Chapter 43

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Jim Vassilakos

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I had my Public Affairs officer meet us at the airlock to give Canon Forklinbrass a tour of the ship. Regimath, of course, was mentally focused on the psi orb, which he strongly and correctly suspected was in Josefeen’s diplomatic case.

We’ll meet for dinner,” I told him. “But there are pressing matters to which I must attend.” (FEEL FREE TO CHANGE)

Of course, Captain.” He wanted to bring up the orb in some oblique way, but he didn’t know how to do so without being obvious and, to a certain degree, guilty of covetousness, even though all he wanted was to touch it, just to see what might happen. Likewise, he was a bit afraid, I realized as he walked away with Lieutenant Parish, as he’d heard rumors that the God’s Eye was a dangerous thing, the key to powers beyond human comprehension.

«How many of these things are there?» I asked Josefeen. But before she could answer, I already knew this topic was so classified that even she didn’t know.

«You’ve heard of stovepiping, sir? If there’s no need to know, there’s no need to know.» She was fine with not knowing. A master manipulator psion had drilled that into her, a mandatory part of every intel psion’s education.

Manipulators were the disciplinarians and, Josefeen had logically reasoned, the ultimate masters of psion society. That was why she’d been so surprised when I displayed this specific talent. But I was not just a maniputor. I was also a poly-sci. That was rare. All this made me both valuable and dangerous, and because of this, she was already feeling inferior, which was a feeling she found both annoying and unexpected.


(Gus’s reaction, mentally, verbally, and/or physically.)


As I headed toward my quarters, Hoskins began to follow.


(Gus’s reaction.)



I went to my quarters, changed out of my dress uniform into some work clothes, then looked at the time. It was nearly 14:30. Dinner was served on almost all Navy ships from 1600-1800, which left me only an hour and a half, although being the Captain, I could push mine to whenever I wanted. I was a little hungry already, although I’d long been of the opinion that a little bit of hunger was a good thing, both physically as well as mentally.

First things first. I hit the call button on my wristcom. “Bim Marshall.”

Sir,” my scout liaison answered.


(Gus’s reaction.)



Conrad Rader

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On Sat, May 18, 2024 at 10:30 AM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

I had my Public Affairs officer meet us at the airlock to give Canon Forklinbrass a tour of the ship. Regimath, of course, was mentally focused on the psi orb, which he strongly and correctly suspected was in Josefeen’s diplomatic case.

We’ll meet for dinner,” I told him. “But there are pressing matters to which I must attend.” (FEEL FREE TO CHANGE)

Of course, Captain.” He wanted to bring up the orb in some oblique way, but he didn’t know how to do so without being obvious and, to a certain degree, guilty of covetousness, even though all he wanted was to touch it, just to see what might happen. Likewise, he was a bit afraid, I realized as he walked away with Lieutenant Parish, as he’d heard rumors that the God’s Eye was a dangerous thing, the key to powers beyond human comprehension.


[[I keyed a personnel advisory to the crew to politely refuse any offers of drinks from our guest while he was on board. I pointedly stared at Josafeen while I did so. Bloody intel officers are too resistant to command stares, especially when they know you are chuckling at the memory of her shared dreams while on the couch.]]

«How many of these things are there?» I asked Josefeen. But before she could answer, I already knew this topic was so classified that even she didn’t know.

«You’ve heard of stovepiping, sir? If there’s no need to know, there’s no need to know.» She was fine with not knowing. A master manipulator psion had drilled that into her, a mandatory part of every intel psion’s education.

Manipulators were the disciplinarians and, Josefeen had logically reasoned, the ultimate masters of psion society. That was why she’d been so surprised when I displayed this specific talent. But I was not just a maniputor. I was also a poly-sci. That was rare. All this made me both valuable and dangerous, and because of this, she was already feeling inferior, which was a feeling she found both annoying and unexpected.

[[<<Yeah, well I am not very comfortable with the whole situation either.>>

I was worried about the upper branches of psi Intel deciding I was too valuable and dangerous to be let loose with an independent cruiser command. All the more reason to expedite remaining repairs and move along while I could.

"Lieutenant Abbonette, you are dismissed.]]

(Gus’s reaction, mentally, verbally, and/or physically.)

As I headed toward my quarters, Hoskins began to follow.

[["Corporal. Thank you for your service, you are dismissed from detached bodyguard duty with my compliments. Go get out of that armor and grab some rack time. Captain's orders."]]

(Gus’s reaction.)

I went to my quarters, changed out of my dress uniform into some work clothes, then looked at the time. It was nearly 14:30. Dinner was served on almost all Navy ships from 1600-1800, which left me only an hour and a half, although being the Captain, I could push mine to whenever I wanted. I changed my mind and started changing into workout clothes. I was a little hungry already, although I’d long been of the opinion that a little bit of hunger was a good thing, both physically as well as mentally. I was more in the mood to take out some frustrations that I had been keeping locked up

First things first. I hit the call button on my wristcom. “Bim Marshall.”

Sir,” my scout liaison answered.


[["Report to the Marine gym in ten minutes prepared to report on the disposition of the scout module negotiations."

I then called up the Marine Gym and requested the floor officer to clear one of the combat bots for me, I would be right down and would be fighting after a quick warm up.]]


(Gus’s reaction.)



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Jim Vassilakos

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Manipulators were the disciplinarians and, Josefeen had logically reasoned, the ultimate masters of psion society. That was why she’d been so surprised when I displayed this specific talent. But I was not just a manipulator. I was also a poly-sci. That was rare. All this made me both valuable and dangerous, and because of this, she was already feeling inferior, which was a feeling she found both annoying and unexpected.

To be fair, I wasn’t comfortable with the whole situation either. I was particularly worried about the upper branches of Intel deciding I was too valuable/dangerous to be let loose with an independent cruiser command. All the more reason to expedite repairs and move along while I still could.

«You can run, but you can’t hide,» Josefeen’s voice echoed inside my skull. «And if you run away from the mission… well, frowns and demerits will be the least of your worries.»

(Gus’s response, if any.)


I keyed a personnel advisory to the crew to politely refuse any offers of drinks from our guest while he was onboard. I pointedly stared at Josafeen while I did so. Bloody intel officers are too resistant to command stares, especially when they know you are chuckling at the memory of her shared dreams while on the couch.

(You can amend this, if you like.)


Lieutenant Abbonette, you are dismissed.”

Aye aye, Captain Plankwell,” she said and then walked away.

As I headed toward my quarters, Hoskins began to follow.

Corporal. Thank you for your service. You are dismissed from detached bodyguard duty with my compliments. Go get out of that armor and grab some rack time. Captain’s orders.”

Aye aye, sir.”

As I walked to my quarters, I could sense Josefeen walking to hers, except she had to take the bus downtown, as she called it. The intel pod was all the way at the back, directly opposite the exploration pod, meaning that if the ship had turned the other way at Quar, it would have been her people rather than the scouts that got hit. Maybe Josefeen herself would have gotten sucked out into space, and then she never would have met this prodigy who the Imperium had held in reserve like an ace in the hole.

Why hadn’t they activated him during the war, she wondered.

(Gus’s reaction, if any.)


I reached my quarters, changed out of my dress uniform into some work clothes, then looked at the time. It was nearly 14:30. Dinner was served on almost all Navy ships from 1600-1800, which left me only an hour and a half, although being the Captain, I could push mine to whenever I wanted. I was a little hungry already, although I’d long been of the opinion that a little bit of hunger was a good thing, both physically as well as mentally.

I’d put off the gym for too long, I suddenly realized, so I changed out of the work clothes I’d just put on and into workout clothes.

I was more in the mood to take out some frustrations that I had been keeping locked up

First things first. I hit the call button on my wristcom. “Bim Marshall.”

Sir,” my scout liaison answered.

Report to the Marine gym in ten minutes prepared to report on the disposition of the scout module negotiations.”

Sir, I can’t get there in ten minutes. I’m dirtside.”

(Gus’s response.)




Conrad Rader

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On Mon, May 20, 2024 at 12:17 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

Manipulators were the disciplinarians and, Josefeen had logically reasoned, the ultimate masters of psion society. That was why she’d been so surprised when I displayed this specific talent. But I was not just a manipulator. I was also a poly-sci. That was rare. All this made me both valuable and dangerous, and because of this, she was already feeling inferior, which was a feeling she found both annoying and unexpected.

To be fair, I wasn’t comfortable with the whole situation either. I was particularly worried about the upper branches of Intel deciding I was too valuable/dangerous to be let loose with an independent cruiser command. All the more reason to expedite repairs and move along while I still could.

«You can run, but you can’t hide,» Josefeen’s voice echoed inside my skull. «And if you run away from the mission… well, frowns and demerits will be the least of your worries.»


[[<<Nobody's hiding. I know my duty, but until someone orders me otherwise, I am doing what I am doing. And the mission is the same, just where it's happening is changing. I'll speak to your boss tonight to get the lowdown on the fizzle at the event and then we will see what we will see.>>]]

(Gus’s response, if any.)


I keyed a personnel advisory to the crew to politely refuse any offers of drinks from our guest while he was onboard. I pointedly stared at Josafeen while I did so. Bloody intel officers are too resistant to command stares, especially when they know you are chuckling at the memory of her shared dreams while on the couch.

(You can amend this, if you like.)


Lieutenant Abbonette, you are dismissed.”

Aye aye, Captain Plankwell,” she said and then walked away.

As I headed toward my quarters, Hoskins began to follow.

Corporal. Thank you for your service. You are dismissed from detached bodyguard duty with my compliments. Go get out of that armor and grab some rack time. Captain’s orders.”

Aye aye, sir.”

As I walked to my quarters, I could sense Josefeen walking to hers, except she had to take the bus downtown, as she called it. The intel pod was all the way at the back, directly opposite the exploration pod, meaning that if the ship had turned the other way at Quar, it would have been her people rather than the scouts that got hit. Maybe Josefeen herself would have gotten sucked out into space, and then she never would have met this prodigy who the Imperium had held in reserve like an ace in the hole.

Why hadn’t they activated him during the war, she wondered.

(Gus’s reaction, if any.)

[[I had wondered that as well. I thought over my war service and didn't think I had been especially key. Maybe they worried about activating more psions in an environment where they could be suborned by close contact with the enemy. I frowned at that thought. I had been in close contact with Zhodani on a couple of occasions. Why hadn't they detected my abilities? I shook my head. It was easier when Intel was a black box of instructions to be followed.]]


I reached my quarters, changed out of my dress uniform into some work clothes, then looked at the time. It was nearly 14:30. Dinner was served on almost all Navy ships from 1600-1800, which left me only an hour and a half, although being the Captain, I could push mine to whenever I wanted. I was a little hungry already, although I’d long been of the opinion that a little bit of hunger was a good thing, both physically as well as mentally.

I’d put off the gym for too long, I suddenly realized, so I changed out of the work clothes I’d just put on and into workout clothes.

I was more in the mood to take out some frustrations that I had been keeping locked up

First things first. I hit the call button on my wristcom. “Bim Marshall.”

Sir,” my scout liaison answered.

Report to the Marine gym in ten minutes prepared to report on the disposition of the scout module negotiations.”

Sir, I can’t get there in ten minutes. I’m dirtside.”

(Gus’s response.)

[["Get to a secure location and establish a secure connection, and ping me when it's done."

I was in no mood for excuses, and Bim was still being evaluated for suitability to my crew.

I left my quarters and proceeded to the Marine Gym. I commed ahead to the officer of the deck so they wouldn't be too surprised when I showed up. Training bot or closest to my experience live sparring partner, it didn't really matter to me. The Ship's Combat Master would need to verify my skill rankings in any case, I had lapsed in some areas with the long trip out of the Extents and I did need to make up for missing the earlier appointment I had scheduled.

{{The Imperial Navy Ship's Combat Master is the highest ranked personal combat instructor, responsible for making sure everyone in combat roles were up to date with their certifications and could reliably be counted upon to do what their service jackets said they could do. A similar position was the Master Armsman for ranged weapon combat. Often, these positions were reserved for long term service officers as their last assignment before mustering out}}

The ship was emptier than the last time I was walking around, given that I had released so many for the ceremony. I liked busy ships, but I also liked these times when I had a corridor to myself, and didn't have to worry about correct courtesy or the eager ensign with a problem and solution.

I idly wondered why Nizlich had not found me yet. Technically, she was still in command until I relieved her, and I didn't really mind being on board for a couple of hours without immediate command responsibility, but it seemed to be a gap in her otherwise extreme efficiency.




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«Nobody’s hiding. I know my duty, but until someone orders me otherwise, I am doing what I am doing. And the mission is the same, just where it’s happening is changing. I’ll speak to your boss tonight to get the lowdown on the fizzle at the event, and then we will see what we will see.»

I dictated a personnel advisory to the crew to politely refuse any offers of drinks from the Canon while he was onboard, pointedly staring at Josefeen while I did so. She simply stared back at me like I was a moldy piece of bread. Bloody intel officers. All too resistant to command stares, although I couldn’t help but chuckle inwardly at the memory of her psychedelic encounter with the universe.

She raised an eyebrow, wondering for how long she would remain a source of amusement.

Lieutenant Abbonette, you are dismissed.”

Aye aye, Captain Plankwell,” she said in a tired voice, then turned and walked away.

As I headed toward my quarters, Hoskins began to follow.

Corporal, thank you for your service. You are dismissed from detached bodyguard duty with my compliments. Go get out of that armor and grab some rack time. Captain’s orders.”

Aye aye, sir.”

As I walked to my quarters, I could sense Josefeen walking to hers, except she had to take the bus downtown, as she called it. The intel pod was all the way at the back, directly opposite the exploration pod, meaning that if the ship had turned the other way at Quar, it would have been her people rather than the scouts that got hit. Maybe Josefeen herself would have gotten sucked out into space, and then she never would have met this prodigy who the Imperium had held in reserve like an ace in the hole.

Why hadn’t they activated him during the war, she wondered.

I’d wondered that as well. I thought over my war service and didn’t think I'd been especially key. Maybe they worried about activating more psions in an environment where they could be suborned by close contact with the enemy. I frowned at that thought. I had been in close contact with Zhodani on a couple of occasions. Why hadn't they detected my potential? It probably wasn’t that easy. I shook my head. There was still so much I didn’t know. It was easier when Intel was a black box of instructions to be followed.

I reached my quarters as Josefeen entered a capsule and began heading aftward along the spinal transport tube. Was she still able to sense my presence as I was able to sense hers? I began changing out of my dress uniform into some work clothes, then looked at the time. It was nearly 14:30. Dinner was served on almost all Navy ships from 1600-1800, which left me only an hour and a half, although being the Captain, I could push my meals to whenever I wanted. I was a little hungry already, although I’d long been of the opinion that a little bit of hunger was a good thing, both physically as well as mentally.

I’d put off the gym for too long, I suddenly realized, so I stopped changing into work clothes and instead put on workout clothes, realizing I was more in the mood to take out some frustrations that I’d been keeping locked up. First things first, however. I hit the call button on my wristcom.

Bim Marshall.”

Sir,” my scout liaison answered.

Report to the Marine gym in ten minutes prepared to report on the disposition of the scout module negotiations.”

Sir, I can’t get there in ten minutes. I’m dirtside.”

Get to a secure location and establish a secure connection, and ping me when it’s done.”

Aye aye, sir.”

Josefeen’s capsule reached the Intel pod, and the door opened. «You’ll need to get him right in front of you if you want to see what he’s thinking.» Then she entered the pod, and it was like she’d disappeared. I no longer had any sense of her presence.

«Are you still there?» No response. The Intel pod was psi-shielded. In a way it was a relief. I didn’t want her in my head while I was showering or vice versa.

I called up the Marine Gym and requested the floor officer to clear one of the combat bots for me. I then left my quarters and proceeded to the Marine Gym. I commed ahead to the officer of the deck, so they wouldn’t be too surprised when I showed up. Training bot or live sparring partner, it didn’t really matter. Although the ship’s combat master would need to verify my ranking. No doubt, I'd lapsed in some areas with my long voyage out of the Extents. I needed to make up for lost training, but I also wanted to make up for missing my previous appointment. The whole “Captain No-Show” nickname still grated on me, and I needed to dispel it before it stuck.

The ship was emptier than the last time I was walking around, given that I had released so many for the ceremony. I liked busy ships, but I also liked these times when I had a corridor to myself, and didn’t have to worry about correct courtesy or the eager ensign with a problem and solution. Hence, I wasn’t surprised when I got a capsule to myself, and as it headed aftward, my wristcom pinged. It was Bim.



Conrad Rader

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"Report on your progress, please."

I knew I had seen some incriminating thoughts in Karneticky's head around the pod deal, but I still needed to fairly evaluate Bim on his choices and use of my authority to complete the assignment. It's not like I had known anything was going on until I got that (illicit, illegal, maybe even unethical) look at the admiral's thoughts. I was a realist. In the end, the Navy's accounting practices was simply one more way to keep personnel accountable for their actions. The Navy was the single largest recipient of Imperial funds and corruption, clearly, found its way in in the best of circumstances. It was all a matter of trust. If you could not trust people to look after a multi-million credit budget, could you really give them the power of life and death? Corruption probes were often the first sign of a Navy station needing a house cleaning, or a Fleet rotation. Maybe that was why Vasilyev gave me the unlimited voucher. Sector Command might just be on a tear in the aftermath of the war spending and making sure people understood that the unlimited credit days were over, at least until the next war rolled around.

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 “General Products has scheduled the severing to begin tomorrow, and I’m told the new pod will be ready for installation shortly after they’ve taken the old one.”



Conrad Rader

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"And the staffing?"

Josafeen was right, I wasn't getting anything psychic over the com. Oh well, it can't all be easily bending people to my will.

I listened as Bim described the staffing plan he was putting together. The Navy had a certain institutional opinion of the Scout Service that, to be fair, was not entirely earned. I had once heard it described as the Navy works in space, but the Scouts live there, in squalor. Research had concluded that jump space exposure was relatively harmless, but the average scout had at least three times the hours of logged jump time compared to the average Navy spacer. That had to be an effect.

"Very good. Update the bridge on installation schedule, and tell them to expedite, we are getting ready to leave. You will run integrity checks with Engineering as the pod is secured. Plankwell out."

I shut down the connection and started focussing on my upcoming training bout. Take things as they come.

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 “General Products has scheduled the severing to begin tomorrow, and I’m told the new pod will be ready for installation shortly after they’ve taken the old one.”



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The capsule’s door opened, and a marine lieutenant saluted, having apparently caught wind of my impending arrival.

Captain, the Combat Master is ready for you. Please follow me, sir.”

I nodded my assent, and he led me down the corridor, pretty much all the way to the end and then to the left.

The Snuka Model 518 grappling drone was there in what looked like a little doghouse its charging and maintenance station and an old man, fit but too far on in years to be a serious threat on the mat, was dressed in wrestling gear.

Sir, CPO Kar Davidson,” he said with a brisk salute. “There’s your gear, and let me know if you need a locker.Kar was the number ten in Vilani, which meant either he was the tenth child in his family or he was named ten as symbolic of ten-out-of-ten for perfection. “Sir, may I assess your skill level?” It was the former. Like Josefeen, he grew up in a polycule, and also like her, he’d been genetically enhanced while still in a petri dish, such were the joys of Navy-sponsored human breeding programs.

(Gus’s response. By the way, I’m assuming a chief petty officer can be a combat master, but if you think this is an error or that the Marine Pod would have a commissioned officer in this role, let me know.)


Now, sir, with all due respect, I’m going to kick your ass, so please don’t take it personally.


Option 1: “I’ll fight the Snuka. I don’t want to hurt you.”

Option 2: “I’m looking forward to seeing you try, CPO.”

Option 3: “Call me Gus.”

Option 4: “???”


So there I was, basically getting my ass kicked by an old man. He was quick, whereas in strength we were evenly matched. (Describe some combat that is not going as well as Gus would like.) He was definitely quicker than I expected. (Describe some combat where Gus gets the upper-hand and pins the Combat Master.)

We got up from the mat. I was surprised someone of his obvious skill left me any openings, and I didn’t need to read his mind to sense he was feeling like an idiot, especially since the lieutenant was there watching along with three others, all of whom who trying, only semi-successfully I might add, to maintain a completely neutral expression.

Okay, he got me,” Kar admitted, “but that’s because I was over-confident. Never underestimate your foe, or you’re going to get what I just got: owned. Okay, let’s do this again,” he said to me, squaring off.

(Describe some combat where Gus gets the upper hand, but then the CM works his way out and gets the upper hand on Gus, and then works Gus into a position of complete submission, where the CM could rip off Gus’s balls if he wanted to.)


Option 1: “Now it’s time for the Snuka.”

Option 2: “Two out of three?”

Option 3: “???”


A woman was now there among the men, and she was in a Navy uniform, not Marine. According to (describe something about the uniform), she was the ship’s legal representative. No doubt, her presence had something to do with the HPSS and the interdiction. I decided it was time to take a break.

I walked over to her, getting a closer look. She was of moderate height, and seemed to be trembling just slightly as I approached. (Feel free to suggest some more description, if you like.)

Sir,” she said. “Captain….” Captain Plankwell! Oh, great. She was one of those Plankwell groupies, the Olav Admiration Society. I made that up, but it honestly wouldn’t have surprised me if an organization by that name actually existed. “Happy Birthday,” she said. “I mean, Happy Tomorrow Birthday. Happy Birthday tomorrow.” She wanted to smack herself.

(Gus’s response mentally/verbally/physically.)

Sir, I’m Lt. Francine Sidara.”

Nice to meet you, Lieutenant.” (Feel free to change Gus’s response.)

Sir, is there somewhere we can talk when you have a minute?”

(Gus’s response.)


One problem for Navy lawyers, and it was a huge problem, was that every world in the Imperium had its own legal code, and, indeed, every different magisterial court had its own procedures and precedents. Cases tried in a High Court could be appealed, but the grounds for appeal diminished as one ascended the legal ladder, although they did so in different ways depending on the laws and procedures of the specific Appellate Court in question. It was all a rather complex network of courts and laws, the result being a legal system so fractured that a ship’s lawyer, even for ships that had them, typically had to employ the services of a local attorney when representing their ship or crew in a local court. Likewise, they’d need a magisterial attorney for matters under the jurisdiction of a magisterial court, and these attorneys were even more expensive than the regular ones. And this was essentially what she wanted to discuss.

I’m sorry about the Happy Birthday, sir.” Shut-up already about the Happy Birthday, you idiot! Oh, Dear Cleon. She was borderline schizophrenic. “Sir, as I’m sure you know, due to the variety of different laws and court procedures in different jurisdictions, we rely heavily on local representation, so I contacted the JAG division at Plankwell Naval Base,” I can’t believe I’m talking to an actual Plankwell! “and they referred me to a local attorney, who…” who’s pessimistic about our chances — “who’s willing to meet with us to discuss the case.”

(Gus's response.)


Sorry for the slight delay, but I wanted to take my time with this one. Also, by the way, I never saw your Chapter 42 edits. Did you take a look at it? If not, see: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x6qwhU_iAkdpVfi5xZj0UqWzhbptRixg/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113687616933633107445&rtpof=true&sd=true


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On Wed, May 22, 2024 at 7:09 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:

The capsule’s door opened, and a marine lieutenant saluted, having apparently caught wind of my impending arrival.

Captain, the Combat Master is ready for you. Please follow me, sir.”

I nodded my assent, and he led me down the corridor, pretty much all the way to the end and then to the left.

[[As always, the first thing to hit me was the smell. Sweat, blood, exertion pheromones, Marines claimed to never notice but every non-Marine entering always noticed. I relished it. The sounds were next, muffled grunting and thumping, the thud of bodies hitting and the occasional 'ki-yah' shout of focussed aggression. The Navy combat gym had many of the same amenities but always seemed cleaner and not as serious.

The gym itself was compact, resistance trainers along the back wall, a combat circle with variable grav control, and three sparring salles, which were currently being used as warm up stations ]]

The Snuka Model 518 grappling drone was there in what looked like a little doghouse its charging and maintenance station and an old man, fit but too far on in years to be a serious threat on the mat, was dressed in wrestling gear.

Sir, CPO Kar Davidson,” he said with a brisk salute. “There’s your gear, and let me know if you need a locker.Kar was the number ten in Vilani, which meant either he was the tenth child in his family or he was named ten as symbolic of ten-out-of-ten for perfection. “Sir, may I assess your skill level?” It was the former. Like Josefeen, he grew up in a polycule, and also like her, he’d been genetically enhanced while still in a petri dish, such were the joys of Navy-sponsored human breeding programs.

[[The gear he indicated was a standard training outfit for hand to hand combat. Most marines fought in combat armor or battle dress and the training outfit simulated the fit and constraints of the armor to make sure that was taken into account. It also provided some light padding to help with taking the blows. I was wearing the standard workout undersuit, so I began to pull on the pieces. I knew I was being evaluated the moment my foot had passed through the door. Time to let them know I knew what I was doing.

"I appreciate you fitting me into the schedule, chief. I've had a hectic couple of days and I am starting to feel the edge come off.

The trousers went on first, then the jacket, secured by a webbing belt. Formal martial arts indicated rank by any number of indicators, but among the marines, it was based on who you were able to beat. To be a combat master required 100 successful bouts of increasing challenge. To stay a combat master required maintaining that combat effectiveness. This combat master was on the edge of retirement, but looks could be deceiving. He was, after all, still the master in this detachment.

Once I was kitted up, CPO Davidson indicated the circle with a questioning grin. I grinned back.

"Good try chief, but I need to get warmed up first. Fifteen minutes should do it"

I was rewarded with a gracious nod and some hand motions to clear one one the salles for me. I knew he was going to observe my form. I wondered if he belonged to the school of notes or the school of correction?
The sharp swap of a stick on my shoulder gave me my answer. Corrections. I focussed on my breathing and my form as I ran through a full body warmup, getting my blood pumping and waking up underused muscles. I collected two more swaps, and called it fair.

I entered the combat circle and shook myself out to get a feeling on the fit of the sparring suit. CPO Davidson entered the circle opposite and activated the circle. Sensors would monitor the combat and call out of bounds and score the moves. Combat bouts were scored on exchanges, pins, throws and holds. Other sensors monitored our vital signs and the force of blows being used. Standard training fights were half speed, half strength. Marines were among the most efficient hand to hand killers in service and the Imperium did not pay them to thin their own ranks. Attention to form, consistency and strategy were the name of this game.

(Gus’s response. By the way, I’m assuming a chief petty officer can be a combat master, but if you think this is an error or that the Marine Pod would have a commissioned officer in this role, let me know.)

Now, sir, with all due respect, I’m going to kick your ass, so please don’t take it personally.

[[We dropped in the opening stance and the computer started the match with the word "Fight"]]


Option 1: “I’ll fight the Snuka. I don’t want to hurt you.”

Option 2: “I’m looking forward to seeing you try, CPO.”

Option 3: “Call me Gus.”

Option 4: “???”


[[He was not wrong as I looked up at the ceiling of the gym from my position on my back. Davidson had exploded into motion, feinting left and dropping me with a heel hook from the right as he spun like a top on one hand. The computer awarded him a full point. He had already returned to his starting location as I rolled to my feet. There was no shame in losing to an unknown quantity, but the challenge was staying alive long enough to learn from the experience. As I dropped back into the opening stance, my mind started to race, I was opening my senses to combat, and when the computer said "Fight" I was in motion. Davidson had gone for a direct attack, and I countered by grabbing his arm as I sidestepped the abdomen thrust. I pivoted on my heel and was pulling him into a throw when he added to his speed by jumping into the throw and rolled out. I managed to slip my arm away from his grab that would have turned into a counter-throw. I took a gamble and shot out my leg backwards in a hard kick, but he had already gained his balance and blocked the kick with a sweeping hand. He came at me again while I was recovering, grabbing me around the waist and pushing me down into a pin. Now I was looking at the floor while 57 kilos of wiry old man got up off of me.

"Point: red. Reset"

The computer was programmed to penalize you if you did not recover and reset in good form, so I once again pushed myself off the mat and got into opening stance. I was pleased to see Davidson breathing a little more quickly.

"Fight"
Once more we flew towards each other. He had gone for a pin and a throw, so now he was going to pummel me. I ducked the first punch, a straight jab to my head, and blocked the reverse roundhouse as he spun in place to change his momentum. He was strong and quick, but as I felt the block, I thought I might be a little stronger. From the block, I launched an elbow into his abdomen that connected, but he was already moving back to lessen the impact. I continued my movement dropping into a roll and aiming a hard kick at his knee from the deck. He reacted like I had hoped and shifted his knee. I finished my roll into a crouch and launched my entire body at him. He was off center from having to protect his knee and took the body blow and was knocked out of the ring.

"Point: blue. Reset"

I was grinning a little more than professionalism called for and Davidson hauled himself up and back into the circle. It was not the most stylish of moves, but I would take the points I could get. I could see him re-evaluating me as he dropped into opening stance. He might let me get in another shot, but I doubted he would make it easy.

"Fight."

He started some footwork and moving about the circle, hands held loosely in front, always in motion. He was giving me the attack, and I responded by starting to mirror him. He wanted me to attack, so I wanted to deny him his plan. We danced like this for about ten seconds before the computer buzzed us; engage or lose points. He had been waiting for the buzzer and moved in with some punch combinations. I was moved back, blocking and dodging, but I took a couple of hits to my arms and shoulders. I was good enough to counter most of his punches, but the uppercut-bodyblow combo made it through and once again I was on my back looking at the ceiling.

"Point: red. Warning, excess force use, noted quarter point deduction. Reset"

So that was something. He took me down, but had to go a little harder than sparring regs to do it. Being knocked out of the ring must not happen to him very often. I could use that.

"Fight"

I repeated my opening move from when I had pushed hmi out of the ring, a little different because he wasn't swinging at me this time, but I closed the distance and got a hold on an arm, preparing for a throw. I think he let me get a hold because as I moved into the throw, I felt him grabbing me, and trying to counter throw. We rolled together, each keeping the grip on the other. I focussed my grip, squeezing hard, and hoping to trigger a pain point to release the grip, but it wasn't working. We were on our knees, straining for domination, and then he did something like folding into the clinch and ended up on his back, which was typically a pin, but in this case he had me in a leg lock and his other arm was at my throat as I lay on top of him.

"Half point; red, quarter point; blue. Match concluded."

We both got out of the hold and stood and faced each other. I nodded my head and stuck out my hand "Good match chief."

I was rewarded with an impish little grin and he caught my hand in his very firm grip. "Aye aye, sir. It's been a few jumps since I got ringed out."


So there I was, basically getting my ass kicked by an old man. He was quick, whereas in strength we were evenly matched. (Describe some combat that is not going as well as Gus would like.) He was definitely quicker than I expected. (Describe some combat where Gus gets the upper-hand and pins the Combat Master.)

We got up from the mat. I was surprised someone of his obvious skill left me any openings, and I didn’t need to read his mind to sense he was feeling like an idiot, especially since the lieutenant was there watching along with three others, all of whom who trying, only semi-successfully I might add, to maintain a completely neutral expression.

Okay, he got me,” Kar admitted, “but that’s because I was over-confident. Never underestimate your foe, or you’re going to get what I just got: owned. Okay, let’s do this again,” he said to me, squaring off.

(Describe some combat where Gus gets the upper hand, but then the CM works his way out and gets the upper hand on Gus, and then works Gus into a position of complete submission, where the CM could rip off Gus’s balls if he wanted to.)


Option 1: “Now it’s time for the Snuka.”

Option 2: “Two out of three?”

Option 3: “???”

[['' Now that I got your measure, get back in there with the Snuka, and show me what you can handle at level 8"

There was a brief murmur from the crowd that had gathered to watch me. Level 8 was challenging, but if the ship Combat Master gave it to the me after one bout, well, the rest of them were now more interested. I nodded and got back in the ring as the Snuka powered up and unfolded from its storage kennel.

Two minutes later, I had scored twice on the Snuka and been given a rather furious drubbing, and I was picking myself up off the deck, and Davidson was telling me to take ten before we went on to the next evaluation.


A woman was now there among the men, and she was in a Navy uniform, not Marine. According to [[the two starbursts and the throne insigina on her collar]] , she was the ship’s legal representative. No doubt, her presence had something to do with the HPSS and the interdiction. I decided it was time to take a break.

I walked over to her, getting a closer look. She was of moderate height, and seemed to be trembling just slightly as I approached. (Feel free to suggest some more description, if you like.)

Sir,” she said. “Captain….” Captain Plankwell! Oh, great. She was one of those Plankwell groupies, the Olav Admiration Society. I made that up, but it honestly wouldn’t have surprised me if an organization by that name actually existed. “Happy Birthday,” she said. “I mean, Happy Tomorrow Birthday. Happy Birthday tomorrow.” She wanted to smack herself.


[["Thank you Lieutenant." I kept my answer brief, and focused on her, hoping she would come to the point. I could not help it, I also reached out a likke with my brain, hoping to get an inkling of what was going on behind the hero worship routine.

(Gus’s response mentally/verbally/physically.)

Sir, I’m Lt. Francine Sidara.”

Yes?"

Sir, is there somewhere we can talk when you have a minute?”

[["Is this something urgent or is there an issue with making an appointment through the regular channels?"]]


One problem for Navy lawyers, and it was a huge problem, was that every world in the Imperium had its own legal code, and, indeed, every different magisterial court had its own procedures and precedents. Cases tried in a High Court could be appealed, but the grounds for appeal diminished as one ascended the legal ladder, although they did so in different ways depending on the laws and procedures of the specific Appellate Court in question. It was all a rather complex network of courts and laws, the result being a legal system so fractured that a ship’s lawyer, even for ships that had them, typically had to employ the services of a local attorney when representing their ship or crew in a local court. Likewise, they’d need a magisterial attorney for matters under the jurisdiction of a magisterial court, and these attorneys were even more expensive than the regular ones. And this was essentially what she wanted to discuss.

I’m sorry about the Happy Birthday, sir.” Shut-up already about the Happy Birthday, you idiot! Oh, Dear Cleon. She was borderline schizophrenic. “Sir, as I’m sure you know, due to the variety of different laws and court procedures in different jurisdictions, we rely heavily on local representation, so I contacted the JAG division at Plankwell Naval Base,” I can’t believe I’m talking to an actual Plankwell! “and they referred me to a local attorney, who…” who’s pessimistic about our chances — “who’s willing to meet with us to discuss the case.”


[["Ah. I suspected as much. Well, Lieutenant, I would be happy to meet with you to discuss what you see as our legal strategies and retaining local representation. Please submit a request into the scheduling queue and I will be sure to give it a high priority. Now, if you will excuse me, the chief is evaluating my combat effectiveness, and his is looking extremely gleeful about the combat stick he is holding. I appreciate you birthday wishes and will be sure to give your concern the appropriate attention at the appropriate time. Dismissed."

(Gus's response.)


Sorry for the slight delay, but I wanted to take my time with this one. Also, by the way, I never saw your Chapter 42 edits. Did you take a look at it? If not, see: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x6qwhU_iAkdpVfi5xZj0UqWzhbptRixg/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=113687616933633107445&rtpof=true&sd=true


And PLEASE REMEMBER to change "EDITING" to "SUGGESTING" (near the upper right-hand corner) before doing any edits.


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OOC: This is excellent writing on your part. Will use most of it as is, although I had to change the description of the gym itself in order to get it to conform to the layout shown on the Marine Pod's deckplans.

 “Ah. I suspected as much. Well, Lieutenant, I would be happy to meet with you to discuss what you see as our legal strategies and retaining local representation. Please submit a request into the scheduling queue, and I will be sure to give it a high priority. Now, if you will excuse me, the Chief is evaluating my combat effectiveness, and he is looking extremely gleeful about the combat stick he is holding. I appreciate your birthday wishes and will be sure to give your concern the appropriate attention at the appropriate time. Dismissed.”

Aye aye, sir.”

Dejected and feeling like even more of an idiot, she saluted and quickly made her exit.


(What does Gus want to do now?)








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Here's the full update. Also, I'd be curious to know if you prefer the style of the long form update I did on 22nd, where I'm trying to move things forward and giving decision options along the way, or the short form updates I usually do, where I stop at the first point of decision.


As always, the first thing to hit me was the smell: sweat, blood, exertion pheromones. I relished it. The sounds were next, muffled grunting and thumping, the thud of bodies hitting and the occasional shout of focused aggression. Navy combat gyms had many of the same amenities but never seemed quite as serious.

Resistance trainers lined the front and back walls. Free weights were situated along the sides. In the center were four squares, each with variable gravity controls. The Snuka Model 518 grappling drone was there in its charging and maintenance kennel, and an old man, fit but too far on in years to be a serious threat on the mat, was dressed in wrestling gear.

Sir, CPO Kar Davidson,” he said with a brisk salute. “There’s your gear, and let me know if you need a locker.” Kar was the number ten in Vilani, which meant either he was the tenth child in his family or he was named ten as symbolic of ten-out-of-ten for perfection. “Sir, may I assess your skill level?” It was the former. Like Josefeen, he grew up in a polycule, and also like her, he’d been genetically enhanced while still in a petri dish, such were the joys of Navy-sponsored human breeding programs.

The gear he indicated was a standard training outfit for hand-to-hand combat. Most marines fought in combat armor or battle dress, and the training outfits simulated the fit and constraints of the armor to make sure that was taken into account. They also provided some light padding to help take the blows. I was already wearing the standard workout undersuit, so I began to pull on the pieces. I knew I was being evaluated the moment my foot had passed through the door. Time to let them know I knew what I was doing.

I appreciate you fitting me into the schedule, Chief. I’ve had a hectic couple of days and am starting to feel the edge come off.”

The trousers went on first, then the jacket, secured by a webbing belt. Formal martial arts indicated rank by any number of indicators, but among the marines, it was based on who you were able to beat. To be a combat master required a very high ranking. This guy was on the edge of retirement, but looks could be deceiving. He was, after all, still the master in this detachment.

Once I was kitted up, CPO Davidson indicated the combat square with a questioning grin. I grinned back.

Good try, Chief, but I need to get warmed up first. Fifteen minutes should do it.”

I was rewarded with a gracious nod and some hand motions to clear one one the other squares for me. I knew he was going to observe my form and wondered if he belonged to the school of notes or the school of correction. The sharp swap of a stick on my shoulder gave me my answer. Corrections. I focused on my breathing and my form as I ran through a full body warm-up, getting my blood pumping and waking up underused muscles. I collected two more swaps and called it fair.

I entered the combat square and shook myself out to get a feeling on the fit of the sparring suit. CPO Davidson entered the opposite side and activated the scoring computer. Sensors would monitor the combat and call out of bounds and score the moves. Combat bouts were scored on exchanges, pins, throws and holds. Other sensors monitored our vital signs and the force of blows being used. Standard training fights were to be conducted at three-quarters strength. Marines were among the most efficient hand to hand killers in service, and the Imperium did not pay them to thin their own ranks. Attention to form, consistency and strategy were the name of this game.

Now, sir, with all due respect, I’m going to kick your ass, so please don’t take it personally.”

I’m looking forward to seeing you try, CPO.”

We each dropped into our opening stance, and the computer started the match with the word “Fight.”

He was not wrong, I soon realized, as I looked up at the ceiling of the gym from my position on my back. Davidson had exploded into motion, feinting left and dropping me with a heel hook from the right as he spun like a top on one hand. The computer awarded him a full point. He had already returned to his starting location as I rolled to my feet.

There was no shame in losing to an unknown quantity, but the challenge was staying alive long enough to learn from the experience. As I dropped back into the opening stance, my mind started to race, I was opening my senses to combat, and as soon as the computer again said “Fight,” I leapt into motion.

Davidson had gone for a direct attack, and I countered by grabbing his arm as I sidestepped the abdomen thrust. I pivoted on my heel and was pulling him into a throw when he added to his speed by jumping into the throw and rolled out. I managed to slip my arm away from his grab that would have turned into a counter-throw. I took a gamble and shot out my leg backwards in a hard kick, but he had already gained his balance and blocked the kick with a sweeping hand. He came at me again while I was recovering, grabbing me around the waist and pushing me down into a pin. Now I was looking at the floor while this wiry old man got off me.

Point: red. Reset.”

The computer was programmed to penalize you if you did not recover and reset in good form, so I once again pushed myself off the mat and got into opening stance. I was pleased to see Davidson breathing a little more quickly.

Fight.”

Once more we flew towards each other. He’d already gone for a pin and a throw, so now he was going to pummel me. I ducked the first punch, a straight jab to my head, and blocked the reverse roundhouse as he spun in place to change his momentum. He was strong and quick, but as I felt the block, I thought I might be a little stronger. From the block, I launched an elbow into his abdomen that connected, but he was already moving back to lessen the impact. I continued my movement, dropping into a roll and aiming a hard kick at his knee from the deck. He reacted like I had hoped and shifted his knee. I finished my roll into a crouch and launched my entire body at him. He was off center from having to protect his knee and so took the body blow and was knocked out of bounds.

Point: blue. Reset.”

I was grinning a little more than professionalism called for as Davidson hauled himself up and back into the square. It was not the most stylish of moves, but I would take what points I could get. I could see him re-evaluating me as he dropped into his opening stance. He might let me get in another shot, but I doubted he would make it easy.

Fight.”

He started some footwork and moved about the square, hands held loosely in front, always in motion. He was giving me the attack, and I responded by starting to mirror him. He wanted me to attack, so I wanted to deny him his plan. We danced like this for about ten seconds before the computer buzzed us; engage or lose points. He had been waiting for the buzzer and moved in with some punch combinations. I was moved back, blocking and dodging, but I took a couple of hits to my arms and shoulders. I was good enough to counter most of his punches, but the uppercut-bodyblow combo made it through, and once again I was on my back looking at the ceiling.

Point: red. Warning, excess force use noted. Quarter-point deduction. Reset.”

So that was something. He took me down, but had to go a little harder than sparring regs to do it. Being knocked out of bounds must not happen to him very often. I could use that.

Fight.”

I repeated my opening move from when I had pushed him out of bounds. It was a little different because he wasn’t swinging at me this time, but I closed the distance and got a hold on an arm, preparing for a throw. I think he let me get a hold because as I moved into the throw, I felt him grabbing me, and trying to counter throw. We rolled together, each keeping our grip on the other. I focused my grip, squeezing hard and hoping to trigger a pain point to force a release, but it didn’t work. We were on our knees, straining for domination, and then he did something like folding into the clinch and ended up on his back, which was typically a pin, but in this case he had me in a leg lock, and his other arm was at my throat as I lay on top of him.

Half point: red. Quarter point: blue. Match concluded.”

We both got out of the hold and stood and faced each other. I nodded my head and stuck out my hand. “Good match, Chief.”

I was rewarded with an impish grin and he caught my hand in his very firm grip. “Aye aye, sir. It’s been a few jumps since I got bumped out. Now that I got your measure, get back in there with the Snuka, and show me what you can handle at level eight.”

There was a brief murmur from the crowd that had gathered to watch. Level eight was challenging, but if the ship Combat Master gave it to the me after one bout, well, the rest of them were now more interested. I nodded and got back in the square as the Snuka powered up and unfolded from its kennel.

Over the next few minutes, I scored twice on the Snuka but was also given a rather furious drubbing. As I picked myself up off the deck, I noticed a woman was now there among the men, and she was in a Navy uniform, not Marine. According to the two starbursts and the throne insignia on her collar, she was the ship’s legal representative. No doubt, her presence had something to do with the HPSS and the interdiction. I decided it was time to take a break.

I walked over to her, getting a closer look. She was of moderate height, and seemed to be trembling just slightly as I approached.

Sir,” she said. “Captain….” Captain Plankwell! Oh, great. She was one of those Plankwell groupies, the Olav Admiration Society. I made that up, but it honestly wouldn’t have surprised me if an organization by that name actually existed. “Happy Birthday,” she said. “I mean, Happy Tomorrow Birthday. Happy Birthday tomorrow.” She wanted to smack herself. This was embarrassing, and not just for her.

Thank you Lieutenant.” I kept my answer brief, and focused on her, hoping she would come to the point. I also reached out telepathically, hoping to get an inkling of what was going on behind the hero worship routine.

Sir, I’m Lt. Francine Sidara.”

Yes?”

Sir, is there somewhere we can talk when you have a minute?”

Is this something urgent or is there an issue with making an appointment through the regular channels?”

She’d debated with herself whether to seek me out or simply schedule an appointment, but when she heard through the bridge that I intended to postpone the ship’s repairs and leave Jewell in three days, she decided on the direct approach. After all, if we were only going to be in port a few more days, time was of the essence.

One problem for Navy lawyers, however, was that every world in the Imperium had its own legal code, and, indeed, every different magisterial court had its own procedures and precedents. Cases tried in a High Court could be appealed, but the grounds for appeal diminished as one ascended the legal ladder, although they did so in different ways depending on the laws and procedures of the specific Appellate Court in question. It was all a rather complex network of courts and laws, the result being a legal system so fractured that a ship’s lawyer, even for ships that had them, typically had to employ the services of a local attorney when representing their ship or crew in a local court. Likewise, they’d need a magisterial attorney for matters under the jurisdiction of a magisterial court, and these attorneys were even more expensive than the regular ones. And this was essentially what she wanted to discuss.

I’m sorry, Sir, but it is pressing if we are to go into the Magisterial Court, and I’m sorry about the Happy Birthday, sir.” Shut-up already about the Happy Birthday, you idiot! Oh, Dear Cleon. She was borderline schizophrenic. “Sir, as I’m sure you know, due to the variety of different laws and court procedures in different jurisdictions, we rely heavily on local representation, so I contacted the JAG division at Plankwell Naval Base,” — I can’t believe my Captain is an actual Plankwell! — “and they referred me to a local attorney, who…” — who’s pessimistic about our chances — “who’s willing to meet with us to discuss the case.”

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"Lieutenant."

She stopped and turned to look at me.

"It was a good call to come check with me in person given the chaos of the past couple of days and our impending departure plans. I meant what I said, I will be happy to fit you in at a high priority. Thank you for alerting me to the situation, and be sure you get the schedule request on the roster. As you were, unless you'd like to see me pummelled some more."

Davidson tapped the stick on the deck, I may be the captain, but his time was valuable too. I turned back into the combat circles and took the stick that was offered to me. The ARM-01 Marine combat stick was a basic training tool for close quarters combat, and also came into play in non-lethal combat situations like crowd control, or protective details. It had the weight and balance profile of the common marine long arm the gauss rifle, the Marines never missed an opportunity to cross train and while they would rather you didn't use a gauss rifle as a cudgel, they trained for all eventualities. That meant the combat stick balance point was not centered but about three quarters of the length. There was a metal core to the stick to give it the right weight profile and the core was sheathed in piezoplas, a variable density polymer that could be adjusted by twisting the grip. Softer for non lethal applications and training, harder for when you meant business. The piezoplas could also be electrically charged to use as a stunstick, a little more refined than the stun gun that had taken me out on the planet.

I was much rustier on my stick fighting, so this was going to be giving the Marines their due. The Navy tended to use the combat stick for boarding actions when high value targets were to be taken alive. Most ships I had served on used marines as the boarding parties, but it behooved the Navy to at least know how to use a stick and keep out of the way of the professionals.

Davidson to his credit scaled down his attacks to my skill level as soon as he saw me struggling. I was a boxer and a brawler, and using a weapon was a little taxing. It wasn't like flying a fighter where I could program the inputs to respond to my reflex responses, I had to move the stick. After the third fall, Davidson gave me an adequate score and suggested I take a break before they did the physical stress test and endurance testing.

[[OOC: I did like the multiple choice style but I worry that it would involve a lot more re-writing if one of us decided that the direction would be changing early in the narrative. Now that I am back in the swing of responding, the write to choice point works as well. SO do whatever you find comfortable for the scenes we are working through, I think each style has its advantages and we should use whatever is appropriate in the moment]]

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Dejected and feeling like even more of an idiot, she saluted and began to leave.

Lieutenant.”

She stopped and turned back.

It was a good call to come check with me in person given the chaos of the past couple of days and our impending departure plans. I meant what I said. I will be happy to fit you in at a high priority. Thank you for alerting me to the situation, and be sure you get the schedule request on the roster. As you were, unless you’d like to see me pummeled some more.”

Her cheeks flushed as she struggled to think of a witty retort, but nothing came to mind. The truth was, she didn’t understand why I was in a gym training for physical combat when, in her assessment, the upcoming battle wouldn’t be physical but rather legal and possibly political. On top of that, she desperately needed to brush up on magisterial court procedure, just in case.

I need to get to work, sir. I’ll make the request.”

There was a sharp noise behind me, metal tapping against metal, and I turned to look. Davidson was tapping the deck with an ARM-01XE Combat Baton, also called a shock baton or stunstick, since it could be electrified with a twist of the grip. I knew from past experience that this particular model could also be extended or retracted, making it a concealable weapon.

The Marines, of course, were perfectly comfortable using their gauss rifles as cudgels, or anything else for that matter, but stunsticks were generally the preferred weapon for non-lethal, close quarters combat, at least against unarmored opponents. And they were known to come in fairly handy in dark alleys as well as the occasional barroom brawl.


[Sorry about the heavy editing on this one, but I didn’t see there being much value to variable hardness. I’m thinking that while variable hardness would be a neat thing to have (it would disperse the force of impact over a larger area, thus effectively blunting the blow), it would be nearly as effective to simply pull one’s punches, aim judiciously, or employ electric shock when trying to incapacitate without injury. Furthermore, I didn’t find any mention of variable hardness batons on the TravellerWiki, although I did find mention of Shock Batons (https://wiki.travellerrpg.com/Electroshock_Weapon). If you’re aware of any references to variable-hardness batons in the Traveller literature, please let me know. In any case, in lieu of the variable hardness, I decided to make them retractable and thus concealable, which I think is a fair trade, although given Jewell’s law level, they’d be banned in public places under civilian control.]


As I donned some additional armor, I couldn’t help but reflect on how rusty my baton fighting had become. The Navy tended to use stunsticks for boarding actions when high value targets were to be taken alive. Most of the ships I’d served on, however, used marines as their boarding parties, so while a lot of Navy personnel were competent, particularly boarding officers, it was the Marines who were the true professionals.

Davidson scaled down his attacks to my skill level as soon as he saw me struggling. I was a boxer and a brawler, so using a stunstick was a little taxing. It wasn't like flying a fighter where I could program the inputs to match my natural reflexes. I had to move the stick as well as my body, blocking, swinging, jabbing and deflecting, all while taking hits. After my third fall, Davidson suggested I take a break.

Next up are your physical stress and endurance assessments, but only if you have the time.”



Conrad Rader

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[[OOC: No worries on the editing, sometimes it works, sometimes it don't, will save for my own uses somewhere else, I had thought about the retractable nature too, and I am fine going with a variable length weapon as well]]

I looked up from my position on the deck.

"If you think that's enough to go from Captain No-Show to Captain Can Take a Punch, we can catch up with the rest after we jump out."

Davidson had the look of aplomb down pat, but I saw the slight crease of the laugh lines around his eyes, but only because I was looking for it, and I had my psychic nose attuned to his smothered emotional response.

"Aye sir, that you can", and he reached out his hand to help me up from the deck.

As I stood, the rest of the crowd watching had returned to their own training routines. I felt better than I had in a while. Exercise really did release those endorphins.

"Sadly, I must return to the chains of Navy bureaucracy and conquer the paperwork, and there's a guest dinner as well. Thanks for the workout Chief, I'll be interested in who you pair me up with for sparring practice."

Combat Masters also ran the ship-wide training cycles that matched combatants of equal skill but differing styles. Low stakes betting on likely match ups was one of the many ways Navy and Marines found common activities during the long downtimes in jump. Not all Navy personnel participated, but the Marines treated the ones who did like little brothers and sisters, spending time with them training and sharing the wisdom of combat. The competition in the other combat modes was slightly more even, especially with the Marines who were assigned gunnery duty. Navy gunners took these under their wing just like the Marines did to the close combat Navy personnel.

I stripped off the training armor and over suit, down to my sweat soaked under-suit and made my way to the fresher stalls. Stripping down, I stuffed the under-suit into the cleaner and myself into the sonic cleanser and turned the strength up. The waves massaged my aching muscles. There was the spray of lukewarm cleaning fluid, followed by the dryer fans. After five minutes, I was feeling good, my under-suit was dry and clean. I dressed and headed back to my cabin to change and see what the latest developments were and how big my queue had gotten.

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