Re: report draft rev.2 PDF Version

[Kikuta Go]

OK

I inserted appendix 3. and attached it to this e-mail(only appendix for size limitatoin.).

Please see it and change not good language usage part.

Thanks

2009/07/18 11:38 Eri Otsuka <ots...@ey-office.com>:

Mina-san,
I am sending a pdf version. Because the Word file I sent was somithing wrong with the page handling. Fortunately, the size is about 1/3 of original word file.
Anyway, Thank you for the files Katsuki-san.
Kikuta-san, Senri-san, Hato-san, if the file by my e-mail was bad one, please make pdf file and send me. i will see what was wrong and try to make it right.

Thanks, 大塚　絵理
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----- Original Message ----- From: "Eri Otsuka" <ots...@ey-office.com>
To: <katsuob...@yahoo.co.jp>; <supa...@gmail.com>; <rep...@gmail.com>; <senric...@gmail.com>
Cc: <pige...@googlegroups.com>
Sent: Wednesday, July 15, 2009 1:05 AM
Subject: report draft rev.2

Hi, Minasan,
After reading Senri-san's draft, i thought about the way of expansion. Finaly, I made 4 parts and appendix. (please see the cover sheet)

1st and 4th parts are left unchanged. (Overview and Toward the next step)

2nd part is Final Proposal. This chapter is almost same as original. I added some figures and "arrangement" section.
3rd part is the process. I added almost all the contents.

i worked hard today, but there are still many things left to be done.  So, I would like Minasan to do the rest of the work.
In this draft, I put some big red arrows on the sections to be written further. If someone fill the arrowed part, please remove them.
Katsuki-san, Could you check the design related parts of chapter 2, 3, and also add drawings to the Appendix which may be contained with design alternatives

Hato-san, Could you put your research result into the appendix and also check the material part of chapter 2 and 3?

Kikuta-san, Could you fill the user test results of Appendix and check the usertesting
part of chapter 2 and 3?

Senri-san, Could you refine my rough English?

kikuta-san again, Could you check and put the right figure numbers both in the scentences and under the figures, please?  

Any corrections, improvement, and reformation are very welcome. I haven't enough time to review my work. So sorry for my rough work.
Yoroshiku Onegai Shimasu!!


大塚　絵理
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----- Original Message ----- From: "Kikuta Go" <rep...@gmail.com>
To: <pige...@googlegroups.com>
Sent: Tuesday, July 14, 2009 12:31 PM
Subject: [pigeon09] Re: SITE PLOT MAP!!

it is a bit too hard for me, but I can do material related research and
image related making..

So if you have something for me to do, i will do it thanks.

2009/07/14 11:21 Supanut Mungrakchon <supa...@img.cs.titech.ac.jp>:

I will reply u within today na
Now I need to work on my research.
My sensei force me to do it as soon as possible.



2009/7/14 Eri Otsuka <ots...@ey-office.com>

Senri-san,
Thank you for your quick and almost perfect job!!
At a glance, I think we need to mention the process of our designing. 1.
initial idea
2. field study and its refrections
3. initial design
4. usertest and its refrections
5. discussion(mood board, scenario)
Actually, we haven't changed our first idea significantly but rather
developed things incrementary. So we don't have much to mention. But I
believe lack of the process will cause some deduction of points. This change
will affect some of the Senri-san's work, ex. place of survay result etc.
Also, I think the title of this report should be "Final Report"which means
including but not only "final design proposal"

What do you think, senri-san?
If Mina-san agree, can I ask someone to take care of this? I regret that
Kikuta-san can't do this, Hato-san, can i ask you?
By the way, The process of the finalizing this report will be followings
as 2 and 3 are discussed yesterday;
1. add "process" 2. add data from our work. pictures, drawings data from
survay and usertest, so on.
3. refine
I will do 2 (and maybe partially 1) because I won't have time to do this
job until next Tuesday.
So, Mina-san, please work on the second draft I will post by the end of
today.
Sorry for my sloppy? English.
大塚 絵理
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Eri Otsuka   EY-Office
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----- Original Message ----- From: "ql Loke" <senric...@gmail.com>
To: <pige...@googlegroups.com>
Sent: Monday, July 13, 2009 11:59 PM
Subject: [pigeon09] Re: SITE PLOT MAP!!



guys, first draft of final report is done!

and its 11.57 on my clock now! wheee just in time :D

ql

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MUNGRAKCHON, Supanut 08R12114
YSEP 2008-2009 participant
Nakajima/Saito Group
Department of Computer Science
Graduate School of Information Science and Engineering
Tokyo Institute of Technology
ムンラックション, スパナット
東京工業大学大学院
情報理工学研究科 計算工学専攻
EMAIL supa...@img.cs.titech.ac.jp

[Supanut Mungrakchon]

Hi all !!!!

Now I finish my research and many reports
so I can pay attention to a Product design report.

Please tell me again about my task.
I will hurry to do it as soon as possible.

Thanks a lots !! ^^
Love u all hahah

Regards
Hatto

2009/7/18 Kikuta Go <rep...@gmail.com>

[Eri Otsuka]

Hato-san,

レポートが終わってよかったですね。

Things I asked you is in the e-mail with subject: "report draft rev.2" sent:2009/7/15 1:05am.
This mail was not sent by the GoogleGroups because the attatched file was too big.
in it,
> Hato-san,
> Could you put your material research result into the appendix and

> also check the material part of chapter 2 and 3?

thanks!!!

[Supanut Mungrakchon]

okay I will do it finish within Monday haha
^^


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MUNGRAKCHON, Supanut 08R12114
YSEP 2008-2009 participant
Nakajima/Saito Group
Department of Computer Science
Graduate School of Information Science and Engineering
Tokyo Institute of Technology
ムンラックション, スパナット
東京工業大学大学院
情報理工学研究科 計算工学専攻
EMAIL supa...@img.cs.titech.ac.jp