?» I asked, assuming Josefeen was listening in on my every thought.

«Huh?»

Apparently, I was mistaken, and then I realized that though she’d pumped me with a second shot of the psi-enhancer, we hadn’t reestablished our durable telepathic bond.


(I want to pause here for a moment and confirm that Gus motions for either of the ladies to go first, rather than tell one or the other to go first or go first himself. This is something I should have let you decide rather than me.)



Conrad Rader

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On Thu, Sep 19, 2024 at 10:31 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

«Interesting.» I hadn’t tried probing Faulk’s mind and wondered what might have happened if I had. Did subdermal psi-shields included sensors that let the user know they were being probed? «Any wisdom there?» I asked, assuming Josefeen was listening in on my every thought.

«Huh?»

Apparently, I was mistaken, and then I realized that though she’d pumped me with a second shot of the psi-enhancer, we hadn’t reestablished our durable telepathic bond.


I really didn't want to kiss her again. I wonder if we could make the connection with really intense thinking.
The wry look on Josafeen's face made it clear that no, that was not an option as I waved her into the waiting capsule.
I looked over to Sidara, and took in her thoughts and look and gently placed a hand on her arm to stop her.
"Lieutenant, a moment."
I stepped off to the side so we would not block access to the tube.


(I want to pause here for a moment and confirm that Gus motions for either of the ladies to go first, rather than tell one or the other to go first or go first himself. This is something I should have let you decide rather than me.)



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So Gus is stopping Sidara to talk to her and telling Josefeen to take the first turboporter?

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Apparently, I was mistaken, and then it hit me. Though she’d pumped me with a second shot of the psi-enhancer, we hadn’t reestablished our durable psychic link. I really didn’t want to kiss her again and wondered if we could make the connection with really intense thoughts.

«If you were properly trained,» she answered, proving she could still get in my head. Indeed, as we approached the single turboporter terminal, I sense her tentacle skimming my surface thoughts. «And what’s this about you not wanting to kiss me? Do you find me revolting, Gus? Do you?»


(Response?)


I looked over to Lt. Sidara, sensing there was something she wanted to say to me privately, something about the meeting we just had. Oh, of course. She wanted to apologize for her mistake. I gently placed a hand on her arm and motioned for Josefeen to take the first capsule.


(I’ll furnish Josefeen’s reply to your response.)


Off Josefeen went, Lt. Sidara turning to me during the brief interlude between when the turboporter door closed and would reopen.

He doesn’t want the crew to salute him, she was thinking. How do you think he’s going to feel about having to listen to an awkward apology?

Lieutenant.”

Sir?”

I am sure you are capable in your role as legal liaison. But as acting protocol officer, you are taking on a bigger burden. Where are you from?”

Mongo, sir.”

Which was only two parsecs away. It made her ignorance with respect to matters of court all the more glaring.

Doesn’t matter really,” I said. “Protocol is a big area, and you never know when you are going to run into people who have more knowledge than you. Do not let yourself get caught up in my battles too much. I need you to safekeep the Navy’s reputation.”

I understand, sir, and I promise I’ll do better.”

I smiled. “You are doing fine. Keep up the good work. And remember, you could have it worse, like Lt. Abbonette, who I pressed into being my aide. She has to agree with me,” I said, pretty sure I was keeping a straight face. “You get to offer contrary suggestions, at least.” I gestured to the waiting capsule. “Off you go.”

Aye aye, sir. And thank you, sir.”

She entered her capsule, and soon an empty one took its place.

State destination,” a computer-generated voice said as I entered.

Imperial Palace.”

My capsule left outside the building and picked up speed, although its inertial compensators let there be no hint of motion. Outside the narrow window, the city sped by like a flowing mosaic, white floodlight reflecting from seemingly countless angles, Silver City starkly luminous against the jet back sky.

It was a mixed bag, being able to see the inner thoughts of my crew. It certainly made me seem more effective in delivering needed reassurances, or stinging points of correction, both of which I hoped might begin the legend of the omniscient Captain Plankwell. On the other hand, I had actionable intelligence that I could not act on without revealing the source, which would create bigger complications than I was prepared to deal with.

The capsule came to a stop, and as the doors slid open, I could see I was back in the palace’s security foyer. As expected, Josefeen and Lt. Sidara had arrived ahead of me, but who they were introducing themselves to was surprising. It was none other than Lady Alise and her minder, Squiress Durami, the latter now free from her head-bubble.1

Hello again.” The Squiress smiled. “I’m cured.” She curtsied as I approached, using the form that denoted respect to the Imperial Military. Alise, of course, couldn’t follow suit, for she was a lady and could only curtsy a flag officer, but she nodded her head slightly, no doubt awaiting my bow.


I took a few steps forward and bowed to Alise, not the best bow I’d ever done given the stiffness of my bulletproof vest, but I managed to include Durami by dint of deflecting the direction of the bow several degrees off-center from Alise. It was in the form of respect to Imperial nobility, but I made it a little quick, short of what would be normal at a first meetings but not so short as to infer familiarity. Finally, I flourished it with a slight click of my heels, indicating loyal service.

My ladies, a pleasure to once again be in your company.”

It is our pleasure to be attended once again by the gallant Captain,” the Squiress said. Lt. Sidara, for her part, was in awe, as Alise was the reigning noble of Mongo, her homeworld. Millions of people lived there, and very few of them ever got to meet her, much less her mother, the Countess of Jewell. Needless to say, Sidara was worried she’d do something stupid, like bowing for too long or too short or not clicking her heels together with just the right amount of force, so she endeavored to bow exactly as I had, and she mimicked me so well that she came up too quick, given that this was her first time meeting these two noblewomen. Josefeen, meanwhile, kept her bow just a hair of a moment longer, enough to not give offense.

Yes! Sidara thought to herself. I did it! Wait. Why’s everyone looking at me?

To what do I owe the honor of your greeting?” I asked.

I want to thank you for your assistance with the Lady Mongo,” Durami said, glancing briefly to Alise, but then she returned her gaze to me as I pulled my shoulders into a parade rest, my uniform tight across my armored chest. No less than five guards and a beefy-looking robot stood nearby, and I was curious to see if there was anyone else nearby, but it would have been rude to shift my attention while the Squiress was looking upon me so intently, so I stretched my mind out instead and discovered a psychic tentacle poking its way in. “I want to thank you by warning you,” Durami continued. “The two HPSS contractors who… ah… acted so ungentlemanly toward you…, they’re here.”


(What’s Gus think, say, and/or do?)




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Apparently, I was mistaken, and then it hit me. Though she’d pumped me with a second shot of the psi-enhancer, we hadn’t reestablished our durable psychic link. I really didn’t want to kiss her again and wondered if we could make the connection with really intense thoughts.

«If you were properly trained,» she answered, proving she could still get in my head. Indeed, as we approached the single turboporter terminal, I sense her tentacle skimming my surface thoughts. «And what’s this about you not wanting to kiss me? Do you find me revolting, Gus? Do you?»


[[<<"Don't be silly, of course I don't find you revolting. It's the constant having to counter the impression that I can't keep my hands off of you, because we seem to be in public places when we need to reassert the connection. Or is this part of the plan to harden me? {{Innuendo definitely intended}}>>

<<"Stop probing me, I'll find a private moment in the Palace to reassert the connection.">>


I looked over to Lt. Sidara, sensing there was something she wanted to say to me privately, something about the meeting we just had. Oh, of course. She wanted to apologize for her mistake. I gently placed a hand on her arm and motioned for Josefeen to take the first capsule.


(I’ll furnish Josefeen’s reply to your response.)


Off Josefeen went, Lt. Sidara turning to me during the brief interlude between when the turboporter door closed and would reopen.

He doesn’t want the crew to salute him, she was thinking. How do you think he’s going to feel about having to listen to an awkward apology?

Lieutenant.”

Sir?”

I am sure you are capable in your role as legal liaison. But as acting protocol officer, you are taking on a bigger burden. Where are you from?”

Mongo, sir.”

Which was only two parsecs away. It made her ignorance with respect to matters of court all the more glaring.

Doesn’t matter really,” I said. “Protocol is a big area, and you never know when you are going to run into people who have more knowledge than you. Do not let yourself get caught up in my battles too much. I need you to safekeep the Navy’s reputation.”

I understand, sir, and I promise I’ll do better.”

I smiled. “You are doing fine. Keep up the good work. And remember, you could have it worse, like Lt. Abbonette, who I pressed into being my aide. She has to agree with me,” I said, pretty sure I was keeping a straight face. “You get to offer contrary suggestions, at least.” I gestured to the waiting capsule. “Off you go.”

Aye aye, sir. And thank you, sir.”

She entered her capsule, and soon an empty one took its place.

State destination,” a computer-generated voice said as I entered.

Imperial Palace.”

My capsule left outside the building and picked up speed, although its inertial compensators let there be no hint of motion. Outside the narrow window, the city sped by like a flowing mosaic, white floodlight reflecting from seemingly countless angles, Silver City starkly luminous against the jet back sky.

It was a mixed bag, being able to see the inner thoughts of my crew. It certainly made me seem more effective in delivering needed reassurances, or stinging points of correction, both of which I hoped might begin the legend of the omniscient Captain Plankwell. On the other hand, I had actionable intelligence that I could not act on without revealing the source, which would create bigger complications than I was prepared to deal with.

The capsule came to a stop, and as the doors slid open, I could see I was back in the palace’s security foyer. As expected, Josefeen and Lt. Sidara had arrived ahead of me, but who they were introducing themselves to was surprising. It was none other than Lady Alise and her minder, Squiress Durami, the latter now free from her head-bubble.1

Hello again.” The Squiress smiled. “I’m cured.” She curtsied as I approached, using the form that denoted respect to the Imperial Military. Alise, of course, couldn’t follow suit, for she was a lady and could only curtsy a flag officer, but she nodded her head slightly, no doubt awaiting my bow.


I took a few steps forward and bowed to Alise, not the best bow I’d ever done given the stiffness of my bulletproof vest, but I managed to include Durami by dint of deflecting the direction of the bow several degrees off-center from Alise. It was in the form of respect to Imperial nobility, but I made it a little quick, short of what would be normal at a first meetings but not so short as to infer familiarity. Finally, I flourished it with a slight click of my heels, indicating loyal service.

My ladies, a pleasure to once again be in your company.”

It is our pleasure to be attended once again by the gallant Captain,” the Squiress said. Lt. Sidara, for her part, was in awe, as Alise was the reigning noble of Mongo, her homeworld. Millions of people lived there, and very few of them ever got to meet her, much less her mother, the Countess of Jewell. Needless to say, Sidara was worried she’d do something stupid, like bowing for too long or too short or not clicking her heels together with just the right amount of force, so she endeavored to bow exactly as I had, and she mimicked me so well that she came up too quick, given that this was her first time meeting these two noblewomen. Josefeen, meanwhile, kept her bow just a hair of a moment longer, enough to not give offense.

Yes! Sidara thought to herself. I did it! Wait. Why’s everyone looking at me?

[[I made a mental note to have Sidara review the male/female and alternate gender signifiers in the bow. She just declared herself a man in service to a noble, and in some circles that was a very forward suggestion]]

To what do I owe the honor of your greeting?” I asked.

I want to thank you for your assistance with the Lady Mongo,” Durami said, glancing briefly to Alise, but then she returned her gaze to me as I pulled my shoulders into a parade rest, my uniform tight across my armored chest. No less than five guards and a beefy-looking robot stood nearby, and I was curious to see if there was anyone else nearby, but it would have been rude to shift my attention while the Squiress was looking upon me so intently, so I stretched my mind out instead and discovered a psychic tentacle poking its way in. “I want to thank you by warning you,” Durami continued. “The two HPSS contractors who… ah… acted so ungentlemanly toward you…, they’re here.”


(What’s Gus think, say, and/or do?)

[[I cocked my head to the side. "Are they now? I suppose that will be of interest to my counsel, Bili Faulk. Lt Sidara, please send an update to Mr Faulk."

I kept my face expressionless as instructed, but I opened up my psyche to 'hear' whatever was going to get leaked by that declaration.




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I cocked my head to the side. “Are they now? I suppose that will be of interest to my counsel, Bili Faulk. Lt. Sidara, please send an update to Mr. Faulk.”

Aye aye, sir.”

I kept my face expressionless, as Faulk had instructed, but I opened up my psyche to ‘hear’ whatever might get leaked as a consequence of that declaration. Almost instantly, I could sense there was something in Durami’s mind about Faulk, a memory of him getting snarky, effectively gloating after a victory, and it made me think of Kaz and her brief conversation in committee with the Countess.

«What do you think you’re doing?» Josefeen’s voice floated across my mind but as if spoken in another direction.

«Who are you?» “Faulk? You hired Bili Faulk?” Durami asked. She’d glanced at Josefeen for the first part, but I could somehow hear it, and I could even hear Josefeen’s reply: «Naval Intelligence. You will cease and desist immediately. Captain Plankwell’s mind is off-limits.»




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I snapped the mental drapes shut and did my best to retain the Ironface I had bragged to Faulk about.

"Please, let us not keep the Countess waiting."

Every time I thought I had a handle on a situation, I was reminded I was like a tiger cub wandering around cluelessly, swatting at adults and it was only their forbearance that kept me from feeling the claws.

The thoughts I was keeping locked down stirred and I ached to just let loose, like I had with Masa and just get some people on my side. My command sense locked down even harder, the only thing worse than someone running around with a hot fusion gun, was the one who did not understand the capabilities of the weapon.

My eyes looked to Josafeen for something. I should have skipped the pep talk and just crowded into the capsule with her. My brain helpfully painted the imagined scene.

I extended my arm to Alise.

"My lady, if I may have the honor of escorting you?" My request was not so bold as it might have been seen, having acted as escort for her in the recent past. It was a more normative offer, indicating I was open to whatever the Countess was proposing, but also indicating I was the one making the decisions.

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I snapped the mental drapes shut and did my best to retain the ironface I’d bragged to Faulk about.

Please, let us not keep the Countess waiting,” I said, ignoring Durami’s question, which was more exclamatory than interrogative anyway. Every time I thought I had a handle on a situation, I was reminded I was like a tiger cub wandering around cluelessly, swatting at adults, and it was only their forbearance that kept me from feeling the claws.

I extended my arm to Alise. “My lady, if I may have the honor of escorting you?”

My request was not so bold as it might have seemed, having acted as escort for her in the recent past. It was a more normative offer, indicating, I hoped, that I was open to hearing whatever the Countess might propose but also that I would be the one making the decisions.

Alise, her eyebrows rising slightly, glanced to her minder, the Squiress, who nodded without glancing back. She then stepped forward, placing her hand in mine, her form en ludicra, as one might take into a birthday party, which, of course, reminded me this was my birthday. Perhaps it was a tacit warning that a birthday party was about to commence?

Of course, I didn’t know which way to go, so I couldn’t lead, but she motioned with her chin toward a wide hall, and so we walked hand-in-hand, the thoughts I’d been keeping locked down stirring within me. I ached to just let loose, like I had with Masa. Somehow, I’d gotten him on my side, and without even trying. But my command sense locked down even harder. The only thing worse than someone running around with a hot fusion gun was the one who did not understand the capabilities of the weapon, and right now, that was me.

As we walked through the wide corridor of “living” statues, I wondered if maybe I should have skipped the pep talk with Lt. Sidara and just sent her ahead of us, either that or crowded into the first capsule with Josefeen, despite what Sidara might think. My brain painted the imagined scene quite vividly, until Alise squeezed my hand just enough to get my attention.

If you would trust me,” she whispered, leaning in, “you might well find a friend. Or am I too young for that also?”



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"I don't mistrust you."

Ever conscious of being watched, I turned my head slightly towards her.

"And I am always interested in new friends."

I left it at that. The offer was accepted but the cost was still hidden. I adjusted the turn of my arm to something more suitable to old friends than party guests, that brought her in closer to me.


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Sorry for the delay. A busy few days.


 “I don’t mistrust you.” Ever-conscious of being watched, I turned my head slightly towards her. “And I am always interested in new friends.”

Alise violently shook her head, causing her hair, which had been combed back, to suddenly drape her face. Then, using the fingers of her free hand, she combed it back to where it more or less belonged and finally looked at me with raised eyebrows.


(Does Gus respond to any of this in the last few steps before the tea room?)


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I returned the look, slightly perplexed. Then the credit dropped.

I released the hold on my mental drapes, opening them towards Alise.

<"Go ahead">

It was a hell of a leap of faith, but if it gave me an in, I was willing to take it. I thought Durami was the one being cautioned by Josafeen. It may have been, but Alise was in possession of more information.

I really hoped she wasn't about to force a durable psionic connection on me.



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Alise violently shook her head, causing her hair, which had been combed back, to suddenly drape her face. Then, using the fingers of her free hand, she combed it back to where it more or less belonged and finally looked at me with raised eyebrows.

I returned the look, slightly perplexed. Then the credit dropped, and I released the hold on my mental drapes.

«Go ahead,» I telepathically sent.

I adjusted the turn of my arm to something more suitable to old friends than party guests, which brought her in closer to me. It was a hell of a leap of faith, but if it gave me an in, I was willing to take it. I’d thought Durami was the one being cautioned by Josafeen. That may have been, but Alise was likely in possession of even more information than her minder, given her close relationship with the Countess. I just hoped she wasn’t about to force a durable psionic connection on me.

You must be very careful with whom you choose to telepathically conjoin,” Sy (aka Squiress Syeda Durami) had told her at some point in the past. “A psimergence is not a trifling undertaking. The participants are each flooded with each other’s knowledge and perspectives. When forged properly, its durability is such that it is difficult and painful to rescind. Whoever you do this with must be someone of whom your mother approves.”

Mother is a manipulator, I could sense Alise thinking.

The Countess was a manipulator?

The most powerful nobles are often manipulators,” Sy had told her. “Although rare, even among telepaths, the talent runs through the bloodlines of the oldest and most powerful of the noble lineages, including yours.”

So the Countess was a manipulator, as was I. At least, that’s what Josefeen had told me. But what did it mean precisely? I recalled the previous night, and how I’d been yanking Reggie’s memories out by their roots, severing from his mind any recollection of psi orbs and especially of the one Josefeen carried in our diplomatic pouch.

Alise twisted her neck back as far as it would stretch and caught a brief glimpse of the pouch, essentially a small briefcase, before returning her gaze to mine. It was only then I realized our eyes had been locked, and during that long moment I couldn’t even feel my feet against the polished floor despite the fact we’d continued walking, and in a straight line, no less, as though the parts of our brains associated with complex ideas and abstract thought had slipped away from those responsible for agility and motor control.

«You’re hopped up pretty well. Did you bring any to share?»

 “Happy birthday!” a chorus of voices cried out as we entered the tea room. There were even more people than before. The Countess, of course, sat at the head of the table, the two closest seats to her right unoccupied and therefore obviously reserved for myself and her daughter. At the opposite end of the table sat Canon Forklinbrass! He stared at me, his gaze narrowing, and Admiral Karneticky sat beside him, his lips forcefully pressed into a smile. Agidda was also present, as was Amika, accompanied once again by General Dakhir, and even Bim Marshall, my Scout Liaison, was there. He sat between a bushy-bearded man in an IISS uniform and a young blonde dressed in business attire, both of whom seemed vaguely familiar. Meanwhile, the table overflowed with decanters containing teas and juices as well as platters with cakes and breads and cheeses and jams, and there were fruit and prunes and even dried cave fungus and poppers, a veritable feast.


(Gus has no idea if Josefeen brought any extra psi-drugs. In any case, please describe what Gus would be thinking, saying, and/or doing in response to all this.)




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[[I will reply with Gus, but Conrad just thought Holeee shit!!! This is like the Dr. Who episode where they discover that the British Royal Family are probably werewolves.... My film critic friend often complains about the stakes in movies not being high enough to engage the viewer more viscerally, and you my friend just kicked the stakes in this story/game into the stratosphere... the revelation that old noble families are psionic, the implications for what that actually means for Gus, and coming into a party room with all of the live threads feels like Rosemary's Baby, the Red Wedding, and Al Capone's baseball bat scene rolled into one, and all I got on my side is a questionable IN agent and a rebellious noble girl. gonna need some time to let this sink in. All of my paranoid senese just went into overdrive. Is it like a Cold war East Berlin situation with the Zhodani and the Frontier Imperials, who is training everyone (are there Zho rebels seeking political asylum?), and it explains a LOT about how nobles remain in power, and very similar to current day power and information manipulations. Have I been a naif moving through enemies I thought of as friends, and are my actual friends (who I may have been considering enemies) have been trying to extricate me? Is the campaign of sabotage and rebellion really the aftereffects of the clampdown on the rebels?
This is not the first time you did this to me, and it is a big reason I keep playing this game. Thanks for a huge pick me up!!

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Thanks for the high praise, and I'm glad you're still enjoying the game. If you find yourself losing interest, however, it's okay to let me know. PBEMing is by its very nature a slow process, much slower in terms of plot development than face-to-face gaming. Nonetheless, I feel there's greater depth in terms of setting detail and characterization. Most importantly, it gives us time to think before making a move. Anyway, I'm curious to see where you take this.

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[[I briefly recalled swearing never to set foot on this planet again and felt that resolution wither up and blow away in the wave of feelings coming in from this crowd. Mixed feelings to be sure, but in light of the connection I was sharing with Alise, and where was Josafeen?

We were still walking into the crowd, but there were protocols to observe in approaching the Countess past senior officers in mine and other services. I wondered what Bim was doing there, along with the other Scout, but I pulled Alise to a halt long enough to acknowledge the Admiral and the General. Agidda, as a senior Imperial bureaucrat also got a respectful acknowledgement. Then it was time to be presented to the Countess. With whom I now had to assume knew I was a psi, and could feel the connection between her daughter and me.

<<"Unlike me, you are known to these people. I need this edge, and I am not holding any. Take it up with my aide.">>

Remembering the advice of my lawyers, I settled my expression into the pleasant face of surprised bemusement, like noble sponsored surprise parties were an everyday thing for me. I presented Alsie and fell into a court bow of the older style, used in learning the forms, but lacking modern flourish. It said, in effect, I thank you for your instruction. Not quite gauche, but holding a definitive message.

I was watching her hands, as the depth of the bow hid her face from view. They would tell me my next move. I wanted to reach for Josafeen but worried that random thought reaching would betray my weakness. I didn't know enough about what could be and couldn't be sensed, so I held with my connection to Alise and hoped for the best

 




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Chapter 48 is ready for your suggestions and suggested edits.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13viIwSZGguJeFDm3YOFSHN2jOfw04cg3/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113687616933633107445&rtpof=true&sd=true

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