Chapter 54

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Jim Vassilakos

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 “Well, I don’t have any cadet stories,” Kosy said, “but I do have one from my first year of residency.”

I hope it doesn’t involve medical malpractice,” Maz replied.

Oh, only if a fellow intern impersonating a corpse qualifies as malpractice. I swear, I’ve never jumped so far in my life.”

As she began going into the details, I focused on Maz’s eyes while he looked at her diagonally across the dinner table. Sitting as I was, at the head of the table, it wasn’t at all difficult reaching out with my psionic tendril while his attention was on her.

At first, there was resistance, like I was bumping into an invisible barrier, but then his curtain opened. Josefeen was rubbing her ankle against his, playing footsies, in effect, beneath the table.

«What are you doing after this is over?» I could sense her telepathically asking.

«I thought you were angry with me,» Maz replied.

«Anger is like zinc,» she shot back, ever the flirt.

Distraction, indeed.

With his attention divided between Josefeen and Kosy, I was able to tiptoe right into his mind, and as with Reggie’s, once I was inside, a vast network of connections stretched before me. It was like a spider’s web, each strand I touched yielding a memory. But where to focus? I glided my psychic tendril one strand to the next, procuring flashes in my own mind, mostly images of people and fish.

«There’s something I don’t understand,» Maz was sending to Josefeen.

«There’s a lot you don’t understand.»

«Why is it that I wasn’t able to get into your Captain’s mind, when at the reception, I had no problem?»

«His skullcap was on the fritz.»

A skullcap was a subdermal psi-shield, basically what that lawyer had. She’d anticipated his question and so had her answer ready to deliver without a moment’s hesitation, and I could even sense that he believed her. But I was still rather annoyed. Here I’d thought I could trust Maz to shield us from psions during that reception, never imagining that he himself was one. It made me want to rip out a few of his neural connections, like I’d done to Reggie, but I stuffed that errant thought back where it belonged, imagining how bad it would look if the SPA Director face-planted on the table.

Therefore, I remained careful and perhaps even stealthy as I brushed my psionic tendril across more of his neural threads, each time eliciting additional memories, until I found one that interested me: a sign that read “Doggy Style”. It was that vargr nightclub, the one that burned down.

But what was it doing here?

In the memory, he was walking into the club and asking to speak with someone named Lerza.

Let me get this straight,” Maz said once they were alone. “You actually think you can blackmail me with this garbage?”

Lerza was a vargr of rather impressive girth. He owned the club, and they were in his office, a smoke-filled room where he’d sexually assaulted countless of his dancers, a fact Maz knew because he was inside Lerza’s mind, just as I was inside his.

Blackmail’s a strong word,” Lerza replied with a toothy grin. “Think of it instead as you rub my belly, and I’ll rub yours.”

No offense, but I don’t need a belly-rub. Whatever Vardok told you is rubbish.” That was a bold-faced lie, but Lerza wasn’t telepath or any other sort of psion so far as Maz could tell.

So then you didn’t ask him to procure a kilo Psychobenethal?”

I have no idea what that is. Whatever he told you, I’m sure he was probably drunk at the time.”

I’m sure, then, you won’t mind me passing this information along to the proper authorities.”

I could care less.” Maz shrugged, inwardly terrified.

Psychobenethal, after all, was a known psionic performance enhancer, one that had been produced long before the Suppressions, and as with most old inventions, the patent containing its formula had fallen into the public domain. Furthermore, although it couldn’t be made with common substances, there were plenty of worlds where those substances existed in great enough quantities that its manufacture was difficult to control. In any case, Maz had been fishing around for a new source, which was how he’d located Vardok in the first place.

Does the Starport Governor know you are a psion, trading in psi-enhancing chemicals?”

Utterly false and defamatory. I’ll sue and destroy you, if you try to spread such slander.”

 “Wouldn’t it be easier for you to just do me a favor?”

Favor?”

All I want is for the HPSS to get off my back.”

Apparently, the police had been charging Lerza protection money ever since his business had fallen under joint Imperial/local jurisdiction. The beat cops initially told him he could continue with the gambling and prostitution, but he’d have to pay them to look the other way. Since then, however, they’d kept raising their take. Unfortunately for him, Maz had no control over the HPSS, and as High Port Director, he had no business going to the Starport Governor to ask him to intervene in some minor dirtside corruption. If he did, it would only lead Lerza to assume that Vardok was telling the truth, which stupid, drunk vargrs had the tendency to do.

The most that Maz could do for himself would be to buy some time. According to what he’d seen in Lerza’s mind, there was a recording of Vardok shooting off his mouth, which was sitting on a local data cell just down the hallway behind a locked door. Lerza didn’t back up the data offsite, because that would make all the prostitution and so forth open to hackers, especially those working for the government. So all Maz had to do was to find someone willing to go into that room and destroy the data storage unit. Then he’d deal with Vardok.

Look,” Maz said. “What Vardok said to you… he’s either mistaken, or he’s lying. I don’t know which. But for the sake of not having to deal with you, I’ll see if I can pull any strings. But I’ll need some time.”

That’s all I’m asking,” Lerza said.

Maz, finally noticing my unblinking gaze, turned to look at me, and as per Josefeen’s instructions, I immediately closed my psychic curtain and rubbed my eyes, severing the telepathic link. Josefeen’s gaze met mine as I looked up again, and she gave me a quick wink, Maz grinning from ear to ear as though amused by whatever telepathic conversation they were presently having.

Are you fascinated by my aide, Maz?” I asked.

Fascinated?”

I’m sorry, but I have first claim on her. Forbidden to transfer off the ship too.”

The Captain is very protective of me,” Josefeen said, “as I am of him.”

Well, I do wish someone would be protective of me,” Maz said.

I’ll be your protector,” Kosy said with a grin. “Stop picking on him, you two.”

I smiled or at least tried to. Onneri, meanwhile, glanced around the table with a smile that looked about as genuine as my own.

So,” I said, “it appears the Countess is changing up unit assignments down below, moving the Navy out and the Army in. Any thoughts on that you’d like to share?”

Oh, that,” Maz said. “They haven’t roped you into the latest political intrigue, have they?”

They’re trying.”

Well, do your best to stay out of it. The Countess…”

He went momentarily silent as the door slid open and the steward returned with our meals.

“…she and Admiral Karneticky… their relationship is a bit… I don’t know the word I’m looking for. Let’s just say… things could be better. A lot better.”

So it’s entirely personal?” Josefeen asked.

No, no,” he shook his head as the serving robot put our plates in front of us and refreshed our drinks. “A little over a century ago and going back several centuries prior, Plankwell Naval Base was out in the desert. It was the Army and the Scouts that shared the Imperial reserve south of Heron. The reason was civic unrest, riots mostly over environmental degradation. This had been an ongoing issue for centuries, so it was deemed necessary to have the Army right on Heron’s outskirts to quell uprisings. Of course, a good portion of the population looked upon the Army as an occupying force.”

And what about now?” Kosy asked.

Nobody remembers Jewell as it used to be. All those people are dead and gone. And since the bases switched places, there have been two more invasions. The last siege lasted somewhere in the neighborhood of three years. The local fleet got a bit of black eye over that.”

The local fleet had been decisively beaten by the Zhodani’s 6th Fleet of the 1st Rank. Not only had I studied the invasion, but I’d talked to several of those who were there. For them, it was either retreat or be destroyed.

So Jewell’s population is holding a grudge?” I asked.

No, of course not. But the Navy is not quite so well regarded as it once was. However, it’s apparently cheaper to service craft with the base so close to the city.”

So then why does the Countess want to switch it back?” Josefeen asked.

He paused for a moment, perhaps thinking about that fire that his people no doubt caused when they went into the Doggy Style to destroy Lerza’s onsite computer.

There have been several incidents,” he finally said, “incidents involving Navy personnel, and likewise, the local fleet’s performance, which I already mentioned... less than stellar… but I think it’s more that Jewellians no longer fear the Imperial Army. Indeed, people have complained the Army can’t do much to protect Heron being all the way out in the desert. The Navy, by contrast, might be more effective out in the desert. The base out there is much larger, from what I understand, and there’s room for all sorts of secret projects.” He smiled. “I envy you, you know. We don’t get to have any secret projects in the Starport Authority.”

You and I could start our own secret project,” Josefeen suggested.

What sort of secret project?” Maz asked.

If I told you, then it wouldn’t be a secret, now would it?”

As Josefeen and Maz openly flirted back and forth, I started in on the main course of my meal, still pondering the state of things. This wasn’t just about the decaying relationship between the Admiral and the Countess, although that may have been the final straw. Yet rationalizing the positioning of bases and assets based on personal preferences was madness, at least in my opinion, although nobody was asking me. Except, well, they kind of did, and I kind of told them so… during a party held in my honor, no less. I tried to imagine what I’d say if it came up at my next Promotions and Review Board. Well, I hadn’t expressed anything I didn’t believe, and what little I did say was doctrinally sound, at least to the best of my knowledge, but it was impolitic to criticize the nobility, even when they were being stridently wrong. The higher up you went, the more important that became. I guess I had not fully internalized that yet, but this tour was turning into a crash course in Navy/Noble relations, with an emphasis on the crash.

How’s the soup, Maz?” I asked, still keeping my curtain tightly closed. It didn’t require great effort, but it did require some. The difficulty lay in the constancy.

Oh, I’ve certainly had worse,” he said with a smile.

He’d ordered a bowl of the Imperial Navy’s famous mushroom soup. It was an old standby that went back to the Civil War, ubiquitous to the point Navy personnel were sometimes called shroom-slurpers. Despite the derogatory nickname, however, Navy Shroom became a popular soup, and so there were numerous competing brands, each with a different blend of herbs and spices.

My own seared protein analog was quite good, along with the veg medly and mashed potuns. The doctor was focused on her green salad, and as for Onneri…

What is that you ordered there, Onneri?”

A SPIM omelette, sir."

Ah.”

SPIM stood for Specially Processed Imperial Meat, although some would say the S stood for Suspiciously. It was the cultured meat equivalent of genitalia and sphincters scraped off the slaughterhouse floor. Copious quantities of salt were added to mask the actual flavor. To each his own.

So Maz,” Josefeen said, after much discussion related to such matters as are beyond the scope of this write-up, “as much as I’d like to take you back to my quarters for discussion as to our aforementioned secret project, I’m guessing that the Captain intends to give you a tour of the ship.”

Oh, I’d like that very much,” Maz said. “The tour and the… uh… project planning. Perhaps later?”

Don’t get your hopes up.”




Conrad Rader

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((I for one am an aficionado on SoloRim SPIM, especially musubi and loco moco :))

We were finishing up the dessert course, and I noticed Onneri fidgeting. I had an idea that Nizlich had issued some instructions to the senior staff. I thought about making them go through with trying to persuade me to tour the ship and was idly curious about what excuse they would use to get me toward the fighter bays, given I had inspected them only a couple of days ago.

Josafeen beat me to the punch. Nothing got by her.

"Yes, that sounds like an excellent idea. I really like the Jacky, but my pride and joy is in Imperial fighters and as luck would have it, one of my old squadron mates is second in command. Let's head over there to get started. They might even be more interested in 'secret plans' than Josafeen here."

I was doing it again, referring to my officer's first name in casual conversation. That was new. Also suggesting to Maz that Spooky Gubar would be more amenable to "secret projects" was just me picking up where I had left off with my old seat mate. I would pay for it in some anonymous embarrassing way, but I wanted them to know that Combo had not lost all his edge when he made captain. Frankly, I was hard put to think of circumstances that were more chaotic than the last few days.

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 “A tour sounds like an excellent idea,” I said, ignoring Maz’s slumping shoulders. “Although, I really like the Jackie, the fighters will always be my pride and joy. As luck would have it, one of my old squadron mates is onboard. Let’s start the tour over there. Who knows? They might even be more interested in ‘secret plans’ than Josefeen.”

At that, Josefeen cocked an eyebrow in my general direction. No doubt, she was trying to reach out to me telepathically, probably a warning about how life was harder for pimps than for captains, but sadly, I’d already shut my psychic curtain again, so whatever snarky comment she had it mind, it would have to wait.


* * *


I’d always disliked parties. For as long as I could remember, I’d had to dress up for these big, Plankwell family gatherings, and when I say big, what I actually mean is enormous. There were enough Plankwells on Rhylanor to fill a stadium. Over time, I got to know a few of them, but most remained these odd strangers, people I’d meet, hug uncomfortably, and then never see again. As weird as it was, at least it was equally weird for everyone. Much worse were the recitals, simulations, and amateur theatricals, little incubators of Plankwell fever.

Do I have to go?” I once asked my father. That got me a stern lecture, one about duty to the Imperium and to upholding the honor of the Plankwell name.

It’s important you know where you come from,” he’d said. “People either love us or hate us.”

People hated us?

I was just a kid. What did I know about Olav beyond all the good I’d been told he’d done? But Dad was right. As I got older, I encountered people who were either jealous of me or thought of Olav as history’s greatest unsung villain.

The only reason you think you’re so important,” a classmate once sneered, “is because once upon a time some guy strangled a lady.”

Olav saved the Imperium!” I retorted, immediately shutting down his friends’ laughter. “If it wasn’t for him, you’d all be speaking Zdetl!”

Oh, please.”

Be careful what you say!”

His statement was dangerously close to lèse-majesté, for to denigrate Olav was to imply the illegitimacy of Arbellatra as well as the entire Alkhalikoi dynasty. I was thinking of reporting him, which might have earned him a demerit, but a mutual classmate intervened.

He’s was just messing with you,” she said. “Don’t make a big deal of it. It’ll make you look weak.”

Look weak? For defending my family name? But she was rather cute, so I decided to let it go. Some time later, she introduced me to the subversive literature that got me into such trouble with Dad. It explained in excruciating detail how Olav had triggered the Civil War, which in turn led to more wars, the 2nd Frontier War and the Denebian Bad War to name only two.

So I went into the Navy, which took me far from Rhylanor and all these parties, and now I was heading into my second party of the day. At the first, I’d alienated the Countess of all people, and that was before inadvertently injecting some of my pent-up rage into her daughter’s brain. What faux pas would I manage to commit at this one?

Surprise!”



PS: I like SoloRim SPIM as well, and I agree, the Hawaiians have made excellent use of it.


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Well, someone, probably several someones, had gone all out.

The fighter bay was cleared and they had built an extra tier using maintenance lifts and the plascrete panels intended for emergency shelters. The single voice belting out "Surprise" triggered off the raucous cheer from the assembled crew, and then they set off the light show. 
I squinted, was that a live band in the corner? Then the strains of "From the Dark to the Stars" the semi-official theme song of the Imperial Navy Fighter Corps rose up and, yes, they were going to do the choral performance as well. Three fighter wings worth of crew jumped in and sang the opening with enthusiasm. Everyone else waited for the chorus, which was easier.

In the cold cold space between
There we brave few are seen
Riding the torches bright and free
In front we shall always be

From the Dark to the stars
We rise
From the Dark to the stars 
We ride
From the Stars to the Dark
They fall
From the Stars to the Light
We burn

That was when Onneri nudged me and pointed with his chin to the holos being projected. Some people had very industriously located footage from my career. Both the official feeds and then some candid shots from security and other feeds. There I was, leading a boarding team, arms deep in a maintenance frame, getting my service medal for assuming command during the war, oh, there was my old fighter, and Spooky and I drinking something on shore leave. They had shots of me coming aboard, talking with Nizlich during the first inspections, oh, they even pulled the footage from the memorial. Oh, Fa'Linto had cooperated in this because that was his feed showing me giving orders with the very visible burn marks on my uniform tunic. They hadn't even bothered to scrub the ID streamer from the vid. 

I could feel a smile tugging at my lips. At the same time I was keeping my psychic curtain firmly closed and I could still feel the beating waves of emotion.

This crew was something else. They barely knew me, and already they were showing me that they saw me, and they accepted me. That meant more to me than the irritation of a surprise party. I had not expected anything on this scale. This showed resourcefulness, a certain disregard of protocol, and most of all, teamwork in pursuit of a common goal. They may have been battered, suffered a defeat, but they were rallying, and someone had used me and my reputation to accelerate that. I thought back over everything I had done since arriving on board. Yes, I felt good about this crew. 

I waited until the choral group finished and then raised my arm to call for attention. NCOs scattered through the crowd called the crew to attention. The music stopped and I could feel the tiniest vibration as the assembled crew came to attention with a cadenced step, the video had transitioned to the Imperial sunbursts of the Navy and Marines flanking my official portrait recorded when I accepted the rank of Captain before setting out here to take command.

Someone had even tagged me with a directional mic as I felt the flutter on my throat. They had left nothing to chance.

"Attention to orders. On this day, I hearby bequeath two days of reduced duty. In recognition of the extreme effort I see before me, I add an extra day.  It is to my honor that I accept this celebration, it is to your honor in creating it. At ease. I have been making my own judgement of the quality of this crew since arriving, and I have to say, I have not found you wanting in any respect. I will also thank you for not playing the Plankwell March."

A distant voice rang out "Aw sheezit, kill it from the playlist" and laughter roiled through the crowd.

I fully smiled at that. "Ah well, learning curves for everyone. I know you all expect a speech from me, and maybe you'll get one after I sample the cake. I salute you, crew of the Jaquline, my shipmates, my crew in arms. You really know how to make a captain feel welcome. Enough from me, let the party continue."

Bo'sun's commanding call to fall out and fraking enjoy yourselves put the party back into gear. I turned to Maz and said "Well, let's find the cake shall we?"



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[Nice job. That was a very complete response. Very much enjoyed it, although I did do a little bit of editing.]


From its entrance, the fighter bay seemed unusually dark, and I braced myself as we entered.

Surprise!” the darkness erupted. Indeed, it would have been if I hadn’t been expecting it. Instead of the lights coming on, there was live video of my reaction projected onto three different bulkheads — no, make that four — the crew cheering, some chants of “Olav, Olav”, and a vast assortment of happy birthdays called out, at least one of them in Gvegh, followed by a nice, long howl. I squinted, looking around, my eyes still adjusting to the dim, reflected light. Someone, probably several someones, had gone all out, as they’d cleared the fighter bay and built an extra tier using maintenance lifts and the plascrete panels intended for emergency shelters. And was that a live band in the corner?

They began playing the first strains of “From the Dark to the Stars,” the semi-official hymn of the Imperial Navy Fighter Corps. And, yes, it looked like they were going to intermix the instrumentation with a choral performance as well, as three fighter wings worth of crew began singing the opening verse. Everyone else waited for the chorus, which was easier on the vocal cords.


In the cold, cold space between

There we brave few are seen

Riding the torches bright and free

In front we shall always be


The projections of me looking completely unsurprised switched to video footage from my career, both snippets of the official feeds promotion ceremonies and such as well as more candid shots. There I was, a much younger me, graduating from the academy, then arms deep in some maintenance frame, then getting my service medal after the Battle of Sting. Oh, and there was one of my favorite fighters followed by an image of Spooky and I drinking something on shore leave. They had shots of me coming aboard, talking with Nizlich during the first inspections. Oh, and they even pulled the footage from the memorial. Fa’Linto must have cooperated in this, because there was a feed from what I could only assume to be one of his marines. I appeared to be giving orders, two little perforations on my dress uniform’s tunic, while in the background, the two HPSS officers were laying on the floor, their hands cuffed to each other’s feet in a posture that defied common decency.


From the Dark to the stars

We rise

From the Dark to the stars

We ride

From the Stars to the Dark

They fall

From the Stars to the Light

We burn


I could feel a smile tugging at my lips [or you can change this, if you like] as the projection returned to a live shot of me before transitioning to the Imperial sunbursts of the Navy and Marines, the lights finally coming on.

Maz, I noticed, was looking at me as though hoping my non-existent skullcap would malfunction once more. It was a visual reminder to keep my psychic curtain firmly in place despite the wave of surprise I’d thought I’d prepared myself for.

This crew was something else. They barely knew me, and already they were showing me that they saw and accepted me. That more than made up for the previous irritation. Indeed, how could I have expected anything on this scale? This showed resourcefulness, a certain disregard of protocol, and most of all, teamwork in pursuit of a common goal. They may have been battered and suffered a defeat, but they were rallying, and someone had used me and my reputation to accelerate that process.

As the choral group finished their closing notes, bringing the hymn to an end, I thought back over everything that had happened since arriving on board. Yes, I felt good about this crew.

I raised my arm, and the NCOs, though scattered through the crowd, called the crew to attention. Stefani, meanwhile, leaving nothing to chance, appeared out of nowhere and offered me a microphone.

Happy birthday, sir. Would you like to say a few words to the crew?”

Well done, Commander,” I said, accepting the mic. It had a little red button on the side. I pressed it.

Attention to orders,” I said, my voice magnified over the PA. “On this day, I hereby bequeath two days of reduced duty. And in recognition of the extreme effort I see before me, I add an extra day. It is to my honor that I accept this celebration. It is to your honor in creating it. At ease.”

The bay, though still silent, became noticeably more relaxed.

I have been making my own judgment of the quality of this crew since arriving,” I continued, “and I have to say, I have not found you wanting in any respect. I will also thank you for not playing the Plankwell March.”

"Aw sheezit!" a distant voice rang out. “Kill it from the playlist!” Laughter roiled through the crowd.

I fully smiled at that. “Ah, well… learning curves for everyone. I know you all expect a speech, and maybe you’ll get one after I sample the cake. I salute you, crew of the Jaqueline, my shipmates, my crew in arms. You really know how to make a captain feel welcome. Enough from me. Let the party continue.”

The bosun’s call to fall out was immediately followed by the drummer’s commanding beat, telling everyone it was time to shake a leg and get this party into gear.

Handing the microphone back to Stef, I turned to Maz and said, “Well, let’s find the cake shall we?”

This way, sir,” Stef said.

The birthday cake was a personal favorite but much larger than usual. [Feel free to describe and specify whether Gus gets a plate and/or cup (see immediately below).]

Likewise, there was a punch bowl surrounded by several empty liquor bottles, effectively advertising the recipe.


Who let the vargs out?!

Boom! Boom-Boom! Boom-Boom-Boom-Boom-Boom-Boom!


I hope I’m not off…” Maz said.

What?”

“…offending anyone by not…”

What?”

Drinking! By not drinking!”

No, of course not.” I shook my head. Stay sober so you can keep reading everyone’s mind, why don’t you? Of course, I kept my psychic curtain up while thinking this, and that was despite the pounding music reverberating off the bulkheads as well as the even greater distraction of a thousand different people wishing one happy birthday in a more or less constant succession.

Thank you,” I said, smiling and shaking hands. “Thank you.” I had no idea who any of them were, of course.

I want you to know, sir, I’m so proud to have a descendant of Olav hault-Pla…”

Thank you,” I said, pretty sure I knew the rest.

I gradually worked my way to the corner of the bay furthest from the band where the volume was slightly less oppressive. Where had Maz run off to? Oh, there he was talking to Josefeen, chatting her up and probably hoping she’d renew her invitation for them to actually do that little secret project together. I’d already had a taste of psi-sex, so I could understand his impulse.

Happy birthday, sir.” It was Bim Marshall, my scout liaison. “I want to let you know that everything is going quite well, but the new pod’s installation will take some time.”

[Maz appears to be occupied in case Gus wants to do some psi-surfing.]



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The cake was awe inspiring. Sculpted into a scale model representation of the Jaquline, there was a guide sheet explaining the various types of cake composing the whole. The forward section was my favorite kind of cake, Dentani tree nut with sweet milk frosting. I noted the allergen barriers between sections of the cake and how the frosting colors and patterns corresponded to the INS food service Saf-Eat guidelines.  It made for a rather colorful cake, but I could see it going fast. Stewards were on hand carving the cake neatly for servings.

I ended up near one of the small tables set out in the corner furthest from the band with a generous serving of cake and a cup of what the senior space hand pouring it out assured me was an entirely passable grog. A small sip ensured that I would not be finishing the rest of it, and having set it on the table, I dug into the cake, which immediately brought back memories from times gone by and cakes consumed.

I focused on Bim as he was approaching me.

The delay in the pod was throwing havoc into my schedule. Understandable havoc, but I parted the curtain a small bit and slid a tendril out to get at what he was really thinking.


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[Once again, good job.]


The bosun’s call to fall out was immediately followed by the drummer’s commanding beat, telling everyone it was time to shake a leg and get this party into gear.

Handing the microphone back to Stef, I turned to Maz and said, “Well, let’s find the cake shall we?”

This way, sir,” Stef said.

The cake was awe inspiring. Sculpted into a scale model representation of the Jaqueline, there were allergen barriers between its various sections, the color patterns of the frosting corresponding to INS food service safe-eat guidelines. They’d even projected a guide sheet on the bulkhead behind the table from where it was being served explaining the types of cakes composing each section. Apparently the forward section included dentani tree nuts with sweet milk frosting, a personal favorite.

After fielding several greetings from command staff as well as crew members I hadn’t yet met, I ended up at one of the small tables situated in the corner furthest from the band, a generous serving of the bridge on my plate and a cup of what the spacehand pouring it assured me was an entirely passable grog. A small sip ensured I would not be finishing the rest of it, at least not if I wanted to keep my wits about me.

You’re not having any?” I asked Stef as I dug into my cake.

No, sir. I don’t eat sveets.”

And no grog?”

On occasion,” she replied with a smile. “But tonight I think I vill abstain.”

Hello,” Dr. Willin said, sitting down beside us with a half-empty cup of her own. “Mission Accomplished,” she added, looking at Stef.

Obviously.”

[Is there anything Gus wants to say to the ladies?]


Where had Maz run off to? Oh, there he was talking to Josefeen, chatting her up and probably hoping she’d renew her invitation for them to undertake their little secret project. I’d already had a taste of psi-sex, so I could understand his impulse.

And there was Bim Marshall, my IISS liaison. The delay caused by the replacement of the exploration pod had shut down my hopes for any sort of near-term exit from Jewell. It was all very understandable, but I’d given him authority to act on my behalf, and now I was wondering if it was the right thing to do. Since Maz was presently occupied, I decided to risk letting my psychic curtain fall open in order to extend a telepathic tendril. Noticing my stare, Bim smiled and waved, thinking, “Captain Bim or Captain Marshall?” as he approached.

Happy birthday, sir. I want to let you know that everything is going quite well, but the new pod’s installation will take some time.”

He was telling the truth, but there was definitely something else going on in his head. Unfortunately, I had no time to get beneath the surface, as I had to respond, or the whole encounter would seem quite odd to everyone present.

[How does Gus respond, and does he keep his psi-curtain open in order to try again?]


Jim Vassilakos

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We haven't heard from you for two weeks. Are you okay? Not meaning to push if you're just busy.

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On Tue, Jul 15, 2025 at 5:41 PM Jim Vassilakos <jim.vas...@gmail.com> wrote:
[Once again, good job.]


The bosun’s call to fall out was immediately followed by the drummer’s commanding beat, telling everyone it was time to shake a leg and get this party into gear.

Handing the microphone back to Stef, I turned to Maz and said, “Well, let’s find the cake shall we?”

This way, sir,” Stef said.

The cake was awe inspiring. Sculpted into a scale model representation of the Jaqueline, there were allergen barriers between its various sections, the color patterns of the frosting corresponding to INS food service safe-eat guidelines. They’d even projected a guide sheet on the bulkhead behind the table from where it was being served explaining the types of cakes composing each section. Apparently the forward section included dentani tree nuts with sweet milk frosting, a personal favorite.

After fielding several greetings from command staff as well as crew members I hadn’t yet met, I ended up at one of the small tables situated in the corner furthest from the band, a generous serving of the bridge on my plate and a cup of what the spacehand pouring it assured me was an entirely passable grog. A small sip ensured I would not be finishing the rest of it, at least not if I wanted to keep my wits about me.

You’re not having any?” I asked Stef as I dug into my cake.

No, sir. I don’t eat sveets.”

And no grog?”

On occasion,” she replied with a smile. “But tonight I think I vill abstain.”

Hello,” Dr. Willin said, sitting down beside us with a half-empty cup of her own. “Mission Accomplished,” she added, looking at Stef.

Obviously.”

"Why do I get the feeling there was an attempt to maneuver me? Was I really so upset about the idea of a party?"
I attempted a mischievous smile that fooled absolutely no one. 

[Is there anything Gus wants to say to the ladies?]


Where had Maz run off to? Oh, there he was talking to Josefeen, chatting her up and probably hoping she’d renew her invitation for them to undertake their little secret project. I’d already had a taste of psi-sex, so I could understand his impulse.

And there was Bim Marshall, my IISS liaison. The delay caused by the replacement of the exploration pod had shut down my hopes for any sort of near-term exit from Jewell. It was all very understandable, but I’d given him authority to act on my behalf, and now I was wondering if it was the right thing to do. Since Maz was presently occupied, I decided to risk letting my psychic curtain fall open in order to extend a telepathic tendril. Noticing my stare, Bim smiled and waved, thinking, “Captain Bim or Captain Marshall?” as he approached.

Happy birthday, sir. I want to let you know that everything is going quite well, but the new pod’s installation will take some time.”

He was telling the truth, but there was definitely something else going on in his head. Unfortunately, I had no time to get beneath the surface, as I had to respond, or the whole encounter would seem quite odd to everyone present.

[How does Gus respond, and does he keep his psi-curtain open in order to try again?]

" So I am given to understand. Scout Marshall, did it occur to you to check in with me when you initiated a major refit operation that would ultimately change our readiness status and departure scheduling?
I could feel Stefani tensing up, but I kept my focus on Bim. The doctor was trying very hard to keep still and unnoticeable.
"I had an informative meeting with the Dockmaster."
Again, no time to probe him, but I loosened the psi-curtain to try and get some impressions. I really needed to figure out how to do this casually and without staring.
I waited, mostly to see how he would react, and I was puzzling over the 'captain' thought I had gotten from him. Did I give him too much authority?



[[Again, apologies for the delay, will be more disciplined going forward.]]


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no worries regarding the delay. i was actually very busy as well, so i didn't mind the break. was just getting concerned that something might have happened to you.

 “So I am given to understand,” I said. He was telling the truth, but there was definitely something else going on in his head. Unfortunately, I had no time to get beneath the surface, as I had to respond, or the whole encounter would seem quite odd to everyone present. “Scout Marshall, did it occur to you to check in with me when you initiated a major refit operation that would ultimately change our readiness status and departure scheduling?”

I could feel Stefani tensing up, but I kept my focus on Bim, and perhaps due to this, I could sense he’d rehearsed his next words in advance.

I’m sorry, sir. You’re quite right. I should have warned you about that earlier, but judging from the most recent inspection, there was never a choice. One way or another, for the safety of the ship and crew, the old pod has to be replaced. I’m sure you above all people would agree.”



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"Replaced, yes, but on a timeline I approve. I am sure that there would be questions from the Scout Service were I forced to leave you, the pod and the entire scout complement behind, due to your failure to confirm the upgrade with our revised timetable."

Scouts operating off of Navy ships was a courtesy. Our two services cooperated more than most due to the nature of our operating theaters, but I had no qualms about cutting the entire pod, should the need arise.

"While I appreciate your zeal in the attention to your duty, I fear I might have erred in extending my approval to this refit. What is the status of the crew replacement for the new pod? And why is my Chief Engineer upset about you overruling him?"

So far so good. Nizlich was tense but still. Bim was still calm, and by notching the tension up, I wanted to see what this Scout was made of. It was good to know how Scouts reacted under pressure. Generally, they could be counted upon, but they had a different institutional bias than the Navy. They sought communication, knowledge and a need to let people know things. The Navy played things close, rarely answered questions and preferred obedience over agreement. If Bim could not stand his ground with me, I would prefer to know now.

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 “Replaced, yes, but on a timeline I approve. I am sure there would be questions from the Scout Service were I forced to leave you, the pod and the entire scout complement behind due to your failure to confirm the upgrade with our revised timetable.”

I could sense my words hitting him like a punch to the gut, but to his credit, he retained full control over his composure, showing no sign of the now knotting muscles in his stomach. Instead, he nodded.

Sir,” he said, “I wouldn’t blame you one bit. I was hoping to talk to you about it at the Imperial Palace, but you’d left so quickly. By the way, sir,” he said, “I just want to say I thought the way you comported yourself at the palace was… well, it was absolutely perfect, including how you handled the apology. It was at once magnanimous, yet it also conveyed strength under professional self-restraint. In short, no one could have done better.”



Conrad Rader

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"What do you want Bim?" And I opened my senses fully to dive into his mind to see what he was doing.

This was not the first time he complimented me to try and curry favor, I was impressed with his audacity the first time, but now he was laying it on thick. 

It would not look odd as I stared at him this time as I had asked a searching question. The sounds of the party faded as all my attention zeroed in on his answer and the thoughts behind the answer. I was peripherally aware of Stefani, and I could sense something going on between Maz and Josafeen, and worried for a moment about the full unveiling, but then the images from Bim started to flow through my mind.

[that is if I make my psion skill roll ...]

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Suffice it to say, you made your psion roll (with flying colors, no less)

This wasn’t the first time he complimented me to curry favor, but while I’d initially been impressed by his audacity, now he was laying it on a bit thick.

What do you want, Bim?” I asked as I reached out with my telepathy, this time trying to fully dive into his mind.

I… uh… well, I want the same thing you want, sir.”

He wanted his own command. He wanted his own ship. It hit me as a flash of insight, like I was downloading knowledge from his subconscious and laying it out on top of my own conscious mind to be instantly understood.

 “Do as I’m telling you, Bim,” Scout Leader Ruurin had told him, “and I’ll make sure you’re on the short list for a surplus Scout Courier when you decide to retire.”

That was to be his reward for helping the IISS pull one over on the Navy. The pod we were in the process of ripping out was slated to be stripped for useful parts by General Products with the remainder to be scrapped. However, Martinsen was right. It wasn’t so damaged that it couldn’t be repaired, and so that’s what GP would end up doing. But in order to make it all work, they needed Bim to turn a blind eye to the fact that the Navy was letting go of a pod still worth, even in its current state, well over half a billion credits. Thanks to the documents that I’d given him the power to sign, as well as the IISS inspection report, the pod would be considered a near-complete loss. But with a little bit elbow grease, it would be repaired and would eventually be repurchased by the Navy at a later date. Of course, General Products wouldn't charge the Navy full price as if it were brand new. That would be unethical. The Navy would receive a small discount due to the inclusion of “refurbished components”.

In other words, everything would be done legally. Nonetheless, IISS and GP were clearly scheming behind the Navy’s back. But the upshot for Bim was that he’d end up with his own ship whenever he decided to muster out. The IISS would even service it for him. It was every scout’s dream, and here it was being offered to him on a silver platter. How could he possibly refuse?

I'll talk to GP and put pressure on them, sir, and I promise you, I'll speed things up.”


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"I doubt very much you want what I want, Bim."

I shut down my probe and closed the curtain before I could catch a stinging "What-are-you-doing?" from Josafeen.

I considered Bim in front of me with the full force of command disapproval.

"Commander Nizlich, we are going to reassess the need for Scouts on this ship. Halt the purchase of the new scout pod. Inform GP that they are to continue dismounting the one they are working on.If you receive any attitude, assure them that the captain has come across a worrying development and is taking steps to correct the issue.

"You, Scout Marshall, are the worrying development. You are dismissed from the ship, you will have to the end of the shift to clear your personal items and remove yourself. Failure to do so will result in more formal measures, including an accounting audit with the Quartermaster's Office."

I was fairly sure I was within my rights, I could dismiss anyone from the ship. Navy and Marine personnel could challenge it, but Scouts could not, serving entirely at the pleasure of the Navy. I was displeased that my attempt to develop better relations with the other service was undercut by simple greed and avarice.

I racked my brain at the other pods that would be available to replace the Scout pod. I wanted another fighter pod, but would need an assigned wing, adding to the delays as I was well away from my fleet, and it was unlikely that any wing detached from this fleet would be meeting my operational standards. A weapons pod then. And if none were available, well, there were other bases I could send forward to to check on availability.



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Bim gets shit-canned. This looks like a nice dramatic chapter ending.

Is there anything else Capt P wants to do at the party or immediately afterwards, or is he heading straight to bed? Looking for ideas for the next scene.

Also, any comments? Critiques? Gripes? Flames? Are you still having fun?


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Captain P will do a round of the party, glad handing and accepting congratulations, maybe try to find Spooky and tease her about something.
This might be a good opportunity to fast forward a bit, settling into running the ship, getting everything ready and finally getting the hell away from Jewell.
Some scenes that could be addressed, the medical checkup post tasing, meeting with Josafeen's boss and a psionic training montage (set to ELO's Evil Woman; the lyrics are startling apros pro)
Planning sessions on how to use fighters to replace the now ousted scouts..., having to go to the range to requalify on my shooting (either personal or ships' guns), or any number of command instruction simulations (aka Kobeyashi Maru) required due to my new rank. Only Naval HR is more feared than Naval Intelligence. I am open to other scenarios as well.

I realize I am the slow link at times, and I am constantly reminding myself to get on it, but I still eagerly look for updates, so yes, still having fun. I am thinking about the responsibilities of detached command and would like to start exercising out from under the gaze of the nearby Fleet and Admiral. At the same time, I am also endlessly fascinated on how much humdrum lies behind the excitement of command and the needs of a leader to do more than just be a figurehead, but to create the conditions where initiative and leadership can thrive. Doing it under arms just makes it all that more exciting. That being said, I am now wondering what I could find in the Imperial Archives on the ship relating to psion capable officers before the Suppressions. Now that Naval Intelligence has clarified the issue (ie they haven't gone away), I should be able to investigate more freely

Oh, and that frakking hologram... no, I will not condone it being aboard my ship!




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